----- /// Kaise akele jaa paoge tum ///------

by ~Hriday~ on October 14, 2010, 10:38:18 AM
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khaai hai kasam to duur kabhi na jaana humse tum,
meri dhadkan banke mere dil me hamesha rehna tum,
paaya hai tumhe kho ke maine ye saara jahaan aaj,
mere liye to hamesha mera jahaan banke rehna tum,

na keh sako zubaan se to aankhon se keh lena tum,
khud ko sabse chhupaake mere dil me reh lena tum,
jeete jee juda kar paayenge nahi tum ko khud se,
mar bhi main jaun agar to yaad banke reh lena tum,

isme koi shaq nahi hai ki bahut bahut bure ho tum,
par mere liye to is jahaan me sabse pyaare ho tum,
mumkin na hoga jeena mera tumse judaa hoke yahaan,
meri ragon me lahoo banke har lamha behte ho tum,

na to paas ho hamaare na hi duur humse ja paaoge tum,
humein har saans ke saath baar baar yaad aaoge tum,
baat karti ho tum is tarha apni arthi sajaane ki,
aise kaise ye duniya chhodeke akele jaa paaoge tum...


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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2010, 11:03:29 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     KAPIL JI.....

IK PAL BHI TUJHKO MERE BINA GAWARA NAHIN
JAANTE HAI HAMSE JUDAI KA TUMKO KITNA HOGA GUM
BAHUT MOHABBAT HAI TUMKO HAMSE ITNA TO BATAO
MUJHKO CHOD KAR "KAISE AKELE JAA PAOGE TUM"...
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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2010, 12:31:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2010, 12:43:01 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob mere dost..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2010, 12:48:31 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2010, 11:20:32 AM »
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bahut khoob hriday ji....
all stanza's are very beautiful
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2010, 09:50:01 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Manzil ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: November 03, 2010, 07:47:57 AM »
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Behad Khubsoorat Alfaazo Se Sajaaya hai aapne Is Qalaam Ko.. Aur Anamika ji ke Poem Ka Behad Khubsoorat Jawab Bhi diya hai aapne... Dil Se daad Hi Daad Bhai... Applause Applause



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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2010, 08:04:51 AM »
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wah bhai wah bahut mast jaawab hai....

jiyo bhaii..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2010, 10:17:12 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji...!!!

Behad Khubsoorat Alfaazo Se Sajaaya hai aapne Is Qalaam Ko.. Aur Anamika ji ke Poem Ka Behad Khubsoorat Jawab Bhi diya hai aapne... Dil Se daad Hi Daad Bhai... Applause Applause



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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2010, 10:17:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

wah bhai wah bahut mast jaawab hai....

jiyo bhaii..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2010, 05:29:30 AM »
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superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb 1 kapil........
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht hi pyara reply hai ye aapka..uss waqt iska jawab nahin de pai thi...
ab koshish ki hai ek twist dene ki ise.....dekho kaisa laga...

Kehte the dil me hamesha rahungi main
Teri dhadkan ban sang tere jiyungi main
Ban sanson ki mahek tujhme mahkungi main
Teri zindagi se na kabhi bhi jaungi main

Lekin dekho na ye kya dekh rahi hun main
Ab tere aaspaas bhi nahinhun kahin main
Dur dur tak na tu hai na hi tera saaya
Kitni akeli aur bejaan si ho gai hun main

Kareeb aaye mere itne k sabse dur ho gai main
Khush rahi itna k ab gum se chhur ho gai main
Zindagi di thi tumne mujhe kuch pal k liye hi
Dekho na ab chup chap maut ki goad me so gai main….!!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2010, 09:52:15 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya aur aapne ekdum mast likha hai...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

chaahat ko mere bewafaai ka naam deke badnaam na karo,
jo poori duniya karti hai tum aaj waisa kaam na karo,
chaaha hai maine tumhe apni zindagi se badhke jaana,
tum meri majboori ko aansuon se bhigone ka kaam na karo,

ye kaise pata ki aaj tum meri dil me dhadakti nahi ho,
ye kaise pata ki mere jism me lahoo ban behti nahi ho,
kya kabhi tumne mere dilme jhaank ke dekha ki kya hai,
dimaag ka kahaa maanti ho par dil ka kaha sunti nahi ho,

tum is qadar aansuon se apne armaano ko bhigoya na karo,
meri yaadon ko seene se lagaa ke tum kabhi roya na karo...
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«Reply #13 on: November 27, 2010, 03:48:48 AM »
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YE KOI HUMSE PUCHHE.....Akelepan ka mazaa......
Good going.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2010, 05:20:46 AM »
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bht khub Dil ji......mast mast kaha hai aapne...

han sahi kaha tumne main tumhe samjh na paai
tere dil me behta mahobbat ka dariya dekh na pai
aaj pachhta rahi hun kal ki apni buri harkat pe
teri banke bhi main kyun teri kabhi ho na pai

maaf kardo tum hume apni iss naadaani pe
k sharminda hain hum apni iss naadaani pe
karte hain pyaar tumhe hum behisaab sanam
isily apne jazbaaton pe kabu main rakh na pai

ab na royenge na tadpenge hum tumhare liye
na satayenge tumhe apni baaton se ab sanam
samjh gaye hum tumhari majburi aur pyaar ko
ab nahin karenge zamane me hamare pyaar ki ruswaai....!!!
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