kaise badhungi main jab dar mujhmein samaya hai.. charan..

by lovely_charan on December 20, 2012, 10:59:08 AM
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sab kehte hain der raat tum baahar na raha karo..
har anjaan shaqs ke saaye se bhi tum dara karo..

na jaane kaunsa jaanwar jaag jaye unke andar..
tum mehaz insaan ho, khud ko chhupa liya karo..

kahin bali ya toh jhumka aur zanjeer na pehno..
chori ka andesha hai dupatta pehan liya karo..

tum aadhunik kapdo mein na nikla karo ghar se..
aankhon mein chhupi gairat se, dhak liya karo..

agar koi kase taane tum par, jaagir samajhkar..
nazarein jhukakar apni, bas tum chup raha karo..

kaise jiyun main apne hi desh mein aise bolo..
kehte hain jeena chhodkar tum jeete raha karo..

aksar hidayatein milti hain aisi aur bhi mujhko..
kisi aur ke jhagde se tum bachkar raha karo..

kya haalat hai meri main ek beti hun hindustan ki..
galti kare haiwaan, mujhe kehte hain sambhla karo..

apne farz se chhutti pa rahe  hain sab ke sab..
aur beti ko kehte hain ki tum ghar par raha karo...

kaise badhungi main jab dar mujhmein samaya hai..
aankhon se girta aansu bhi ab ruk na paya hai..
kitni hi bebas jaane le li wehasiyon ne ab tak..
is sabhi baaton mein bhi kasoor bebas ka hi aaya hai...
   
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2012, 11:54:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khooob
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2012, 12:08:37 PM »
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Hmmmmmmm Zabardsat Creation Didi Ji ...

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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2012, 12:25:47 PM »
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Great feelings..
nice expression on burning issue ..
You have very well exploited your poetic talent..
keep it up. Applause
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2012, 12:44:32 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 20, 2012, 11:54:38 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khooob
thank you aqsh ji..
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2012, 12:45:15 PM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on December 20, 2012, 12:08:37 PM
Hmmmmmmm Zabardsat Creation Didi Ji ...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

hmm chhotu thank you very much..
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2012, 12:47:09 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 20, 2012, 12:25:47 PM
Great feelings..
nice expression on burning issue ..
You have very well exploited your poetic talent..
keep it up. Applause
thank you sir... actually this topic is really affecting my everyday's life...
i have to face and m sure every girl has to face this black side of society..
hausla afzayi ka bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2012, 12:56:49 PM »
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waah waah shaabaash betee dil jeet liyaa tumne bharat ko tum jaisee betiyon kee hee zaroorat hai  god bless you keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2012, 01:09:45 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 20, 2012, 12:56:49 PM
waah waah shaabaash betee dil jeet liyaa tumne bharat ko tum jaisee betiyon kee hee zaroorat hai  god bless you keep it up
bahut bahut shukriya sir... aaj ki tasveer yahi hai.. yahi haalat hai har ladki ki samaj mein.. ladkon ko koi nahi kehta ki kisi parayi ladki ko buri nazar se na dekhe magar ladki ko kehte hain ki dar ke seham ke chup chap raho.. really upset sir.. m really upset..sad5 sad5
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2012, 02:20:08 PM »
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Wah lovely charan ji bahot sentimental aur khubsurat poem likhi hai aapne. Aaj ki ye best poem hai. Ladkiyon ko bahot  ahtiyat ki zarurat hai khas taur par libaas, ghar se bahar jane-lautne ki timing aur friendship ke maamley me.
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2012, 02:34:43 PM »
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Quote from: Saraab on December 20, 2012, 02:20:08 PM
Wah lovely charan ji bahot sentimental aur khubsurat poem likhi hai aapne. Aaj ki ye best poem hai. Ladkiyon ko bahot  ahtiyat ki zarurat hai khas taur par libaas, ghar se bahar jane-lautne ki timing aur friendship ke maamley me.
thank you jee.. magar mera maanna hai ki ladko ko apni nazar sudhar leni chahiye...but yeh mera point of view hai..
bahut bahut shukriya apka.. ki apko meri creation pasand aayi... thank you soooo much..
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2012, 08:04:28 PM »
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Charan Jee Aadaab!


Achche aur sahiN khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne.. behad khoob khayaal kahe
haiN... aur utne hi khoob lafz rahe... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2012, 03:30:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji... bahut acha laga jaankar ki meri rachna sabko pasand aa rahi hai... thank you ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: December 21, 2012, 03:58:07 AM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on December 20, 2012, 10:59:08 AM
sab kehte hain der raat tum baahar na raha karo..
har anjaan shaqs ke saaye se bhi tum dara karo..

na jaane kaunsa jaanwar jaag jaye unke andar..
tum mehaz insaan ho, khud ko chhupa liya karo..

kahin bali ya toh jhumka aur zanjeer na pehno..
chori ka andesha hai dupatta pehan liya karo..

tum aadhunik kapdo mein na nikla karo ghar se..
aankhon mein chhupi gairat se, dhak liya karo..

agar koi kase taane tum par, jaagir samajhkar..
nazarein jhukakar apni, bas tum chup raha karo..

kaise jiyun main apne hi desh mein aise bolo..
kehte hain jeena chhodkar tum jeete raha karo..

aksar hidayatein milti hain aisi aur bhi mujhko..
kisi aur ke jhagde se tum bachkar raha karo..

kya haalat hai meri main ek beti hun hindustan ki..
galti kare haiwaan, mujhe kehte hain sambhla karo..

apne farz se chhutti pa rahe  hain sab ke sab..
aur beti ko kehte hain ki tum ghar par raha karo...

kaise badhungi main jab dar mujhmein samaya hai..
aankhon se girta aansu bhi ab ruk na paya hai..
kitni hi bebas jaane le li wehasiyon ne ab tak..
is sabhi baaton mein bhi kasoor bebas ka hi aaya hai...
   
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2012, 09:03:00 AM »
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thank you manoj ji.. Usual Smile
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