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Kal hi ki jaisi baat thi
Wo tha aur mein uske saath thi
Tha chaand ka bhi ujiyala magar
Ek tanha kaali raat bhi thi
Chaand bhi gumsum tha
Aur mein bhi chup chaap thi
Par meri har dhadkan tujhi se
Kar rahi har baat thi
Kuch to usne bhi tha kaha
Jo dil ne suni mere baat thi
Kya tha wo mera haseen sapna
Ya kal tumhi se hui mulaqat thi
Sapna tha to jaagi kyu mein?
Kitni haseen wo mulaqaat thi
Sach hai gar to waqt lauta de wo pal
Jis pal mei mein unke saath thi
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2008, 07:25:52 AM » |
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 BAHUT KHOOB AUR BEHAD PYARA KALAM... KEEP IT UP KAUSHIK, BY. K.SHAEL
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2008, 07:45:01 AM » |
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kitna haseen manzar tha woh yaro
ek taraf chala janaza mera, ek oor uske ghar aayee baraat thi
-sg-
good work bhavna
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2008, 08:06:40 AM » |
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shukriya shally
shukriyaa honey dear
shukriya sajid ji
kal jo mulaqaat fir hui unse
zindgi meri fir mehak gayi hai
jis shor ko tum shehnaai keh rahe ho
wo dil mein mere chaht ki umange uth rahi hain
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2008, 08:34:34 AM » |
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shukriya shally
shukriyaa honey dear
shukriya sajid ji
kal jo mulaqaat fir hui unse
zindgi meri fir mehak gayi hai
jis shor ko tum shehnaai keh rahe ho
wo dil mein mere chaht ki umange uth rahi hain
APNE JAZBE KO DIL ME DABA KE RAKHNA
BAAT APNI TUM SABSE CHUPA KE RAKHNA
AAJ RAAT PHIR MULAQAT HOGI TUMSE
KHUDKO CHANDNI ME SAJA KE RAKHNA |
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2008, 08:37:36 AM » |
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2008, 09:32:22 AM » |
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ghayel na naame le chaht ka tu
ho na jaayei kahi ruswaai meri
badi mushkilon se ubhri hoon dard k daur se
fir lut na jaaye har khushi meri
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2008, 09:44:10 AM » |
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ghayel na naame le chaht ka tu
ho na jaayei kahi ruswaai meri
badi mushkilon se ubhri hoon dard k daur se
fir lut na jaaye har khushi meri
APNI KHUSHI NA DE APNE DARD MERE NAM KARDE TU
JITNE ILZAM LAGAYE TUJPE DUNIYA NE WOH SARE MERE NAM KAR DE TU
BHAWNA NAHI PRATHNA HAIN YEH MERI TUJSE
ZINADAGI MUJSE MERI LEKAR APNI MAUT MERE NAM KARDE TU
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2008, 09:48:37 AM » |
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Bohat khoob likha hai bhawna dear...
Good reply sajid ji..
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2008, 09:47:46 PM » |
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Bohot Khoob Bhawna, Sajid....Good Work |
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2008, 04:40:53 AM » |
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thnk u honey ji thnk u celmira ji  |
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