~*~kalam mujhe ruthi hui hai~*~

by kaushikbhawna008 on January 22, 2009, 11:04:09 AM
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Na Jane kalam bhi saath kyu chod rahi hai
Kuch dino se lag raha hai ye mujhse ruthi hui hai

Likhna chaahu to kuch bhi likha jaata nahi
Jabki paas iske shabdo ki gadhri bhari hui hai

Mana ki meine isse har baar bas gam-e-daur hi hai likha
Par kaise likhu koi khushi, basti khushiyon ki to suni padi hai

Jab jab dukhi hua hai dil kalam ne bas saath diya hai
Jane kya khata hui hai hamse ab jo ye bhi ruthi hui hai

 Soch rahi hu ki kya kuch naya ab isse likhu
Meri zindgi to bas gamo se hi bhari hui hai[/b
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2009, 11:11:20 AM »
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Bohat Achche Kaushik Ji.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2009, 11:50:24 AM »
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kaushik bhawna ji..... bahut hi badiya likha hai aapne......


na jaane kalam bhi kyu saath chod rahi hai,
yeh kahe rahi hai,bahut mene gam ki siyai bahayi hai,
ab kuj toh,khushiyo mein mujhe bahene do.

kon kaheta hai aapke shabdo ki ghadri mein sirf hai gam,
likhna suru toh karo,khushiyon ke likhne mein saath denge ham.

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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2009, 04:23:13 AM »
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thnks a lot jaanasheen and cara

cara thanks for reply with lovely words.....
mein koshish karungi ki ab kuch naya aur kuch khushiyon bhare pal ko likh pau aur aap sab se share kar pau
thanks again
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2009, 04:36:04 AM »
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Na Jane kalam bhi saath kyu chod rahi hai
Kuch dino se lag raha hai ye mujhse ruthi hui hai

Likhna chaahu to kuch bhi likha jaata nahi
Jabki paas iske shabdo ki gadhri bhari hui hai

Mana ki meine isse har baar bas gam-e-daur hi hai likha
Par kaise likhu koi khushi, basti khushiyon ki to suni padi hai

Jab jab dukhi hua hai dil kalam ne bas saath diya hai
Jane kya khata hui hai hamse ab jo ye bhi ruthi hui hai

 Soch rahi hu ki kya kuch naya ab isse likhu
Meri zindgi to bas gamo se hi bhari hui hai[/b


Kaushik Ji , Bahut hii achha likha hai Applause

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