Kalam na uthaenge hum alfaaz e bayaan ke liye

by thegrimreaper on August 20, 2009, 03:56:03 PM
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Kalam na uthaenge hum alfaaz e bayaan ke liye
kho chuke awaaz justjo e jahaan ke liye

Likhne chaahte the kuch kahi unkahi
par ab na jaane kya galat kya sahi

Sawaal puchte the kabhi Jawaabon ke liye
Ban gaye hein ek Sawaal ek unsuljhi paheli ki liye

Pahunche ek anjaan manzaar par khwaabon ke liye
Na jaane kyun Ban gaye Gair apnon ke liye

Kalam na uthaenge hum alfaaz e bayaan ke liye
kho chuke awaaz justjo e jahaan ke liye

The Grim Reaper

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«Reply #1 on: August 20, 2009, 04:16:05 PM »
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wah kamaal ka likh jaate hai app thegrimreaper... itne simple shabd hote hai aor itne gahre meaning bante chale jaate hai ....too good..

na kah kar kah dena, kuch sawalo ke liye
jawab rah jaaye jinke adhure, kuch aise jazbaato ke liye

Kalam kah rahi hai Tere dil ki dastaan dost
kaya paaya din main, kaya rah gaya badalti karwato main rato ke liye
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«Reply #2 on: August 20, 2009, 04:18:47 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah kamaal ka likh jaate hai app thegrimreaper... itne simple shabd hote hai aor itne gahre meaning bante chale jaate hai ....too good..

na kah kar kah dena, kuch sawalo ke liye
jawab rah jaaye jinke adhure, kuch aise jazbaato ke liye

Kalam kah rahi hai Tere dil ki dastaan dost
kaya paaya din main, kaya rah gaya badalti karwato main rato ke liye


shukriya pooja ji
aap hi hain jo itni gehrai se padke uska haal e bayaan karti hain Giggle

waise really gud lines, bahut acha likha hai

and especially the ending Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2009, 04:20:48 PM »
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shukriya pooja ji
aap hi hain jo itni gehrai se padke uska haal e bayaan karti hain Giggle

waise really gud lines, bahut acha likha hai

and especially the ending Applause Applause

shukaria thegrimreaper!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2009, 04:21:52 PM »
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Kalam na uthaenge hum alfaaz e bayaan ke liye
kho chuke awaaz justjo e jahaan ke liye

Likhne chaahte the kuch kahi unkahi
par ab na jaane kya galat kya sahi

Sawaal puchte the kabhi Jawaabon ke liye
Ban gaye hein ek Sawaal ek unsuljhi paheli ki liye

Pahunche ek anjaan manzaar par khwaabon ke liye
Na jaane kyun Ban gaye Gair apnon ke liye

Kalam na uthaenge hum alfaaz e bayaan ke liye
kho chuke awaaz justjo e jahaan ke liye

The Grim Reaper


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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2009, 04:22:44 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah kamaal ka likh jaate hai app thegrimreaper... itne simple shabd hote hai aor itne gahre meaning bante chale jaate hai ....too good..

na kah kar kah dena, kuch sawalo ke liye
jawab rah jaaye jinke adhure, kuch aise jazbaato ke liye

Kalam kah rahi hai Tere dil ki dastaan dost
kaya paaya din main, kaya rah gaya badalti karwato main rato ke liye



 Applause Applause
Simply good  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: August 20, 2009, 04:23:22 PM »
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Nice Creation Reaper  Thumbs UP

shukriya Roja ji. appreciate it
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 20, 2009, 04:24:56 PM »
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 Applause Applause
Simply good  Thumbs UP

Thanks Roja!!
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: August 20, 2009, 04:36:05 PM »
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Kalam na uthaenge hum alfaaz e bayaan ke liye
kho chuke awaaz justjo e jahaan ke liye

Likhne chaahte the kuch kahi unkahi
par ab na jaane kya galat kya sahi

Sawaal puchte the kabhi Jawaabon ke liye
Ban gaye hein ek Sawaal ek unsuljhi paheli ki liye

Pahunche ek anjaan manzaar par khwaabon ke liye
Na jaane kyun Ban gaye Gair apnon ke liye

Kalam na uthaenge hum alfaaz e bayaan ke liye
kho chuke awaaz justjo e jahaan ke liye

The Grim Reaper


Bohot khoob Reaper Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 20, 2009, 04:41:12 PM »
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Bohot khoob Reaper Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya Celmira ji. appreciate it
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«Reply #10 on: August 20, 2009, 11:04:56 PM »
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Wah wah Reaper ji and Pooja ji,bahut khoob,wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 20, 2009, 11:06:12 PM »
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Thanks Madhu ji!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 21, 2009, 10:18:32 AM »
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Wah wah Reaper ji and Pooja ji,bahut khoob,wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya madhu ji
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Binod prawashi
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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2013, 12:50:15 PM »
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Mera v nazar idhar hi hai,

subhan allah, bahoot sunder
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