KALAM--by ghansham das ahuja

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                    KALAM

talwaar bhi jo kaam kar na sake kar jaati hai kalam
kaiyon ko isne jeevan diya kaiyon ke hue sar kalam.

taakat ki aajmaaish har vaqt kaam na aati hai
pyaar ke do shabdon se duniyaa jhuk jaati hai
asambhav ko sambhav bana sakti hai kalam...

kaam jo ho na sake siyaasat ki tadbeeron se
dikhlaye karke lekhakon ne apni tahreeron se
itihaas ki saathi itihaas banaati hai kalam...

lekhak samaaj mein jo dekhtaa va suntaa hai
usee ko saamne rakh apni rachna buntaa hai
uske dil ki baat ko samaj tak lati hai kalam...

rachanakaar ki rachna samaaj ki dharohar hai
lekhak samaaj ke kiryakalapon ka auditor hai
sach ki takat ka ehsaas karaati hai kalam.

talwar bhi jo kaam kar na sake kar jaati hai kalam
kaiyon ko isne jeevan diya kaiyon ke hue sar kalam

ghansham das ahuja


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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2012, 03:57:21 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2012, 04:03:21 PM »
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bahut achhaa kalaam hai ahujaa ji dilidaad qubool kare aur rk rau aapke liye
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2012, 04:04:51 PM »
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Waah waah waah Ghanshyam Jee, ghazab ki kalam hai aapki. Meri taraf se bahut bahut daad-o-mubarakbaad aur saath mein ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2012, 06:36:46 PM »
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                   KALAM

talwaar bhi jo kaam kar na sake kar jaati hai kalam
kaiyon ko isne jeevan diya kaiyon ke hue sar kalam.

taakat ki aajmaaish har vaqt kaam na aati hai
pyaar ke do shabdon se duniyaa jhuk jaati hai
asambhav ko sambhav bana sakti hai kalam...

kaam jo ho na sake siyaasat ki tadbeeron se
dikhlaye karke lekhakon ne apni tahreeron se
itihaas ki saathi itihaas banaati hai kalam...

lekhak samaaj mein jo dekhtaa va suntaa hai
usee ko saamne rakh apni rachna buntaa hai
uske dil ki baat ko samaj tak lati hai kalam...

rachanakaar ki rachna samaaj ki dharohar hai
lekhak samaaj ke kiryakalapon ka auditor hai
sach ki takat ka ehsaas karaati hai kalam.

talwar bhi jo kaam kar na sake kar jaati hai kalam
kaiyon ko isne jeevan diya kaiyon ke hue sar kalam

ghansham das ahuja




bahut khoob ghanshyaam ji..........!
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2012, 05:31:33 AM »
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Ahuja ji. Bahut  khubsurat  nazm hai. Tah e dil se  mubarakbaad  hazir  hai .
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saini sahab, aapki daad mili ahuja khush hua, rau ke liye dhanyavaad
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iftekhar ji,
   meri kalam aapko achhi lagee jaankar bahut khushi hui , rau ke liye dhanyavaad
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dhanyavaad sheba ji,
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siddiqui sahab, nazm aapko pasand aayee mujhe khushi hui, daad ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
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bda gazab dhhati ja rahi hia apki kalam ahuja ji............bahut hi lajwab nazm....jo rachna baht khub hoti hai uske tareef main nahi kar pata ... yeh rachna bhi unhi mein se ek hai... aisi rachna ke liye yahi kar pata hoon............


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bda gazab dhhati ja rahi hia apki kalam ahuja ji............bahut hi lajwab nazm....jo rachna baht khub hoti hai uske tareef main nahi kar pata ... yeh rachna bhi unhi mein se ek hai... aisi rachna ke liye yahi kar pata hoon............


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saudagar ji, aapko rachna pasand aa gayee yehi bahut hai mere liye,salute to us upar vale ko hai jo samay samay par aapki aur hamaari kalam ko shabd rupi pran de deta hai. tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
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