~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

dead heart

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Tanhayi main kaise jeeya jaa sakta hai,
Zindagi kay lamhe mujhe bas yehi seekhate rahe..

Jiski judai ne andhera kar diya meri duniya ko,
Ussi kay liye hum khushion kay deep jhalate rahe..

Kamal ka waada tha uska ‘kay akhri sans tak saath dungi’,
Aj halat hai kay ajnabi hi meri qabr par phool chadate rahe..

Faraz ne khoob kaha hai kay aisa hadsay hojate hai zindagi main,
Kay insaan bach toh jata hai mager zinda nahin rehta,
Yeh humari kalakari hai kay khud ko zinda dikhate rahe..

Yeh kamal hai meri kalam aur lavzon ka yaaron,
Barson mujse bas mere jazbaat likhwate rahe..

Phir likhte hue bhatak gaya; kab seekhega ‘Khamosh’,
Arey yeh toh logon ka badap’pan hai,
Kay teri be-jaan nazmon pe wah wahi lootate rahe..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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nirala

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2011, 07:09:11 PM »

aapki kalaam pata nahi kyun kuch sochne par majbur karti hai hamesha.
bahut dil ko chuuti hai
"
thanx
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""
waado ko jiske Patthar ki
lakeer samajhta raha
nikla wo Reth ka gubaar hai
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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2011, 07:16:54 PM »

Bahut Khub Rahim Ji Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Aapne Padhkar Hume Accha Laga U hI Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2011, 07:51:22 PM »

Quote from: nirala on January 23, 2011, 07:09:11 PM

aapki kalaam pata nahi kyun kuch sochne par majbur karti hai hamesha.
bahut dil ko chuuti hai
"
thanx
"
""
waado ko jiske Patthar ki
lakeer samajhta raha
nikla wo Reth ka gubaar hai
""

Apka teh dil se shukriya dost..
Yeh jankar bahaut khushi hui kay meri nazmein
soch paida karti hai..
Khush rahiye..
aur bahaut sunder lines..
Applause


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2011, 07:52:56 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 23, 2011, 07:16:54 PM

Bahut Khub Rahim Ji Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Aapne Padhkar Hume Accha Laga U hI Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi

Teh teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..
Khush rahiye..!


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Intezar

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2011, 09:32:25 PM »

kya baat hai rahim bhai... bahut khoob...

kalam chalti rahengi afsaane bayaan hote rahenge
tu kaheen na thahar jaana ye karwaan to badalte rahenge... !

Intezar !


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2011, 09:41:32 PM »

Quote from: Intezar on January 23, 2011, 09:32:25 PM

kya baat hai rahim bhai... bahut khoob...

kalam chalti rahengi afsaane bayaan hote rahenge
tu kaheen na thahar jaana ye karwaan to badalte rahenge... !

Intezar !

Teh dil se shukriya Intezar jee..
Aur khubsoorati se do lines main sach kehgaye ap..
Khush rahiye..!


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Anshumali

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 02:57:25 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 23, 2011, 06:43:00 PM

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Very Impressive Creation ... Rahim Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad ... !

likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 12:03:53 PM »

Quote from: Anshumali on January 24, 2011, 02:57:25 AM

Very Impressive Creation ... Rahim Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad ... !

likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !

Teh teh dil se shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!


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kishan8888

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 12:15:18 PM »

bahut sundar manbhavan rachna ..jai shree krishna


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Kamal ka wada tha uska ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2011, 12:26:07 PM »

Quote from: kishan8888 on January 24, 2011, 12:15:18 PM

bahut sundar manbhavan rachna ..jai shree krishna

Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee.
Khush rahiye..!


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