KANGAN.........................................SAINI

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Kisko ilzaam dooN maiN khud kee tabaahee ke liye.
Sab ke aaye haiN payaam apnee safaai ke liye.

Mujhko farmaan sunaayaa hai ibaadat n karo.
Maine maangee jo duaa sab kee bhalaai ke liye.

Aaj bhee mujhko chidhaayeN vo gulaabee kangan.
Jo khareede the kabhee uskee kalaai ke liye.

Jaan detaa hai hameshaa hee vo raajaa ke liye.
Koi raajaa n sunaa martaa sipaahee ke liye.

Do ghadee baith too bhee naam khudaa kaa lele.
Zindagee saaree padee khoob kamaai ke liye.

Aaj bhaai hee banaa jaan kaa dushman kaisaa.
Jaan detaa thaa jo bhaai kabhee bhaai ke liye.

Zurm karke bhee vo inaam ke haqdaar bane.
Aur achhaai bachee meree buraai ke liye.


Kaun se bil meN chhupe jaa ke bataao ‘saini’.
Roz aataa hai mahaajan jo ugaahee ke liye.

Dr.Surendra Saini


किसको इलज़ाम दूँ मैं ख़ुद की तबाही के लिए ।
सब के आये हैं पयाम अपनी सफ़ाई के लिए ॥

मुझको फ़रमान सुनाया है इबादत न करो ।
मैंने माँगी जो दुआ सबकी भलाई के लिए ॥

आज भी मुझको चिढायें वो गुलाबी कंगन ।
जो ख़रीदे थे कभी उसकी कलाई के लिए ॥

जान देता है हमेशा ही वो राजा के लिए ।
कोई राजा न सुना मरता सिपाही के लिए ॥

दो घड़ी बैठ तू भी नाम खुदा का लेले ।
ज़िंदगी सारी पडी ख़ूब  कमाई के लिए ॥

आज भाई ही बना जान का दुश्मन कैसा ।
जान देता था जो भाई कभी भाई के लिए ॥

जुर्म करके भी वो इनआम  के हक़दार बने ।
और अच्छाई बची मेरी बुराई के लिए ॥


कौन से बिल में छुपे जाके बताओ 'सैनी' ।
रोज़ आता है महाजन जो उगाही के लिए ॥

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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2013, 03:26:28 PM »
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Waah waah waah kya baat hai bahut hi khooob likha hai aapne.. ek se badhkar ek sabhi ashaar rahe... dil se hazaron daaaaad qubool kare..

Zurm karke bhee vo inaam ke haqdaar bane.
Aur achhaai bachee meree buraai ke liye.

MaiN qalam khoon-e-jigar meN hee dubaa kar aksar.
Roz likhtaa rahaa hooN unko siyaahee ke liye.
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2013, 03:32:19 PM »
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Wah Kya Kehne Sahab Jawaab Nahi.Marhaba Marhaba
Dil Khush Ho Gaya Parhkar. Bahut Khub Shuru Se Akhir
Tak Sabhi Ashaar Bahut Hi Achchey Lagey Mujhey Is
Khubsoorat Kalaam Par Dil Ki Gehraaiyon Se Ba Aawaz
E Buland Dad Kabul Farmaaye

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2013, 03:36:42 PM »
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Aaj bhee mujhko chidhaayeN vo gulaabee kangan.
Jo khareede the kabhee uskee kalaai ke liye

Faqat is sher ne mujhe itnaamutassir kiyaa hai Saini saab, ke main bataa nahi sakti.... waaqai aapki ghazleN apne aap me ek meyaar hain... behad aalatareen, lajawaab asarangez ghazal rahi hai aapki.. bahot jhakjhor ke rakh rakh diye ehsaas aapke... salutes to u sir... do keep writing.

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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2013, 04:38:38 PM »
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आज भाई ही बना जान का दुश्मन कैसा ।
जान देता था जो भाई कभी भाई के लिए ॥
Bahut Khoooooooooooooob Sir.
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2013, 04:43:52 PM »
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Bahot bahot bahot hi Khubsoorat andaaz hai apka. 
Badhaii ho sir ji.
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2013, 04:47:58 PM »
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bohut khub saini sir bohut umda peshkash waaah
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2013, 04:49:58 PM »
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जान देता है हमेशा ही वो राजा के लिए ।
कोई राजा न सुना मरता सिपाही के लिए ॥

दो घड़ी बैठ तू भी नाम खुदा का लेले ।
ज़िंदगी सारी पडी ख़ूब  कमाई के लिए ॥ ek Rau peshe nazar hai

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«Reply #8 on: October 17, 2013, 05:07:09 PM »
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Mujhko farmaan sunaayaa hai ibaadat n karo.
Maine maangee jo duaa sab kee bhalaai ke liye.

Aaj bhee mujhko chidhaayeN vo gulaabee kangan.
Jo khareede the kabhee uskee kalaai ke liye.

....khubsurat ashaar hain . magar neeche
diye   gaye  sher  ka matlab  samajhne ki
koshish kar raha hoon :

MaiN qalam khoon-e-jigar meN hee dubaa kar aksar.
Roz likhtaa rahaa hooN unko siyaahee ke liye.

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«Reply #9 on: October 17, 2013, 06:23:46 PM »
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Aaj bhaai hee banaa jaan kaa dushman kaisaa.
Jaan detaa thaa jo bhaai kabhee bhaai ke liye.

Zurm karke bhee vo inaam ke haqdaar bane.
Aur achhaai bachee meree buraai ke liye.

MaiN qalam khoon-e-jigar meN hee dubaa kar aksar.
Roz likhtaa rahaa hooN unko siyaahee ke liye.

Waah Dr. Saini bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 17, 2013, 06:28:26 PM »
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Kisko ilzaam dooN maiN khud kee tabaahee ke liye.
Sab ke aaye haiN payaam apnee safaai ke liye.

Mujhko farmaan sunaayaa hai ibaadat n karo.
Maine maangee jo duaa sab kee bhalaai ke liye.

Aaj bhee mujhko chidhaayeN vo gulaabee kangan.
Jo khareede the kabhee uskee kalaai ke liye.

Jaan detaa hai hameshaa hee vo raajaa ke liye.
Koi raajaa n sunaa martaa sipaahee ke liye.

Do ghadee baith too bhee naam khudaa kaa lele.
Zindagee saaree padee khoob kamaai ke liye.

Aaj bhaai hee banaa jaan kaa dushman kaisaa.
Jaan detaa thaa jo bhaai kabhee bhaai ke liye.

Zurm karke bhee vo inaam ke haqdaar bane.
Aur achhaai bachee meree buraai ke liye.

MaiN qalam khoon-e-jigar meN hee dubaa kar aksar.
Roz likhtaa rahaa hooN unko siyaahee ke liye.

Kaun se bil meN chhupe jaa ke bataao ‘saini’.
Roz aataa hai mahaajan jo ugaahee ke liye.

Dr.Surendra Saini


किसको इलज़ाम दूँ मैं ख़ुद की तबाही के लिए ।
सब के आये हैं पयाम अपनी सफ़ाई के लिए ॥

मुझको फ़रमान सुनाया है इबादत न करो ।
मैंने माँगी जो दुआ सबकी भलाई के लिए ॥

आज भी मुझको चिढायें वो गुलाबी कंगन ।
जो ख़रीदे थे कभी उसकी कलाई के लिए ॥

जान देता है हमेशा ही वो राजा के लिए ।
कोई राजा न सुना मरता सिपाही के लिए ॥

दो घड़ी बैठ तू भी नाम खुदा का लेले ।
ज़िंदगी सारी पडी ख़ूब  कमाई के लिए ॥

आज भाई ही बना जान का दुश्मन कैसा ।
जान देता था जो भाई कभी भाई के लिए ॥

जुर्म करके भी वो इनआम  के हक़दार बने ।
और अच्छाई बची मेरी बुराई के लिए ॥

मैं कलम ख़ून -ए -जिगर में ही डुबाकर अक्सर ।
रोज़ लिखता रहा हूँ उनको सियाही के लिए ॥

कौन से बिल में छुपे जाके बताओ 'सैनी' ।
रोज़ आता है महाजन जो उगाही के लिए ॥

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«Reply #11 on: October 17, 2013, 06:39:25 PM »
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MaiN qalam khoon-e-jigar meN hee dubaa kar aksar.
Roz likhtaa rahaa hooN unko siyaahee ke liye.
Kaun se bil meN chhupe jaa ke bataao ‘saini’.
Roz aataa hai mahaajan jo ugaahee ke liye
wha wha bhut khub bhut khub
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Saini Ji aapki Shayri Ka Ek Alag Class Hai, Jiski Koi Barabari nahi Kar Sakta.
Hum Is qabil nahin jo aapki umda shayri par comments de. Dher daad.
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2013, 09:10:40 PM »
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Aaj bhee mujhko chidhaayeN vo gulaabee kangan.
Jo khareede the kabhee uskee kalaai ke liye.

Do ghadee baith too bhee naam khudaa kaa lele.
Zindagee saaree padee khoob kamaai ke liye.

Waah waah sir bahut achhi ghazal rahi, in ash'aar ka jawaab nahiN, bahut pasand aae. DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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bahut hi khoob..

Laajawab sirjee..

Rau ke sath daad..happy9
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