-----/// Karo ek koshish ///----- Hriday

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naa  karo  yun  baatein   bas  dil  behlaane  ke  liye
karo  tum   dil  se  ek koshish ,  paas  aane  ke  liye

hum to  tum  se jeete hain , tumpe  hi  marte  hain
uthaao  koi  kadam  meraa  saath nibhaane ke liye

kab  tak  yunhi   duur duur se  baatein karoge tum
dedo  ek  maukaa tumhe seene  se lagaane ke liye

ye  ghum , ye  aansun , ye dard judaai kaa kab tak
ab chaahiye koi  wajah mujhe muskuraane ke liye

yaa to aajaao paas mere, aake ban jaao tum mere
yaa  phir dedo sazaa koi tumhe bhool jaane ke liye


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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2013, 11:25:52 AM »
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wah kya baat hai..
i like the second two lines most..
outstanding creation hriday ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2013, 11:33:24 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Hridayji..

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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2013, 11:56:57 AM »
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naa  karo  yun  baatein   bas  dil  behlaane  ke  liye
karo  tum   dil  se  ek koshish ,  paas  aane  ke  liye

hum to  tum  se jeete hain , tumpe  hi  marte  hain
uthaao  koi  kadam  meraa  saath nibhaane ke liye

kab  tak  yunhi   duur duur se  baatein karoge tum
dedo  ek  maukaa tumhe seene  se lagaane ke liye

ye  ghum , ye  aansun , ye dard judaai kaa kab tak
karo naa  faislaa  aakhri tum  muskuraane  ke liye
iss sher mein 2nd misra sahi nahin maloom deta hai. phir se likhein tabdil kar ke icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
yaa to aajaao paas mere, aake ban jaao tum mere
yaa  PHIR de   do duwaa  tumhe  bhool jaane ke liye


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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2013, 12:05:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Lovely ji.....!!!

Quote from: lovely_charan on January 23, 2013, 11:25:52 AM
wah kya baat hai..
i like the second two lines most..
outstanding creation hriday ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Khwaish ji...!!!

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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Hridayji..

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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2013, 12:06:54 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Qalb ji... dekhiye ye thik rahegaa kyaa?


ye  ghum , ye  aansun , ye dard judaai kaa kab tak
ab chaahiye koi wajah humein muskuraane ke liye

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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Qalb ji... dekhiye ye thik rahegaa kyaa?


ye  ghum , ye  aansun , ye dard judaai kaa kab tak
ab chaahiye koi wajah humein muskuraane ke liye



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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2013, 12:52:45 PM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab kia baat hai bahut khoob... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai
ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafz diye hai janab... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kjiiye..

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 01:18:22 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 23, 2013, 11:13:07 AM


naa  karo  yun  baatein   bas  dil  behlaane  ke  liye
karo  tum   dil  se  ek koshish ,  paas  aane  ke  liye

hum to  tum  se jeete hain , tumpe  hi  marte  hain
uthaao  koi  kadam  meraa  saath nibhaane ke liye

kab  tak  yunhi   duur duur se  baatein karoge tum
dedo  ek  maukaa tumhe seene  se lagaane ke liye

ye  ghum , ye  aansun , ye dard judaai kaa kab tak
ab chaahiye koi  wajah mujhe muskuraane ke liye

yaa to aajaao paas mere, aake ban jaao tum mere
yaa  phir dedo sazaa koi tumhe bhool jaane ke liye


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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2013, 02:35:11 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Qalb ji.....!!!

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bahut hi achchi koshish hai Hriday ji, dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2013, 05:37:57 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 23, 2013, 11:13:07 AM


naa  karo  yun  baatein   bas  dil  behlaane  ke  liye
karo  tum   dil  se  ek koshish ,  paas  aane  ke  liye

hum to  tum  se jeete hain , tumpe  hi  marte  hain
uthaao  koi  kadam  meraa  saath nibhaane ke liye

kab  tak  yunhi   duur duur se  baatein karoge tum
dedo  ek  maukaa tumhe seene  se lagaane ke liye

ye  ghum , ye  aansun , ye dard judaai kaa kab tak
ab chaahiye koi  wajah mujhe muskuraane ke liye

yaa to aajaao paas mere, aake ban jaao tum mere
yaa  phir dedo sazaa koi tumhe bhool jaane ke liye


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kya bat kya bat, dhero dad
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