-----/// Karo ek koshish ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on January 23, 2013, 11:13:07 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 24, 2013, 11:47:27 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji.....!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 23, 2013, 12:52:45 PM
Kapil Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab kia baat hai bahut khoob... badi achchi kalaam kahi hai
ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafz diye hai janab... Usual Smile


Is khoob kalaam par dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kjiiye..

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2013, 01:52:31 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne hriday jee. bahut hi romantic thi aapki yeh rachna. dheron daad
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«Reply #17 on: January 25, 2013, 11:03:00 AM »
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thank u sooo much Sheba ji.....!!!

Quote from: Sheba on January 23, 2013, 01:18:22 PM

good........!
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«Reply #18 on: January 25, 2013, 11:27:50 AM »
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naa  karo  yun  baatein   bas  dil  behlaane  ke  liye
karo  tum   dil  se  ek koshish ,  paas  aane  ke  liye

hum to  tum  se jeete hain , tumpe  hi  marte  hain
uthaao  koi  kadam  meraa  saath nibhaane ke liye

kab  tak  yunhi   duur duur se  baatein karoge tum
dedo  ek  maukaa tumhe seene  se lagaane ke liye

ye  ghum , ye  aansun , ye dard judaai kaa kab tak
ab chaahiye koi  wajah mujhe muskuraane ke liye

yaa to aajaao paas mere, aake ban jaao tum mere
yaa  phir dedo sazaa koi tumhe bhool jaane ke liye


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«Reply #19 on: January 25, 2013, 12:14:00 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #20 on: January 29, 2013, 03:09:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Saini ji.....!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on January 23, 2013, 02:35:11 PM
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #21 on: January 30, 2013, 11:37:03 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Amit ji.....!!!

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on January 23, 2013, 05:34:40 PM
bahut hi achchi koshish hai Hriday ji, dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: January 31, 2013, 10:27:27 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Adil ji.....!!!

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likhte rahein .good Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: February 01, 2013, 03:04:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Bahukhandi ji...!!!

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kya bat kya bat, dhero dad
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«Reply #24 on: February 06, 2013, 04:15:50 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

Quote from: aqsh on January 24, 2013, 01:52:31 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne hriday jee. bahut hi romantic thi aapki yeh rachna. dheron daad
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thanks a lot Suman ji....!!!

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«Reply #26 on: February 07, 2013, 09:08:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Prashad ji.....!!!

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bahut khoob
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