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nirala
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Dl krta hai--
KASAK k alFaz chura lu
RAHIM ki sachai
GEETA k ehsAas to
AZEEM ki gahrai
Dl krta hai--
chura lu KOYAL ki taZgi
aur PRIYA ki baAngi
MATRIX ka andAaz
to SAHIL ki deeWangi
Dl krta hai--
MANJUM ka daRd chura lu
@AKAASH ka anuThapan
VIPUL ki gaZlen aur
ABHI ka ruTba chura lu
Dl krta hai chura lu--
MAMTA ki kaLaam
RISHI ka bhoLapan
NARESH ke shabd
aur AVTAR ka saadaPan
Dl karta hai--
BEKARAAR ki baate
ANAAM ke pyare zazBat
GHAYAL ki misHaalen chura lu
Dl to --------
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2011, 10:14:01 AM » |
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bht khoob nirala ji.....
mujhe bhi apni poem me includ karne ke liye thanx alot...
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2011, 10:17:27 AM » |
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nirala ji jaldi complete kijiye isko jaldi.........
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2011, 10:22:02 AM » |
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wowwwwww.....nirala ji.....bahot khoob sahab........sabko ek jagah ikttha kar diya apne...........maja aa gaya ji..........
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2011, 10:23:29 AM » |
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ab to Churane se kaam nahi chalega--- Dakaiti karni padegi-- " KHWAHISH ka Dil chura lu SHIHAAB ki Achhai " sorry baaki ke members ka naam yaad nahi aur kaiyon ko maine Feel nahi kiya hai " upar se mobile me space restriction  " by the way meri iss Kosis ko sarahne ka bahut thanx " thanx " |
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2011, 11:49:24 AM » |
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veru nice niraala ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2011, 01:07:11 PM » |
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sab ka sab kuch chura liye mera dil bada hai mai khud hi de deta hun tumhe ---kishan this is a trully friends  |
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2011, 01:11:54 PM » |
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mera bhi kuch chura lete bhai-- mai thode na naaraz hota. wese achha kiya mere pass hai bhi nahi kuch churwane ke liye:) hehe bahut badhiya |
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2011, 02:59:44 PM » |
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Apka teh dil se shukriya izzat kay liye.. bahaut acha likha apne..!  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #12 on: January 29, 2011, 05:47:57 PM » |
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thanx aal---
meri nakaam si kosis ko sarahne ke liye.
kuch galat laga ho kisi ko forgive kariyega.
thanx
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2011, 10:05:55 AM » |
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thanx Rishi ji---
Matrix ji aapko bhi thanx.
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2011, 11:15:23 AM » |
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shukriya niralaji
bahut khub sab ke bare main jo likha ek dam sahi hai par han.. ham apna dard aapko nahin dende....
koi apne dil ki dhadkan deta hai kya......
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