~Kash main ek parinda hota~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 22, 2010, 06:05:12 AM
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Mujhe urrne ka bada shauk hai bachpan se..Main jab bhi parindon ko dekta hoon, toh tassawur karta hoon kay main bhi ek parinda hoon aur asmaan choo raha hoon..Bas issi baat par kuch likh raha hoon..

Asmaan main urrna meri takdeeron main hota,
Bina paise diye khana lana meri naseebon main hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Koi peet peeche meri gheebat[burai] nahin kar pata,
Sache doston ka saath meri lakeeron main hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Zindagi ruk nahin jati kisi kay dokhe se ‘Khamosh’,
Insaan jaisa kamzor dil mere seene main jo nahin hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Khul kay jee sakta zindagi kay har lamhe ko,
Paise kamana meri hasraton main jo nahin hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Dil mera bas yehi kehta rehta hai mujse,
Kash ‘Khamosh’ ek parinda hota..!


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 06:17:12 AM »
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......rahim ji toooooooooooo goodddddddddd
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 06:17:57 AM »
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Shukriya Anamika di..Bahaut bahaut shukriya..!
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«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2010, 07:07:24 AM »
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Wah Bhai Wah.. Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaas Likhe hain.. Apne Ek Khayal Ko Lafzon me Bahut Khubsoorati se Utaara hai aapne... Applause Applause



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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2010, 08:40:24 AM »
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Shukriya Vikas bhaijan..Aj kal gum rehte ho..Bahaut khushi hui apko yahan aj dekh kar..!
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2010, 10:32:53 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 22, 2010, 06:05:12 AM
Mujhe urrne ka bada shauk hai bachpan se..Main jab bhi parindon ko dekta hoon, toh tassawur karta hoon kay main bhi ek parinda hoon aur asmaan choo raha hoon..Bas issi baat par kuch likh raha hoon..

Asmaan main urrna meri takdeeron main hota,
Bina paise diye khana lana meri naseebon main hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Koi peet peeche meri gheebat[burai] nahin kar pata,
Sache doston ka saath meri lakeeron main hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Zindagi ruk nahin jati kisi kay dokhe se ‘Khamosh’,
Insaan jaisa kamzor dil mere seene main jo nahin hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Khul kay jee sakta zindagi kay har lamhe ko,
Paise kamana meri hasraton main jo nahin hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Dil mera bas yehi kehta rehta hai mujse,
Kash ‘Khamosh’ ek parinda hota..!


~Rahim~

Bahut bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawaab

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Apane jis tarah Yeh Baat Ki, ke aapki ek khwaish thi ke  Kaash Aap Parinde Hote Aur Jo Wajeh Aapne Batayi Hai..Padhkar Bahut Acha Laga..Kuch waqt Pehle maine Bhi Insaan Ko Ek Parinde Se Compare Kar kuch likha Tha..Share Karna Chahunga..

"Yeh parinde Bhi Gar Insaan Hote
Hindu Hote, Sikh Hote,
Isaai Hote Aur Musalmaan Hote..

Bant Jaate The Yeh Bhi
Mazhabo Ke Naam Par!!!
Inke Bhi Dil Mein Bhi Sirf Darmiyaan Hote

Yeh Parinde Bhi gar Insaan Hote....
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2010, 11:11:33 AM »
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baht khoob rahim sb Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2010, 05:11:42 PM »
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Shukriya Khwaish jee aur Khamosh Aawaz jee..

Khwaish jee badi khubsoorat lines share ki hai apne..! Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 09:23:01 PM »
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Rahim Sahab Aadaab!

janab aapke ahsaas o khayaal bahut pyaare hai...
Khoob koshish rahi aapki...

Aapke ahsaasoN ko Daad janab.....

Aapka yeh quoted khayaal behad khoob raha ...
Iske liye khususi daad....         

Quote from: -Rahim- on August 22, 2010, 06:05:12 AM

Koi peet peeche meri gheebat[burai] nahin kar pata,
Sache doston ka saath meri lakeeron main hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..



~Rahim~



Likhate rahiye......
Khush rahiye........
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2010, 06:52:07 PM »
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Shukriya Parwaaz jee..Behad shukriya.!
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2010, 06:42:27 AM »
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bhut badhiya rahim ji shukriya itna umda khyaal hamer sath bantne ke liye
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2010, 07:05:56 PM »
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Shukriya Rahi jee..!
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2010, 10:41:22 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 22, 2010, 06:05:12 AM
Mujhe urrne ka bada shauk hai bachpan se..Main jab bhi parindon ko dekta hoon, toh tassawur karta hoon kay main bhi ek parinda hoon aur asmaan choo raha hoon..Bas issi baat par kuch likh raha hoon..

Asmaan main urrna meri takdeeron main hota,
Bina paise diye khana lana meri naseebon main hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Koi peet peeche meri gheebat[burai] nahin kar pata,
Sache doston ka saath meri lakeeron main hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Zindagi ruk nahin jati kisi kay dokhe se ‘Khamosh’,
Insaan jaisa kamzor dil mere seene main jo nahin hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Khul kay jee sakta zindagi kay har lamhe ko,
Paise kamana meri hasraton main jo nahin hota,
Kash yaaron main ek parinda hota..

Dil mera bas yehi kehta rehta hai mujse,
Kash ‘Khamosh’ ek parinda hota..!


~Rahim~

Nice one Rahim Ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 01, 2010, 04:19:40 AM »
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Shukriya Rajesh jee!
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