~Kash main..~by Rahim

by dead heart on December 10, 2010, 07:35:11 PM
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Main ko yeh likte hue bahaut maza aya hai..Muskurakar likha hai maine yeh..Ap bhi tassawur karke parre toh shayad ap sabhi ko maza ayega..

Kash main fizaon main behti mahek hota,
Teri har sans kay saath tere ander hota,
Tu chah kar bhi mujhe khud se alag na kar pati,
Kash main woh mahek hota..

Kash main teri diary ka ek pan’na hota,
Tu muj par tere ehsaas, jazbaat aur raaz bahati,
Phir mujhe parr kar tu hassa bhi karti aur roya bhi karti,
Kash main woh pan’na hota..

Kash main tere pairon main chamakti jhooti hota,
Tu sabko mujhe shaan se dikhati, meri tariff bhi karti,
Koi ladka chedta toh tu mujhe hatyar kay taur par istamal kar jati,
Kash main woh jhooti hota..

Kash main tere se lipat’ti chadar hota,
Teri baahon main rehta, tere ashkon ko ponchta,
Har raat bas teri hi panahon mein main sota,
Kash main woh chadar hota..

"Sab kuch banjaega 'Rahim' sivae kisi aur ka,
Iss qadar tujse mohobat karta hoon main.."

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2010, 07:42:12 PM »
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wah Rahim ji wah---kya feel karaya aapne. wakai bahut maza aya.
bhot khubsurat
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2010, 07:44:32 PM »
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Shukriya Killbill jee..!
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2010, 12:15:20 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2010, 03:04:16 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya Rajesh jee..!
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2010, 03:10:49 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on December 10, 2010, 07:35:11 PM
Main ko yeh likte hue bahaut maza aya hai..Muskurakar likha hai maine yeh..Ap bhi tassawur karke parre toh shayad ap sabhi ko maza ayega..

Kash main fizaon main behti mahek hota,
Teri har sans kay saath tere ander hota,
Tu chah kar bhi mujhe khud se alag na kar pati,
Kash main woh mahek hota..

Kash main teri diary ka ek pan’na hota,
Tu muj par tere ehsaas, jazbaat aur raaz bahati,
Phir mujhe parr kar tu hassa bhi karti aur roya bhi karti,
Kash main woh pan’na hota..

Kash main tere pairon main chamakti jhooti hota,
Tu sabko mujhe shaan se dikhati, meri tariff bhi karti,
Koi ladka chedta toh tu mujhe hatyar kay taur par istamal kar jati,
Kash main woh jhooti hota..

Kash main tere se lipat’ti chadar hota,
Teri baahon main rehta, tere ashkon ko ponchta,
Har raat bas teri hi panahon mein main sota,
Kash main woh chadar hota..

"Sab kuch banjaega 'Rahim' sivae kisi aur ka,
Iss qadar tujse mohobat karta hoon main.."

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut khoob rahiim  n thnx ki tumne kuch khumar se bhara likha..bahut khoob...take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2010, 03:14:46 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 11, 2010, 03:10:49 PM
Bahut khoob rahiim  n thnx ki tumne kuch khumar se bhara likha..bahut khoob...take care..Usual Smile
Bas di apna kaha tha toh sun liya..
koshish karunga yeh kalam dard na bahaye..
teh dil se shukriya..!
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2010, 01:15:02 AM »
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Kash keh aisaa hotaa.........
humari duaayeN aap ke saath haiN.......
Rahim jee....bahut khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2010, 04:40:12 AM »
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waah Raheem ji kitna achcha likhte hain aap good job

Jo Bichard gaya us par gham na kar...
Aankhein khol ke tujhe duniya dekhni hai....
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2010, 05:29:55 AM »
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Wah bahut baddiya Rahim bhai ek alag andaaz mein likha aapne.great creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2010, 10:54:30 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on December 13, 2010, 01:15:02 AM
Kash keh aisaa hotaa.........
humari duaayeN aap ke saath haiN.......
Rahim jee....bahut khoob!
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Mamta jee..!
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«Reply #11 on: December 13, 2010, 10:56:55 AM »
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Quote from: hasham on December 13, 2010, 04:40:12 AM
waah Raheem ji kitna achcha likhte hain aap good job

Jo Bichard gaya us par gham na kar...
Aankhein khol ke tujhe duniya dekhni hai....
Shukriya jee..
bahaut achi lines..!
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 13, 2010, 10:59:29 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on December 13, 2010, 05:29:55 AM
Wah bahut baddiya Rahim bhai ek alag andaaz mein likha aapne.great creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Teh dil se shukriya di..!
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2010, 08:11:51 AM »
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bahut badhiya rahim bhaii..apni ek bahut purani poem ka ek para pesh karta hun..

rahe na rahe ye jawwani mere hamnasheen
main fir bhi tera intezar karta jauga
jo maut bhi mili tujhse pehle mujhe
mai wapas auga main is kadar tujhse mohabbat karke jauga~
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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2010, 03:17:27 PM »
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Teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..
Aur kya khoob para hai yeh..
Kya baat hai..
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