~*~ Kash tera ho sakta ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 05, 2012, 03:43:40 PM
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Aj ek cafe main jana hua mera..Wahan ki incharge jo thi, uff bas kya kahoun..
Wahin baithe baithe, kuch 15 mins main, yeh nazm likh di maine..
Yeh kalam, uss ajnabi kay naam..

Manzoor hai mujhe dard o ghum tamam,
Ager tere kandhe par sar rakh, main ro sakta..

Haste haste gale lag jaun main maut ko ae dost,
Ager teri qabr kay sang, main bhi so sakta..

Dil tera shabnaam sa aur ankhein teri jheel si hai,
Kash kay ek boond ashq ki tarha, main inn main kho sakta..

Tu dhood si safed hai aur dil mera shehad  sa meetha,
Kash main iss shehad ko dhood main, dubo sakta..

Jo tanha hai unhe hi qadr hai kisi apne kay saath ki,
Tujhe dekh aj dil se ek dua nikli hai mere ajnabi dost,
Kash..kay kash ‘Khamosh’ tera..khwabon main hi sahi..ho sakta..tera ho sakta..

Manzoor hai mujhe dard o ghum tamam,
Ager tere kandhe par sar rakh, main ro sakta..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2012, 04:03:06 PM »
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wah wah wah wah... !!

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bahut bahut khoob rahim bhai.... Usual Smile

dil khush kar diya aapne...  happy3 happy3

aise hi likhte rahiye...  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2012, 04:57:19 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on January 05, 2012, 04:03:06 PM
wah wah wah wah... !!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut khoob rahim bhai.... Usual Smile

dil khush kar diya aapne...  happy3 happy3

aise hi likhte rahiye...  Usual Smile Usual Smile


Wow.. kya baat hai bada taadne lage ho.. acha hai gud.. Kya mohabbat hai uff. bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai , simply Perfect !

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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2012, 04:58:25 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim Bhai

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Majaak ke taur par...Aap pahli baar gaye the ya doosri baar..
Bahut jordaar likha hai ..
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«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2012, 06:26:07 PM »
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dost gum to chahenge ki aap uss cafe me regular jayeb aur 15 mnt ke bdle 50 mnt tak beth k use dekheb or roz ek khumaar bhra nazm likhen Usual Smile

bht khoob dost
khus ragie
muskurate rahie
Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2012, 06:48:48 PM »
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Aadaab janab Rahim Sahaab!


Aap to kafi dil fekh aashiq ho yaar..tongue3 Jo aik hi mulaakhat meiN
aise khub kalaam kah dii aapne.. Usual Smile

Just kidding.. achcha likha hai achche khayaal kaheN hai janab
humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile     
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2012, 04:42:37 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2012, 05:11:18 AM »
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wahhhhhhhh bahut khooob dost..,

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 05, 2012, 03:43:40 PM
Aj ek cafe main jana hua mera..Wahan ki incharge jo thi, uff bas kya kahoun..
Wahin baithe baithe, kuch 15 mins main, yeh nazm likh di maine..
Yeh kalam, uss ajnabi kay naam..

Manzoor hai mujhe dard o ghum tamam,
Ager tere kandhe par sar rakh, main ro sakta..

Haste haste gale lag jaun main maut ko ae dost,
Ager teri qabr kay sang, main bhi so sakta..

Dil tera shabnaam sa aur ankhein teri jheel si hai,
Kash kay ek boond ashq ki tarha, main inn main kho sakta..

Tu dhood si safed hai aur dil mera shehad  sa meetha,
Kash main iss shehad ko dhood main, dubo sakta..

Jo tanha hai unhe hi qadr hai kisi apne kay saath ki,
Tujhe dekh aj dil se ek dua nikli hai mere ajnabi dost,
Kash..kay kash ‘Khamosh’ tera..khwabon main hi sahi..ho sakta..tera ho sakta..

Manzoor hai mujhe dard o ghum tamam,
Ager tere kandhe par sar rakh, main ro sakta..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2012, 08:08:05 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on January 05, 2012, 04:03:06 PM
wah wah wah wah... !!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut khoob rahim bhai.... Usual Smile

dil khush kar diya aapne...  happy3 happy3

aise hi likhte rahiye...  Usual Smile Usual Smile
Teh teh dil se shukriya Touhid Sahab..
Ap khush hue, toh likhna safal raha..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: January 06, 2012, 08:09:14 AM »
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Quote from: Nysha on January 05, 2012, 04:57:19 PM

Wow.. kya baat hai bada taadne lage ho.. acha hai gud.. Kya mohabbat hai uff. bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai , simply Perfect !

Nysha
Hahahaha di 'tadne lage ho'..Nahin nahin manzar hi kuch aisa tha, kay nazron pe qabu, na reh saka..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya di..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2012, 08:15:10 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on January 05, 2012, 04:58:25 PM
Bahut Khoob Rahim Bhai

Applause Applause

Majaak ke taur par...Aap pahli baar gaye the ya doosri baar..
Bahut jordaar likha hai ..

Hahahahaha pehli baar..Mager dusri baar jaunga nahin, yeh keh nahin sakta.. hahaha!
Teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2012, 08:19:25 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 05, 2012, 06:26:07 PM
dost gum to chahenge ki aap uss cafe me regular jayeb aur 15 mnt ke bdle 50 mnt tak beth k use dekheb or roz ek khumaar bhra nazm likhen Usual Smile

bht khoob dost
khus ragie
muskurate rahie
Usual Smile
Haaye, apka matlab samjha main dost..
Jab koi khushi bhari nazm likhta hoon, mujhe bhi
khushi aur ehsaas hota hai, kay main likh sakta hoon,
ghum kay ilava bhi..
Teh teh dil se shukriya dost..
Saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2012, 08:28:56 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 05, 2012, 06:48:48 PM
Aadaab janab Rahim Sahaab!


Aap to kafi dil fekh aashiq ho yaar..tongue3 Jo aik hi mulaakhat meiN
aise khub kalaam kah dii aapne.. Usual Smile

Just kidding.. achcha likha hai achche khayaal kaheN hai janab
humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile    

Haha dil phek toh nahin par khubsoorati ki tariff toh karni hi chahiye.. Usual Smile
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Parwaaz Sahab..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: January 06, 2012, 08:31:12 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 06, 2012, 04:42:37 AM
Applause Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya Sksaini jee..
Bas yunhi saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: January 06, 2012, 03:13:05 PM »
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Quote from: Dil Shah on January 06, 2012, 05:11:18 AM
wahhhhhhhh bahut khooob dost..,

Apka teh teh dil se shukriya mere dost..
Bas yunhi apna saath banaye rakhiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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