kashmakash...sheba

by Sheba on April 21, 2011, 10:16:07 AM
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                          chura kar lafzo ko mere mujhe bezuban karta hai,
                          dikha kar jalwe mere mujhe hairaan karta hai,


                          bataa kar iss shahar ko wo apna ,
                          rishto ko mujh se anjaan karta hai,


                         dikhakar  mezbaani mere ghar mein wo,
                        aashiyaane mein mujhe mehmaan karta hai,


                         loot kar mera gulistaan wo abb to,
                         gulon mein mujhe be-imaan karta hai,

                        
                         kar ke rehnumai mere karwaan ko sheba...!
                         raaste ko mere wo sunsaan karta hai.
                        
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2011, 10:23:33 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 21, 2011, 10:16:07 AM

                         mere lafzo ko chura kar mujhe bezuban karta hai,
                         jalwa mera dikha kar mujhe hairaan karta hai,


                         iss shahar mein sabb ko apna bana kar,
                         mere rishte ko mujh se anjaan karta hai,


                        dikaai aisi mezbaani ghar mein usne,
                         mere hi aashiyaane mein mujhe mehmaan karta hai,


                         loot kar gulistaan wo abb to,
                         mere hi gulon mein mujhe be-imaan karta hai,

                         
                         kar ke rehnumai mere karwaan ko sheba...!
                         mere hi raaste ko sunsaan karta hai.
                         

Waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sheba Ji..Aapne Kuch Ehsaaso Ko Ba-khoobi Lafzon mein bayaan Kiya..Bahut Ache..

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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2011, 10:26:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause kamaal hai shebaji.... umda....

mere hi aashiyane main mujhe mehman karte hai...... kerban.....
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2011, 10:54:08 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2011, 11:29:57 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 21, 2011, 10:16:07 AM

                         mere lafzo ko chura kar mujhe bezuban karta hai,
                         jalwa mera dikha kar mujhe hairaan karta hai,


                         shahar mein sabb ko apna bana kar,
                         mere rishte ko mujh se anjaan karta hai,


                        dikaai aisi mezbaani ghar mein usne,
                         mere hi aashiyaane mein mujhe mehmaan karta hai,


                         loot kar mera gulistaan wo abb to,
                         mere hi gulon mein mujhe be-imaan karta hai,

                         
                         kar ke rehnumai mere karwaan ko sheba...!
                         mere hi raaste ko sunsaan karta hai.
                         

Bahut umda sheba ji apki ye ghazal mujhe bahut apni si lagi...
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2011, 01:01:27 PM »
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bht khoob sheba ji...
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2011, 03:51:35 PM »
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sheba ji……
mujhe lgta hai ki muje apka deewana ban jana chahiye…
is poetry ke jalwe bht kamaal hain…
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yun to hain aapki ghazalo ko chahnewale beshumar, sheba
mujhe bhi kyun hone ko shumaar, itna mazbur karta hai!!:)Usual Smile
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hats off ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2011, 05:35:51 PM »
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Sheba ji, bahut khoob. Awall darze ki gazal likhi hai aapne. Likhte rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2011, 05:39:19 AM »
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very very good shebaji

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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2011, 07:44:47 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 21, 2011, 10:23:33 AM
Waah Waah Waah!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Sheba Ji..Aapne Kuch Ehsaaso Ko Ba-khoobi Lafzon mein bayaan Kiya..Bahut Ache..

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thank you khawaish ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2011, 08:21:29 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on April 21, 2011, 10:26:03 AM
Applause Applause Applause kamaal hai shebaji.... umda....

mere hi aashiyane main mujhe mehman karte hai...... kerban.....

thank you manjum
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2011, 01:11:10 AM »
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Sheba jee ! laajawaab peshkash!! behad umdah !!!dil se daad!!!!
khaas tour par maqte ke liye dheron mubarakbaad!
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2011, 08:13:28 AM »
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Quote from: Tamnna on April 22, 2011, 05:39:19 AM
very very good shebaji

 Applause Applause Applause
thank you tamanna
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