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kat gayee jaise abhee aur guzar jaayegee
phir kisee mod pe ye saaNs thahar jaayegee
wo jo kahte haiN keh haalaat abhee had me haiN
mai zubaaN kholooN to kya baat bigad jaayegee
dhoop aur chhaaNv ke ahsaas ayaaN kyaa karnaa
raNg e ulfat se ye tasveer saNwar jaayegee
zabt se aap kaa rishtaa to puraanaa saa huaa
kuchh karo aur zamaane ko khabar jaayegee
umra kat-tee rahee dard ke kaashaane me
mujhse bach ke ye khushee jaane kidhar jaayegee
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2011, 05:58:57 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2011, 06:08:47 AM » |
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Badaa ajeeb saa lagtaa hai aap ko khujli jee bulaanaa .....ho sake to koi aur naam deN khud ko .......baharkaif bahut bahut shukriyaa........gazal paRhane or saraahane kaa....
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2011, 06:12:12 AM » |
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Nice
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2011, 06:19:04 AM » |
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shukriyaa Sanjeev!
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2011, 12:21:22 PM » |
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Waah...khoobsoorat ghazal aur matle
ka jawaab naheen..daad...kubool farmaayen.
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2011, 09:44:52 AM » |
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kat gayee jaise abhee aur guzar jaayegee
phir kisee mod pe ye saaNs thahar jaayegee
wo jo kahte haiN keh haalaat abhee had me haiN
mai zubaaN kholooN to kya baat bigad jaayegee
dhoop aur chhaaNv ke ahsaas ayaaN kyaa karnaa
raNg e ulfat se ye tasveer saNwar jaayegee
zabt se aap kaa rishtaa to puraanaa saa huaa
kuchh karo aur zamaane ko khabar jaayegee
umra kat-tee rahee dard ke kaashaane me
mujhse bach ke ye khushee jaane kidhar jaayegee
Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2011, 04:43:32 PM » |
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shukriyaa Satish jee!
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2011, 04:08:32 AM » |
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Shukriyaa Shihab jee ! aap un logoN me se haiN jinhoN ne humesha mujhe saraahaa hai meri housalaa afzai kee hai.....mai waqai dil se aap logoN kee behad shukrguzaar hooN jin kee wajah se mujh me likhne kaa hunar paidaa hotaa hai.....yaqeenan aap nahee to hum naheeN.......
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2011, 04:15:10 AM » |
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mere mashware ko maan lene kaa behad shukriyaa Kalb jee..............
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2011, 10:13:07 AM » |
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kat gayee jaise abhee aur guzar jaayegee
phir kisee mod pe ye saaNs thahar jaayegee
wo jo kahte haiN keh haalaat abhee had me haiN
mai zubaaN kholooN to kya baat bigad jaayegee
dhoop aur chhaaNv ke ahsaas ayaaN kyaa karnaa
raNg e ulfat se ye tasveer saNwar jaayegee
zabt se aap kaa rishtaa to puraanaa saa huaa
kuchh karo aur zamaane ko khabar jaayegee
umra kat-tee rahee dard ke kaashaane me
mujhse bach ke ye khushee jaane kidhar jaayegee
Mamta Bajpai
mamta... its just ultimo so nice written .. keep it up |
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2011, 01:42:05 PM » |
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Thanks a lot Paani!
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«Reply #12 on: July 26, 2011, 02:31:55 PM » |
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wah kya khub kaha mamta ji--
dil churaa gai aap to--
behtareeen nagma ji.
sada khus rahiye ji.
ye dard ki bayani bht lajawaab rahi--
har sher jhakashh h ji--
kuchh khamoshi si chhaai hai aajkal
na jaane ye lafz ruthkar mujhhse ab kidhar jayegee !!!!
bht bht shukrira ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 26, 2011, 05:31:12 PM » |
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Shukriyaa Khamosh jee!
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2012, 10:09:00 AM » |
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kat gayee jaise abhee aur guzar jaayegee
phir kisee mod pe ye saaNs thahar jaayegee
wo jo kahte haiN keh haalaat abhee had me haiN
mai zubaaN kholooN to kya baat bigad jaayegee
dhoop aur chhaaNv ke ahsaas ayaaN kyaa karnaa
raNg e ulfat se ye tasveer saNwar jaayegee
zabt se aap kaa rishtaa to puraanaa saa huaa
kuchh karo aur zamaane ko khabar jaayegee
umra kat-tee rahee dard ke kaashaane me
mujhse bach ke ye khushee jaane kidhar jaayegee
Mamta Bajpai
nice one ji |
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