|| Katra hoon...Priya...||

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Main badal hoon katra hoon
tinka tinka bikhra hoon...
 
mujhko yaad kare ab kaun
main to bhula bisra hoon..
 
har lamha thujhe satayega
main us waqt ka tukda hoon...

roothi raat ke saye sa
main kab dil me basta hoon...

jis jagah veerane baste hain
main us ghar ka rasta hoon...
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2011, 12:26:43 PM »
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Main badal hoon katra hoon
tinka tinka bikhra hoon...
 
mujhko yaad kare ab kaun
main to bhula bisra hoon..
 
har lamha thujhe satayega
main us waqt ka tukda hoon...

roothi raat ke saye sa
main kab dil me basta hoon...

jis jagah veerane baste hain
main us ghar ka rasta hoon...



Bahut bahut Khooob Priya Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2011, 12:32:39 PM »
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bht bht shukria khwaish ji..
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2011, 12:39:27 PM »
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pasandagi ka shukria shihab ji...
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2011, 06:41:48 AM »
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so nice.....
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2011, 06:50:33 AM »
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bahut bahut khub priyaji.... badiya....
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2011, 09:40:02 AM »
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thanx alot tamanna ji.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2011, 09:40:47 AM »
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bht bht shukria manjum ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 15, 2011, 11:45:59 AM »
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oyeee oyeeeeeeee.........

ye lovely shovly poetry pad ke maja aa gaya yaar........

pal pal hota gehra hu
me gulshan me sehra hu

samaj samaj sako to samaj lo
me ishq ka pahra hu
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«Reply #9 on: March 15, 2011, 12:22:19 PM »
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thanx mg......
Kaash mujhe bhi aap jaisa reply dena aata...
As usual toooo goood ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 15, 2011, 04:46:31 PM »
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AAHHAAAAAAA PRIYA.....KAI DIN BAAD TUMHARI POST TAK PAHUNCHI...MAZA AGAYA PADHKE......EXCELLENT CREATION YAR......
BHT ZABARDAST HAI YE.......SIMPLY SUPERBBBBBBBBB........

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NA CHHUTEGA JO KABHI TUMSE
MAIN WO BICHHDA LAMHA HUN
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«Reply #11 on: March 16, 2011, 12:55:17 AM »
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EXcelent poem  Priyaji........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Yaad hai aapko kuchh aysa he aapne Jaipur mai sunaaya tha....bhul gayee na !!!

Main wo anmol baarish kee  boond hoon
Jo sagar ki sipi me gir moti ban jaata hoon....

poori kavita alag thread par.....



Main badal hoon katra hoon
tinka tinka bikhra hoon...
 
mujhko yaad kare ab kaun
main to bhula bisra hoon..
 
har lamha thujhe satayega
main us waqt ka tukda hoon...

roothi raat ke saye sa
main kab dil me basta hoon...

jis jagah veerane baste hain
main us ghar ka rasta hoon...

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«Reply #12 on: March 16, 2011, 10:10:52 AM »
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thanx alot anu di.....
Aap to likhte hi kamal ho...
nice lines...
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«Reply #13 on: March 16, 2011, 10:12:17 AM »
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thanx anaam ji....
Waise likha maine abhi kuch din pahle or aapko salo pahle suna diya.....
Baat samajh nahi aayi...
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«Reply #14 on: March 16, 2011, 10:16:09 AM »
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bahut khoob priya ....bada achha likha hai...

dher saari daad~
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