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«Reply #15 on: March 16, 2011, 11:18:19 AM » |
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Chas a gai pa g tohadi shari di.
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«Reply #16 on: March 16, 2011, 12:52:49 PM » |
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«Reply #17 on: March 17, 2011, 12:53:39 AM » |
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Aji meine kaha aysa he kuchh aapne sunaaya tha.....yahi nahi.......khair jaane dijiye jab aapko yaad he nahi aa raha hai tou.......  thanx anaam ji....
Waise likha maine abhi kuch din pahle or aapko salo pahle suna diya.....
Baat samajh nahi aayi...
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #18 on: March 17, 2011, 10:26:23 AM » |
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thanx alot abhi ji... bahut khoob priya ....bada achha likha hai...
dher saari daad~
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«Reply #19 on: March 17, 2011, 10:27:54 AM » |
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mujhe itni punjabi samajh nahi aati jassaal ji.... but thanx alot for being here... Chas a gai pa g tohadi shari di.
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«Reply #20 on: March 17, 2011, 10:29:17 AM » |
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thanx koyal.... or khayal to tere jabardast lage mujhe.... sach me mindblowing yaar.... thanx for dis beautiful reply.... |
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #21 on: March 17, 2011, 10:30:27 AM » |
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jo asal me hua hoga wahi to yaad aayega na anaam ji... Aji meine kaha aysa he kuchh aapne sunaaya tha.....yahi nahi.......khair jaane dijiye jab aapko yaad he nahi aa raha hai tou....... |
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #22 on: March 17, 2011, 11:03:44 AM » |
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Mujhe lagta hai Anaamji kisi aur Priya se mile honge re....tujh se nahi......ya fir naatak kar rahe hain....tujhe chhed rahe hain.... jo asal me hua hoga wahi to yaad aayega na anaam ji...
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«Reply #23 on: March 17, 2011, 11:29:52 AM » |
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wah manzil ji
bahut badhiya likha aapne.
suna hai aisi soch sirf sochne se nhi aati--
kuch sachhai ka saamna na hua ho to gahri baate bahar nhi aati .
kamaal ka post hai aapka.
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aasmaan se gire boond ka 'manzil' hota koi roop nhi
kuch shakhs hote hain aise jinka hota koi 'wajood' nhi
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dili daad aapke post ko
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thanx
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #24 on: March 18, 2011, 10:03:26 AM » |
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pasandagi ka shukria nirala ji.....
And very nice lines....
Bht umda....
Thanx for dis beautiful reply
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«Reply #25 on: March 18, 2011, 10:09:43 AM » |
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aap saagar hain mohtarma shabdo ki
ham sirf ek Katra hai wo bhi ek boond ki
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aapki shayri kamaal hain janaab
thanx for ur shayris.
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«Reply #26 on: March 18, 2011, 10:30:09 AM » |
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hahaha.....
Kaisi baat karte hai aap nirala ji.....
Sagar or main.....
Main to shayad boond bhi nahi hu abhi....
Par fir bhi itni ijjat dene ka shukria....
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«Reply #27 on: March 18, 2011, 12:09:10 PM » |
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3rd aur Last wali awesomatic hai,.
Khush rahiye..!
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #28 on: March 18, 2011, 12:25:28 PM » |
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kabhi kisi ka kaha maan bhi lo.....aaj nahi tou kal sach ho jaaye ga Priya-di..... hahaha.....
Kaisi baat karte hai aap nirala ji.....
Sagar or main.....
Main to shayad boond bhi nahi hu abhi....
Par fir bhi itni ijjat dene ka shukria....
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«Reply #29 on: March 21, 2011, 01:03:52 PM » |
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thanx rahim... 3rd aur Last wali awesomatic hai,.
Khush rahiye..!
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