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Zameen pe rahne wali meri aankhon ki noor ho tum
Dil ki dharkan ki tarah mere dil mein basi ho tum
Mere is beraan zindagi ki har pal ki saathi ho tum
Koi agar hum se yeh pooche ki meri kaun ho tum
Garvh ke saath kahta hoon ki meri zindagi ho tum
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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2010, 07:19:12 AM » |
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wahhhhhhhhhhhh
kya mast baat kahi sir ji aapne...sahi me last stanza to bht hi achcha laga........bht bht bht bht hi ahchci lagi ye short sweet peshkash.....
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2010, 07:25:12 AM » |
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Yeh main ne kabhi yo par likha tha
Usse pahle kisi ke liye likha tha
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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2010, 07:29:38 AM » |
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koi bht hi spl rahi hogi jo bhi hogi wo...jab likha itna pyara h wo khud kitni pyari hongi
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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2010, 07:31:22 AM » |
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Woh ab is duniya mein nahin hai
Kisi ki nazar lag gayee thi
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«Reply #5 on: November 28, 2010, 07:33:51 AM » |
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ohhhhhhh....im sorry.....
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«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2010, 07:42:08 AM » |
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Zindagi naye sirey se jeena parta hai kabhi kabhi
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«Reply #7 on: November 28, 2010, 07:47:22 AM » |
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hmmm sahi hai..sab kuch badal jata hai ek pal me
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«Reply #8 on: November 28, 2010, 07:51:26 AM » |
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issi ko jeena kahte hai
Yahi to zindagi hai
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2010, 07:52:53 AM » |
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hmmm sahi h
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2010, 07:55:25 AM » |
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main galat kab hua
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2010, 07:57:35 AM » |
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kabhi nahin.....
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«Reply #12 on: November 28, 2010, 08:01:11 AM » |
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Bhagwaan ki kripa hai
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«Reply #13 on: November 28, 2010, 12:49:22 PM » |
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Wah wah masterji......bahut khoob likha hai aapne......Usko padha tou diya tha na aapne.......Izhaare-ishq kar tou diya tha na.......accident tha ya koi lambi beemaari.... Thodi he thee milan kee ghadi teri uss pari ke saath
De naa saki wo paani-grahan kar haathon me haath Chaand sitaron mein basne wali zannat ki hoor ho tum
Zameen pe rahne wali meri aankhon ki noor ho tum
Dil ki dharkan ki tarah mere dil mein basi ho tum
Mere is beraan zindagi ki har pal ki saathi ho tum
Koi agar hum se yeh pooche ki meri kaun ho tum
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«Reply #14 on: November 28, 2010, 12:56:33 PM » |
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Chaand sitaron mein basne wali zannat ki hoor ho tum
Zameen pe rahne wali meri aankhon ki noor ho tum
Dil ki dharkan ki tarah mere dil mein basi ho tum
Mere is beraan zindagi ki har pal ki saathi ho tum
Koi agar hum se yeh pooche ki meri kaun ho tum
Garvh ke saath kahta hoon ki meri zindagi ho tum
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