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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2010, 06:56:44 PM »

bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne Vb ji... bahut bahut sundar likha hai... bahut achcha likhte hain aap... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!


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uzma anokhiladli

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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2010, 07:17:04 PM »

Another good poetry........

hum sara qisa keh bethay bus ziker tumhara chora tha
kuch khusboo apnay pas rakhi hay or to koi bat nahee (from my ghazal)


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2010, 08:14:53 PM »

Wah bahut khoob VB ji.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.bahut achi lagi.heart touching creation, great lines Uzma ji.excellent Hats off to you!


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2010, 08:41:56 PM »

for sharing such pieces of your artwork!


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uzma anokhiladli

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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2010, 05:27:04 AM »

thanks Madhu ji,ap ko mairi lines pasand aain,(hope u will read the full ghazal soon)


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2010, 06:24:53 AM »

Quote from: vb on June 01, 2010, 03:31:43 PM

Aray larki, jo tum chaho tu kya kuch ho nahi sakta
Jo tum chaho, ye nanha dil tumhara ro nahi sakta
Jisay tum dakhe lo ik baar, apni narm nazron say
woh taara he nahi, jo apni hastee kho nahi sakta

zamaanay bhar k dukh to bhaamp letee ho nigahon say
kabhi khud apni he nazron say tum ne khud ko dekha hay?
Jo tum chaho tu bijli ban k karkay ge ye gardon par (gardon = aasman)
Gulabi haath k daaman main jo nanhi see rekha hay

Nihaan kar lo ge ye nanhi si boonden apni ankhon main?
tumhen lagta hay vb say chhupa lo ge ye dukh apnay?
sadda in siskiyon ki apnay seenay main daba lo ge?
nazar aain gay na vb ko ye tootay hoovay sapnay?

Haan! ye tu sub he kehtay hain k vb jee hain aawaara
ye such hay un say tum paymaan-e-ulfat kar nahi sakti
Khuda jaanay kahan, kab, kis waqat, duniya say uth jain
jo tum chaho bhe tu un say mohabbat kar nahi sakti

chalo mana k apnay dukh tum un ko day nahi sakti
magar un say ye apnay saaray dukh tum keh tu sakti thee
haqeeqat hay k vb jee ki duniya main andheray hain
magar kuch roze un k dil main chhup kar reh tu sakti thee

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kisi k pyaar main likhay huvay geeton k gulaab
aaj baazaar main biktay hain, khareeday ga koi?
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"Tum nahi ho tu kis qadar veeran
Har gali hum ko nazar aatee hay
Jaisay ba-waqt-e-naz’a aankhon main
Maut, dheeray say theher jatee" - vb

Waah vb ji!

Khaasaa gahraa 'soch' hai aapkey zehn-o-dil mein! Bahut khoob! Apnee aankhoun ko 'monitor' ki 'chamak' sey bachaaney key liye, aaj-kal 'yo' key apney saathiyoun ki nazmeyn/gazleyn padh nahin paa rahaa huun; leykin aaj pahiley hi peij par aapki nazm par nigaah parh hi gayee, to fir usey pooraa hi padhh gayaa! Bahut achchhaa lagaa!

- abd bundeli


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2010, 08:44:38 AM »

klaskar jee! buhat shukriya k parha aap ne or itnay achhay comments chhoray...


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riyaz106

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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2010, 11:26:00 AM »

Wah VB ji, achhi lagi aapki ye creation. Daad hazir hai.


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2010, 01:07:18 PM »

uzma anokhiladli jee.. buhat shukriya k parha aap ne or nice comments deyay.. buhat he khoobsurat sher likha aap ne... hope k hum poori ghazal parh saken gay..


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2010, 01:08:24 PM »

madhuwesh jee! .. buhat shurkiya k waqt deti hain aap or parh letee hain.. or phir nice comments chhore jaatee hain..


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2010, 01:09:56 PM »

Anonymous jee! aap ka shukriya k pasand kiya aap ne isay.. artwork kya hay.. bus aarhi tirchhi lakeeren khenchtay hain.. or show case main saja detay hain..


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2010, 01:15:30 PM »

buhat shukriya aap ka Abdbundeli jee k parha aap ne.. or nice comments chhoray aap ne... dariyaon/samandaron ki gehrai or wahan chhupay motiyon tak hamaari rasai kahan... hum to bus door say he kharay samandaron ko dakhe rahay hain..

main hayrat-o-hasrat ka maara, khaamoshe khara hon sahil par
dariyayay mohabbat kehta hay, aa kuch bhe nahi paa-yaab hain hum
(by Shaad sahab)


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2010, 01:16:34 PM »

riyaz106 jee! .. buhat shukriya aap ka k waqt diya aap ne.. parha isay.. or itnay nice comments is poem ki nazar kiyay..


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2010, 02:51:19 PM »

Nice creation Vb Ji
Keep it up


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