keh dejay... (NM) -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: June 02, 2010, 03:44:21 PM »

...Aarhi tirchi lakeeron ko tarteeb mein laana and alfaaz mein sajana and usmein say aik nagma eizad karna...yeh aik poet kee skill thehri and samandaron kee gehrayee naapna unki skill jo is artwork ko dekh-parakh rahay hotay hain...canvas kee, poem kee ya samandar kee gehrayee ke liye motiyon ko nikaal laana zaroori nahin, aik art mein ya poem mein unka zikr ho yeh hee kaafi hay...


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«Reply #16 on: June 02, 2010, 04:13:44 PM »

Quote from: vb on June 02, 2010, 01:15:30 PM

buhat shukriya aap ka Abdbundeli jee k parha aap ne.. or nice comments chhoray aap ne... dariyaon/samandaron ki gehrai or wahan chhupay motiyon tak hamaari rasai kahan... hum to bus door say he kharay samandaron ko dakhe rahay hain..

main hayrat-o-hasrat ka maara, khaamoshe khara hon sahil par
dariyayay mohabbat kehta hay, aa kuch bhe nahi paa-yaab hain hum
(by Shaad sahab)

Dear vb ji!

Beykaraan bahar mein rawaan seepee,
Waqaar-e-husn jaantee hai kyaa?
Kash, gouhar bhi deykhtaa, kitnaa
Aab hai uskey hansin paikar mein!!

- abd bundeli


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #17 on: June 02, 2010, 04:17:55 PM »

Jee bilkul theek kaha aap ne.. Anonymous jee.. sirf likh lena kaafi nahi.. parhnay/samajhnay walay bhe buhat ehmiyat rakhtay hian.. hum aap k aalaa zouq ki daad detay hain...

in aarhi/tirchhi lakiron say hum khud bhe tasavur main kheltay rehtay hian.. kabhi koi surat ban kar ubhartee hain.. tu kabhi koi manzar..

aap ka shukriya k comments chhoray aap ne..


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #18 on: June 02, 2010, 04:25:15 PM »

abdbundeli jee! buhat he khoobsurat sher kahay aap ne..
and bilkul theek kaha aap ne..

bakol-e-iqbal
"agar dekha bhe us ne saaray aalam ko tu kya dekha
nazar aaee na kuch apni haqeeqat jaam say jam ko"


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #19 on: June 03, 2010, 05:57:54 AM »

Quote from: vb on June 02, 2010, 04:25:15 PM

Shukriyah vb ji!

Unhain kyaa chaahiye, jeetey hain khud hamdam samajh kar, jo?
Unhain kyaa chaahiye, beetey hain khud, shabnam samajh kar, jo?
Piyaa hai jin ney chashmoun sey, pilaaye kyaa unhain saaqee;
Unhain kyaa chaahiye, peetey hain khud, zamzam samajh kar, jo?

- abd bundeli


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #20 on: June 03, 2010, 06:09:04 AM »

BAHOOT KHOOB Abd ji


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #21 on: June 03, 2010, 08:38:39 AM »

abdbundeli jee!
buhat hee khoobsurat sher kahay aap ne... khoob alfaz say kheltay hain aap.. hamari dua hay k aap ka qalam hamesha salaamat or qaaim-o-daaim rahay...

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mere humdam!ye shabnam ho k zamzam ho, pa hardam ho
jo peena hay tu jeena hay, walay paani k meena hay
unhen kya chahiyay, kya jaaniyay, bus itna ku na maniyay
samandar main k mandar main, meraa he aab-geena hay
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«Reply #22 on: June 03, 2010, 02:11:44 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on June 03, 2010, 06:09:04 AM

BAHOOT KHOOB Abd ji

Thanks a lot, Pooja ji!

- abdbundeli


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #23 on: June 03, 2010, 02:33:15 PM »

Quote from: vb on June 03, 2010, 08:38:39 AM

Duaa key liye bahut-bahut shukriyah vb ji!

Anaasir hi anaasir hain: yahaan hon, hon wahaan chaahey!
Samandar ho, ki, mandar ho, ki, Lailee-Qais muttahidah!!
Talaasheyn par kahaan ham aaj jaa kar rooh-e-Aadam ko?
Kahaan khoonreyz galiyon mein anaasir rahey muttahidah?

- abd bundeli


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #24 on: June 03, 2010, 02:44:38 PM »

Vb g and Abdbundeli g...

...I am obligated to appreciate the choice and arrangement of words that bring your conscious thoughts in such an amazing format...!!! God bless those Qalamz!


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #25 on: June 03, 2010, 03:49:07 PM »

abdbundeli jee!.. buhat khoob sher kahay aap ne...
khush rahiyay...

suna hay abd jee hum ne, k duniya hay mohabbat ki
jo na bhe ho tu hum pooja karen har aan chaahat ki
wo Aadam ho, Hawa, Shaytaan ho, ya nasl-e-Aadam ho
har ik ansar ko hay taaleem-e-maktab, raah-e-raahat ki

anaasir ka milan hona zaroori tu nahi lakin
faqat ik khof-e-hijr-o-ghum say yun moom morna kunkar?
jo qismat main andheray hon, na manzil ho na rasta ho
khalaaon main bhataknay ko bhala yun chhorna kunkar?

kisi say baat karnay ka sahaara hain faqat nazmen
agar such poochiyay tu sher say rughbat nahi hum ko
yahan ash'aar ki zulfon say bhe hum khaletay rehtay
magar us husn-e-bazm-e-yaar say fursat nahi hum ko


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #26 on: June 03, 2010, 03:50:49 PM »

Anonymous jee! aap ka shukriya k waqt day kar parha aap ne, waqt diya, and nice comments chhoray..


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #27 on: June 04, 2010, 10:50:29 AM »

Quote from: vb on June 03, 2010, 03:49:07 PM

Thanks vb ji!

Bahut achchhaa kahaa hai aapney muhtarim vb ji!
Sahee hai: "husn-e-bazm-e-yaar say fursat" nahin miltee!
Zarooree hai, hamaarey paas kuchh aisaa muqaddas ho,
Ki, tanhaayi rahey, fir bhi, kalee dil ki rahey khiltee!!

- abd bundeli


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Re: keh dejay... (by vb)

«Reply #28 on: June 04, 2010, 10:52:49 AM »

Quote from: Anonymously sent on June 03, 2010, 02:44:38 PM

Vb g and Abdbundeli g...

...I am obligated to appreciate the choice and arrangement of words that bring your conscious thoughts in such an amazing format...!!! God bless those Qalamz!

Thanks dear 'Anonymous' ji!

- abd bundeli


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