kehne hi se taalaab samander nahi hota

by Tasleem ahmad Tasleem on April 03, 2010, 08:46:31 AM
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maa baap ke marne pe beghar nahi hota
Bhai ka agar dil mere patthar nahi hota
hanlaaki azal hi se wo ham zoq hein lekin
bhanwra kabhi titli ke brabar nahi hota
ye uski msiyat he jise chahe nawaze
kehne hi se taalab samander nahi hota
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2010, 09:26:16 AM »
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Bahut khoob tasleem ji..!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2010, 05:48:45 PM »
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Marhaba Tasleem sb. haqeeqat par mabni aapke ye ashaar bahut achhe lage. Halaate-hazra par bahut khoobsurti se aapne purkashish andaaz mein ye ashaar kahen hain.
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2010, 10:55:40 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Tasleem Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2010, 03:49:08 AM »
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maa baap ke marne pe beghar nahi hota
Bhai ka agar dil mere patthar nahi hota
hanlaaki azal hi se wo ham zoq hein lekin
bhanwra kabhi titli ke brabar nahi hota
ye uski msiyat he jise chahe nawaze
kehne hi se taalab samander nahi hota

Nice one Tasleem Ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2010, 11:16:45 AM »
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Subhan_allah Subhan_allah Tasleem saheb......dil to chahta hai ke aapke hath choom le......intehaiee khoobsurat peshkash.

Aap hi ke kalaam ki zameen par chend sher hamare bhi...

Khoobsurti bhi hai roshni bhi
Chand magar suraj sa tawangar nahi hota

Mil jate hai yu to bohat badhaal zamane me
Majoosi magar har ek kalandar nahi hota

Naf..Mar..
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2010, 02:23:52 PM »
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wah bahut achhi peshkash. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
kehne hi se talab samander nahin hota.
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