Khaamoshee ne sun lee hai..........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on February 10, 2011, 01:28:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 11, 2011, 01:02:56 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Tamanna jee!
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«Reply #16 on: March 11, 2011, 01:04:14 PM »
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Bahut bahut dhanywaad Naresh jee!
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«Reply #17 on: March 11, 2011, 01:07:33 PM »
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Behad se bhee zyaadaa shukriyaa Parwaaz jee...aap kee kalam se nikale beshqeematee motiyoN kee aabhaa hume bahut lubhaatee hai ....yuNhee apnee aamad humaare kalaam par darj karaate raheN......
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«Reply #18 on: March 11, 2011, 01:45:03 PM »
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Nicely written, keep it up.
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«Reply #19 on: March 11, 2011, 02:02:48 PM »
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mAST POEM mAMTA-DI.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 10, 2011, 01:28:45 PM
roke nahee ruktaa hai ye josh e jawaanee hai
khud raah banaa legaa bahtaa huaa paanee hai

naaqaabil e pursish haiN haalaat mere dil ke
tootaa saa khilounaa hai barbaad kahaanee hai

yuN saath meraa kab tak degee meree barbaadee
ye sustqadam dhadkan bas chhootatee jaanee hai

virse me nahee miltee aamaal kee ye doulat
khud nek karam karke tujhko hee kamaanee hai

khaamoshee ne sun lee hai tanhaai kee sab baateN
hai ishq bahut inme yaaree ye puraanee hai

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #20 on: March 26, 2011, 12:50:11 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Shihab jee!gazal kaa yahee sher mujhe bhee behad pasand hai.......
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«Reply #21 on: March 26, 2011, 12:52:04 AM »
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Shukriyaa Koyal! lekin tum se umeed kuchh or hee thee.......kaash do lines tum bhee likhtee .......hameshaa kee tarah....
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«Reply #22 on: March 26, 2011, 12:54:07 AM »
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Shukriyaa MHussain jee








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«Reply #23 on: March 26, 2011, 01:07:37 AM »
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boht acha likha hai mamta ji
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«Reply #24 on: March 26, 2011, 01:16:47 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Saahill!
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«Reply #25 on: March 26, 2011, 02:33:22 PM »
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Haan mamta-di likhne tou baithee thee do line par....


Khaamosh kar deeya aur tanhaa chhod diya thaa
Khaamoshee ne sun kar teri tanhaai ki baatein

Tanha tanha sochti rahi kaisi ye meri joshe jawaani hai
Subak-subak k rota he dil aankhon k rastey paani behtaa hai

Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 10, 2011, 01:28:45 PM
roke nahee ruktaa hai ye josh e jawaanee hai
khud raah banaa legaa bahtaa huaa paanee hai

naaqaabil e pursish haiN haalaat mere dil ke
tootaa saa khilounaa hai barbaad kahaanee hai

yuN saath meraa kab tak degee meree barbaadee
ye sustqadam dhadkan bas chhootatee jaanee hai

virse me nahee miltee aamaal kee ye doulat
khud nek karam karke tujhko hee kamaanee hai

khaamoshee ne sun lee hai tanhaai kee sab baateN
hai ishq bahut inme yaaree ye puraanee hai

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #26 on: March 26, 2011, 03:08:52 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB Mamta ji as usual behad khoobsoorat.
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«Reply #27 on: March 26, 2011, 11:56:25 PM »
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Waaah Koyal ! bas tumhaari yahi adaa to mann ko bhaatee hai........iske binaa tumhara comment adhoora lagtaa hai.
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«Reply #28 on: March 26, 2011, 11:57:08 PM »
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Shukriyaa Suresh jee!
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«Reply #29 on: March 27, 2011, 06:24:40 AM »
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Mast Mast Peshkash Mamta Ji.
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