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                              mujh  ko  naseeb  ne be-naqaab kar  diya...,
                              aisa  na  thaa,  usne  kharaab  kar diya...,

                              mere  khaar  hone  pe use ranj bahot tha...,
                              faut  ho gaya, jab  se  gulaab  kar diya...,

                              khushqi  ne  mujhe  nikhara to nahin hai...,
                              iss khyaal se khud ko zer-e-aab kar diya...,

                              dekha karta  ashaar ko  aksar nazro.n se...,
                              poori ki poori ghazal ko sharaab kar diya...,

                              karne laga  raqs din-o-raat  ab  bechain...,
                              mohabbat kya  kiya usne girdaab kar diya...,


                              
                              

                              
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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2013, 02:33:22 AM »
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Waaaahhhhh bahut khoob Adil jee..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2013, 03:27:41 AM »
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   dekha karta  ashaar ko  aksar nazro.n se...,
                              poori ki poori ghazal ko sharaab kar diya...,

                              karne laga  raqs din-o-raat  ab  bechain...,
                              mohabbat kya  kiya usne girdaab kar diya...,



Kya bat hai..............Bahut Khoob.!!
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2013, 03:37:39 AM »
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                              mujh  ko  naseeb  ne be-naqaab kar  diya...,
                              aisa  na  thaa,  usne  kharaab  kar diya...,

                              mere  khaar  hone  pe use ranj bahot tha...,
                              faut  ho gaya, jab  se  gulaab  kar diya...,

                              khushqi  ne  mujhe  nikhara to nahin hai...,
                              iss khyaal se khud ko zer-e-aab kar diya...,

                              dekha karta  ashaar ko  aksar nazro.n se...,
                              poori ki poori ghazal ko sharaab kar diya...,

                              karne laga  raqs din-o-raat  ab  bechain...,
                              mohabbat kya  kiya usne girdaab kar diya...,


                              
                              

                              


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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2013, 10:35:41 AM »
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dekha karta  ashaar ko  aksar nazro.n se...,
poori ki poori ghazal ko sharaab kar diya...,

karne laga  raqs din-o-raat  ab  bechain...,
mohabbat kya  kiya usne girdaab kar diya...,

 Bahut khoob Adil bhai
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2013, 12:19:17 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2013, 12:43:29 PM »
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वाह...वाह...बैचन जी...बहुत खूब....ढेरों ढेरों दाद और मुबारकबाद.....
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2013, 03:02:21 PM »
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kyaaa baaaat hai....
dekha karta  ashaar ko  aksar nazro.n se...,
poori ki poori ghazal ko sharaab kar diya...,

karne laga  raqs din-o-raat  ab  bechain...,
mohabbat kya  kiya usne girdaab kar diya...,
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2013, 07:10:48 PM »
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dekha karta  ashaar ko  aksar nazro.n se...,
poori ki poori ghazal ko sharaab kar diya...,

karne laga  raqs din-o-raat  ab  bechain...,
mohabbat kya  kiya usne girdaab kar diya...,

                              waaahh.....

Bahot acchaa kaafiyaa chunaa hai aapne Adil ji aur use bahot khoobi se nibhaaya bhi hai.... meri jaanib se laakhon daad pesh haiN.. likhte rahye... quoted aashar hame behad pasand aaye..

Sidra
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2013, 01:41:32 PM »
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Waaaaaah Adil ji pyaari aur umda peshkash... sabhi ashaar khoob hue... dil se hazaron daaaaaaaad qubool kijiye...
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