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Jo khabar apne gireba.n ki nahi rakhta hai
Har koi apney siwa usko bura lagata hai
Khubsurat hai bahot pyar ka aalam lekin
Chashma nafrat ka laga ho to nahi dikhta hai
Jo hai buzdil wo to har roz hi marta hai magar
Jo bahaadur hai wo ek baar maraa karta hai
Koi zardaar ho, raaja ho ya ho taaqatwar
Maut jab aati hai, koi bhi nahi bachta hai
Zindagi mein na wo paayega kabhi dil ka sukoon
Qadr jo apney buzurgo.n ki nahi karta hai
Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 12:31:32 PM » |
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Jo khabar apne gireba.n ki nahi rakhta hai
Har koi apney siwa usko bura lagata hai
Khubsurat hai bahot pyar ka aalam lekin
Chashma nafrat ka laga ho to nahi dikhta hai
Riyaz Ashna
bahoot khoob riyaz ji |
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2010, 12:38:40 PM » |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 03:19:37 PM » |
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Bekarar ji aapka tah e dil se shukriya ke aapne meri koshish ko pasand kiyabahoot khoob riyaz ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2010, 04:59:16 AM » |
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Jo khabar apne gireba.n ki nahi rakhta hai
Har koi apney siwa usko bura lagata hai
Khubsurat hai bahot pyar ka aalam lekin
Chashma nafrat ka laga ho to nahi dikhta hai
Jo hai buzdil wo to har roz hi marta hai magar
Jo bahaadur hai wo ek baar maraa karta hai
Koi zardaar ho, raaja ho ya ho taaqatwar
Maut jab aati hai, koi bhi nahi bachta hai
Zindagi mein na wo paayega kabhi dil ka sukoon
Qadr jo apney buzurgo.n ki nahi karta hai
Riyaz Ashna
Very Impressive creation ......Riyaz Ji......dil se daad.... ! |
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SHABBIR AHMED HASHMI
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2010, 04:08:14 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2010, 02:16:47 AM » |
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Jo khabar apne gireba.n ki nahi rakhta hai
Har koi apney siwa usko bura lagata hai
Khubsurat hai bahot pyar ka aalam lekin
Chashma nafrat ka laga ho to nahi dikhta hai
Jo hai buzdil wo to har roz hi marta hai magar
Jo bahaadur hai wo ek baar maraa karta hai
Koi zardaar ho, raaja ho ya ho taaqatwar
Maut jab aati hai, koi bhi nahi bachta hai
Zindagi mein na wo paayega kabhi dil ka sukoon
Qadr jo apney buzurgo.n ki nahi karta hai
Riyaz Ashna
Waah ! Riyaz Sahab bahoot khoob, andaze-bayan aur fankari ki bemisal ghazal, aap ka kya kahna!!
I remember my teacher's quote "...follow my advice not because I know more than you but I have more experience of failure" |
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riyaz106
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2010, 09:47:22 AM » |
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Naresh Sahab aapka bahot bahot shukriya ke aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai.Very Impressive creation ......Riyaz Ji......dil se daad.... !
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riyaz106
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«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2010, 01:53:18 AM » |
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Shihab bhai aapka behad shukriya ke aapne ghazal ko pasand kiya. Hamesha khush rahiye.Riyaz Bhai Aadab Umeed Karta Hun Aap Khairiyat Se Honge.
Aur Kya Kahun Bhai Aapto Hain Hi Lajwaab Humesha Kuch
Na Kuch Naya Sikhne Ko Milta Hai Aapse Hume...
Bade Hi Khoobsurat Andaz Aur Sadgi Ke Saath Saaf Saaf
Lafzon Mein Har Baar Aap Badi Se Badi Baat Aasani Se Likh Jaate Hai.
Aapki Har Peshkash Mein Koi Na Koi Sikh Jarur Hoti Hai
Har Baar Mujh Jaise Na Samajhko Aapse Bahut Kuch Sikhne Ko Milta Ha..
Har Baar Ki Tarah Is Baar Bhi Aapko Parhke Dil Baagh Baagh Ho Gaya
Aagaz Se Lekar Anjaam Tab Bas Behtareen Hi Behtareen...
Kashkar Mujhe Aakhir Ki 4 Lines Bahut Achchi Aur Sachchi Lagi
Bahut Hi Khooburat Peshkash Hai Bhai Mere...
Hazaron Dad ...
ALLAH Pak Aapko Aur Hunar Se Nawaaze Dilon Mein Ghar Kar Jane Ke.
Yun Hi Bazm Ko Roshan Karte Rahiye...
ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rakhe...
~Shiab~
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2010, 05:12:41 AM » |
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Shabbir Bhai aapka behad shukriya ke aapne meri ye ghazal pasand ki aur tareef ki. Allah aapko khush rakhe.
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2010, 10:40:07 AM » |
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Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai Riyaz Bhai
Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Kaise Tareef Karun
Ek Betareen Aur Khoobsurat Peshkash
Bahut Kuch Sikh Deti Hui Yeh Ghazal
Bahut Hi Achchi Ban Padi Hai Janaab
Dad Hazir Karta Hoon
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2010, 12:46:48 PM » |
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Pandey sahab kin alfaaz mein aapka shukriya adaa karun. Aap hamesha mera hausla badhate hain. Ghazal pasand karne ke liye aapka tah e dil se shukriya. Aapse guzarish ke aap bhi kuchh is bazm ko ataa farmayen.Waah ! Riyaz Sahab bahoot khoob, andaze-bayan aur fankari ki bemisal ghazal, aap ka kya kahna!!
I remember my teacher's quote "...follow my advice not because I know more than you but I have more experience of failure"
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«Reply #13 on: July 19, 2010, 05:05:15 PM » |
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Shabbir bhai aapne ghaur se ghazal parhi, waqt diya aur pasbnd kiya iske tahe dil se shukria. Hamesha khush rahiye. Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai Riyaz Bhai
Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Kaise Tareef Karun
Ek Betareen Aur Khoobsurat Peshkash
Bahut Kuch Sikh Deti Hui Yeh Ghazal
Bahut Hi Achchi Ban Padi Hai Janaab
Dad Hazir Karta Hoon
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2010, 09:49:37 PM » |
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wah wah riyaz sb bahot hi umda janab. shabbir ahmed hashmi sb ne matla aur maqta ko saraha .. mujhe bhi bahot pasand aaye ,,hazaro daad janab hamari janib se qubool kijiega.
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