~*~ 'Khamosh' ghabraya nahin ~*~ by Rahim

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Yeh nazm maine uss daur kay liye likhi hai jab mere paas bhi paisa ajaega..Ek kalpana samjhiyega isse.. Yeh nazm unpe apply kar jaegi jo muflisi kay daur se nikal kar amiri main aye hai..Logon ka bartav apke prati kitna badal jata hai, yeh darshane ki koshish hai meri..

Aisa shayad hi koi morr ho jab zindagi ne mujhe sataya nahin,
Bas apne ansuon ko maine sabko dikhaya nahin..

Bhool jaya karte hai log dokha dene wale ko mager main nahin,
Akhir bhoolane kay liye toh maine us’se dil lagaya nahin..

Mujhe yunhi gurur nahin apne kirdar par ae dost,
Sitam karne walon ko bhi maine rulaya nahin..

Aj do paise hai toh sab poochte hai haal mera yahan,
Muflisi kay daur main kisi ne mujhe apne paas bithaya nahin..

Log aksar kehte hai mujhe ‘doulat hai isiliye sukun main ho’,
Yeh jante nahin kay andhiyon main bhi ‘Khamosh’ ghabraya nahin..

Bewaffaon kay liye yahan aksar bas bad’duaein hi nikalti hai dil se,
Who yaad main roye meri; aisa khayal tak mere mann main aya nahin..

Mujhe muskurate dekh sabko apne ghum bade nazar ane lage,
Sahi hi hai; har raah chalte ko maine apni nazmein parraya nahin..

Aj paise ki lalach main jism bechne wale toh kayi hai meri paasm
Paisa chorr do phir bhi saath dungi tumhara main ‘Khamosh’,
Aisa kehke kisi ne apna haath mere haath main thamaya nahin..

Khuda pe be-inteha bharosa rakhta hai 'Khamosh',
Isiliye toh yaaron, andhiyon main bhi main ghabraya nahin..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2011, 04:05:59 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..Apne jazbaaton ko Bahkoobi lafz Diye Hai Aapne..Bahut Khoooooob Bhai Rahim...

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Ek Ghazal main bahut Suuna Karta Hoon..Aapki yeh nazm Padhte-Padhte Woh ghazal Zehan Mein Aa gayi..


Karoge Yaad To Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Guzarte Waqt Ki hai mauj Tehar jaayegi

Yeh Chand Beete Zamaane Ka Aaena Hoga
Bhatakti Abr mein Chehra Koi Bana Hoga

Udaas Raah Koi Dastaan Sunayegi
Karoge Yaad To Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2011, 05:04:54 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI
Quote from: -Rahim- on June 14, 2011, 03:45:38 PM
Yeh nazm maine uss daur kay liye likhi hai jab mere paas bhi paisa ajaega..Ek kalpana samjhiyega isse.. Yeh nazm unpe apply kar jaegi jo muflisi kay daur se nikal kar amiri main aye hai..Logon ka bartav apke prati kitna badal jata hai, yeh darshane ki koshish hai meri..

Aisa shayad hi koi morr ho jab zindagi ne mujhe sataya nahin,
Bas apne ansuon ko maine sabko dikhaya nahin..

Bhool jaya karte hai log dokha dene wale ko mager main nahin,
Akhir bhoolane kay liye toh maine us’se dil lagaya nahin..

Mujhe yunhi gurur nahin apne kirdar par ae dost,
Sitam karne walon ko bhi maine rulaya nahin..

Aj do paise hai toh sab poochte hai haal mera yahan,
Muflisi kay daur main kisi ne mujhe apne paas bithaya nahin..

Log aksar kehte hai mujhe ‘doulat hai isiliye sukun main ho’,
Yeh jante nahin kay andhiyon main bhi ‘Khamosh’ ghabraya nahin..

Bewaffaon kay liye yahan aksar bas bad’duaein hi nikalti hai dil se,
Who yaad main roye meri; aisa khayal tak mere mann main aya nahin..

Mujhe muskurate dekh sabko apne ghum bade nazar ane lage,
Sahi hi hai; har raah chalte ko maine apni nazmein parraya nahin..

Aj paise ki lalach main jism bechne wale toh kayi hai meri paasm
Paisa chorr do phir bhi saath dungi tumhara main ‘Khamosh’,
Aisa kehke kisi ne apna haath mere haath main thamaya nahin..

Khuda pe be-inteha bharosa rakhta hai 'Khamosh',
Isiliye toh yaaron, andhiyon main bhi main ghabraya nahin..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2011, 06:15:17 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 14, 2011, 04:05:59 PM
Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..Apne jazbaaton ko Bahkoobi lafz Diye Hai Aapne..Bahut Khoooooob Bhai Rahim...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ek Ghazal main bahut Suuna Karta Hoon..Aapki yeh nazm Padhte-Padhte Woh ghazal Zehan Mein Aa gayi..


Karoge Yaad To Har Baat Yaad Aayegi
Guzarte Waqt Ki hai mauj Tehar jaayegi

Yeh Chand Beete Zamaane Ka Aaena Hoga
Bhatakti Abr mein Chehra Koi Bana Hoga

Udaas Raah Koi Dastaan Sunayegi
Karoge Yaad To Har Baat Yaad Aayegi


Teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Aur kya ghazal share ki hai apne..
MashAllah..ager mauka mile, toh yeh ghazal ka link bhejiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2011, 06:16:08 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 14, 2011, 05:04:54 PM
KYA BAAT HAI
Teh teh dil se shukriya Manoj jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2011, 04:49:42 AM »
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rahimji.... aapki nazm ka ek ek lafz, ek ek ehasas, ek ek baat, dil mai utar hui hai.... ye sab kuchh dubara jee lia aisa mahsus hua aapki nazm padte padte..... dard ki kahani umra se bhi lambi hai....

bahut bahut khub.....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2011, 05:28:49 AM »
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[Color=brown} Rahim Ji.. Bht Khoob.. Koi Lafz Nahi hai Bayaan Karne.. Aap ki Har Lafz wa Ehsaas Dil Pe Utar Jata Hai.. Mashallah Bht Khoob Likha Hai Har Baar Ki Tarah.. [/color]

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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2011, 09:30:13 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on June 15, 2011, 04:49:42 AM
rahimji.... aapki nazm ka ek ek lafz, ek ek ehasas, ek ek baat, dil mai utar hui hai.... ye sab kuchh dubara jee lia aisa mahsus hua aapki nazm padte padte..... dard ki kahani umra se bhi lambi hai....

bahut bahut khub.....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Manju jee..
Dil see daad di apne aur dil tak ponch gayi..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2011, 09:36:38 AM »
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Quote from: SkykiTears on June 15, 2011, 05:28:49 AM
[Color=brown} Rahim Ji.. Bht Khoob.. Koi Lafz Nahi hai Bayaan Karne.. Aap ki Har Lafz wa Ehsaas Dil Pe Utar Jata Hai.. Mashallah Bht Khoob Likha Hai Har Baar Ki Tarah.. [/color]

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Apka teh teh dil se shukriya Sky jee..
Bas yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2011, 10:16:24 AM »
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Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2011, 11:04:53 AM »
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2,3,4,5 bejod he bhaiiii...bahut bahut khooob...lakhon daaad..



he kareeb ab wo yaar mera jinse pehle naata na tha
me to badla nahi dost shayad mera 'naam' badal gaya
itni ijjat nahin thi unki nazar me jab khali haath tha
ab bhi hath me kuchh anhi dost shayad "Abhi" ka maqaam badal gaya~
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2011, 11:14:48 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 15, 2011, 10:16:24 AM
Bahut khoob Rahim Ji
Teh teh dil se shukriya Rajesh jee..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2011, 11:17:14 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on June 15, 2011, 11:04:53 AM
2,3,4,5 bejod he bhaiiii...bahut bahut khooob...lakhon daaad..



he kareeb ab wo yaar mera jinse pehle naata na tha
me to badla nahi dost shayad mera 'naam' badal gaya
itni ijjat nahin thi unki nazar me jab khali haath tha
ab bhi hath me kuchh anhi dost shayad "Abhi" ka maqaam badal gaya~
Bahaut dinn baad nazar aye ho Abhi bhai..
Teh teh dil se shukriya..
Aur kya kehne.. "Abhi ka maqaam badal gaya"
Kya baat hai bhai..
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Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!

Uski ankhon main bhi ashkon ka silab agaya tha uss dinn Rahim,
Mehfil main kisi ne wafa ka zikr jo cherr diya tha..!
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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2011, 11:20:44 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 15, 2011, 11:17:14 AM
Bahaut dinn baad nazar aye ho Abhi bhai..
Teh teh dil se shukriya..
Aur kya kehne.. "Abhi ka maqaam badal gaya"
Kya baat hai bhai..
Applause Applause
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!

Uski ankhon main bhi ashkon ka silab agaya tha uss dinn Rahim,
Mehfil main kisi ne wafa ka zikr jo cherr diya tha..!

bahut badhiya dost...
der ke liye maafi chahta hun ...kuchh kam hi aisa he ..waqt kam hota hai...par msg chhod diya karo meri prof par...jab bhi auga ek achha kalam padhne to milega..
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2011, 11:25:04 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on June 15, 2011, 11:20:44 AM
bahut badhiya dost...
der ke liye maafi chahta hun ...kuchh kam hi aisa he ..waqt kam hota hai...par msg chhod diya karo meri prof par...jab bhi auga ek achha kalam padhne to milega..

Shukriya dost..
Apka likha pade kayi arse hogaye..ager kuch likha ho toh bilkul post kijiyega..
aur jee yeh toh mohobat hai kay ap itni importance dete hai mujhe..
Khush rahiye..!
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