~*~ 'Khamosh' .. Kash tera bhi koi hota..~*~ by Rahim

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Ek khayal aya tha yunhi kay 'Khamosh..Kash tera bhi koi hota..'
Main jo likhna chahta tha, waisa toh nahin likh paya mager yeh
kalam bhi bas..dil se likha hai..
Bahaut pehle ek kalam likha tha jisse maine kaha tha, khichdi bani
hai..Aj dobara kahunga, Kuch khichdi si pak gayi hai..!

Kanp kapane layak fizaein aksar kehti hai mujse,
Iss bheed bharri duniya main kash koi tera bhi hota..

Aisa koi jo tere naam ki tasbiyan parrta,
Tere liye sari duniya se bhi larrta,
Kay ager Khuda tujhe sabse unchi chhoti pay rakhta,
Toh woh uss chhoti tak haste haste charrta,
Baarish se bheegi mitti ki mahek kehti hai mujse,
Iss baarish main tere saath woh bheegta,
Ae ‘Khamosh’ kash tera bhi koi aisa hota..

Aisa koi jo mohobat ki sari haddein par kar jaye,
Nam ho teri ankhein toh us’se bhi muskuraya na jaye,
Kay ager Khuda tujhe aag kay dariya kay ek kinare par rakhe,
Toh woh ek orre se dusri orre muskurate muskurate ter jaye,
Kabrastan main basi qabron ki khamoshi kehti hai mujse,
Tujh main aur hum main kya fark hai ‘Khamosh’,
Aur dil bas yehi kehta hai..kash tera bhi koi hota..

Kanp kapane layak fizaein aksar kehti hai mujse,
Iss bheed bharri duniya main kash koi tera bhi hota..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2011, 09:41:11 AM »
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wah wah lajawab post bhai
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«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2011, 01:50:15 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on July 23, 2011, 09:41:11 AM
wah wah lajawab post bhai
Teh teh dil se shukriya Sarfira jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2011, 03:15:28 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Rahim Mere Dost.... Ek Behtreen aur Umda Peshkash hai aapki... Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2011, 06:59:02 PM »
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Hum Jaan Na Chahte Hain Humara Comment Kyon Delete Kiya Gaya?
Kya Yahan Apni Dil Ki Baat Rakhne Ka Huq Nahi Hai Kisi Ko?
Kya Monitors Yun Hi Apni Manmaani Karenge? Hume Reason Chahiye
Jisne Bhi Delete Kiya Hai?
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2011, 05:38:55 AM »
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Quote from: Niha Khan on July 23, 2011, 06:59:02 PM
Hum Jaan Na Chahte Hain Humara Comment Kyon Delete Kiya Gaya?
Kya Yahan Apni Dil Ki Baat Rakhne Ka Huq Nahi Hai Kisi Ko?
Kya Monitors Yun Hi Apni Manmaani Karenge? Hume Reason Chahiye
Jisne Bhi Delete Kiya Hai?



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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2011, 07:44:32 AM »
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Kisi ka bhi comments delete karna buri baat hai.i agree with you Niha ji. sad7
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2011, 11:33:00 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 23, 2011, 03:15:28 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Rahim Mere Dost.... Ek Behtreen aur Umda Peshkash hai aapki... Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause



**~** Mann **~**
Teh teh dil se shukriya Vikas bhaijan..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2011, 02:19:14 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 22, 2011, 10:54:19 PM
Ek khayal aya tha yunhi kay 'Khamosh..Kash tera bhi koi hota..'
Main jo likhna chahta tha, waisa toh nahin likh paya mager yeh
kalam bhi bas..dil se likha hai..
Bahaut pehle ek kalam likha tha jisse maine kaha tha, khichdi bani
hai..Aj dobara kahunga, Kuch khichdi si pak gayi hai..!

Kanp kapane layak fizaein aksar kehti hai mujse,
Iss bheed bharri duniya main kash koi tera bhi hota..

Aisa koi jo tere naam ki tasbiyan parrta,
Tere liye sari duniya se bhi larrta,
Kay ager Khuda tujhe sabse unchi chhoti pay rakhta,
Toh woh uss chhoti tak haste haste charrta,
Baarish se bheegi mitti ki mahek kehti hai mujse,
Iss baarish main tere saath woh bheegta,
Ae ‘Khamosh’ kash tera bhi koi aisa hota..

Aisa koi jo mohobat ki sari haddein par kar jaye,
Nam ho teri ankhein toh us’se bhi muskuraya na jaye,
Kay ager Khuda tujhe aag kay dariya kay ek kinare par rakhe,
Toh woh ek orre se dusri orre muskurate muskurate ter jaye,
Kabrastan main basi qabron ki khamoshi kehti hai mujse,
Tujh main aur hum main kya fark hai ‘Khamosh’,
Aur dil bas yehi kehta hai..kash tera bhi koi hota..

Kanp kapane layak fizaein aksar kehti hai mujse,
Iss bheed bharri duniya main kash koi tera bhi hota..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

bahut bahut Khooob Mere Dost Rahim...

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Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Nazm Likhi Hai Aapne...Aapne Beshak Light Mood Mein Yeh Baat Kahi Hai Ke Kuch kichdi Si Pakk Gayi Hai Par Aisa Kuch Nahi, Jo Jazbaat aapne Likhe hai woh auron tak asaani se Pahunchte hai..
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2011, 03:04:02 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2011, 02:19:14 PM
bahut bahut Khooob Mere Dost Rahim...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Nazm Likhi Hai Aapne...Aapne Beshak Light Mood Mein Yeh Baat Kahi Hai Ke Kuch kichdi Si Pakk Gayi Hai Par Aisa Kuch Nahi, Jo Jazbaat aapne Likhe hai woh auron tak asaani se Pahunchte hai..
Apka teh dil se shukriya dost jo apne lavzon ko SAHI SAMJHA..
Iske liye khaas khaas shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2011, 10:51:49 AM »
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niha khan kaa comnt kyn delete hua--?
kya sirf tarifen karne ke lie hi comnt chaiye--?
ek post padhke kon kaisa feel karta hai agr usko cmnt me likhne ki manahi hai to title page par mention kiya jaye--

kisi ka cmnt delete na kia jaye
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2011, 12:08:28 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 22, 2011, 10:54:19 PM
Ek khayal aya tha yunhi kay 'Khamosh..Kash tera bhi koi hota..'
Main jo likhna chahta tha, waisa toh nahin likh paya mager yeh
kalam bhi bas..dil se likha hai..
Bahaut pehle ek kalam likha tha jisse maine kaha tha, khichdi bani
hai..Aj dobara kahunga, Kuch khichdi si pak gayi hai..!

Kanp kapane layak fizaein aksar kehti hai mujse,
Iss bheed bharri duniya main kash koi tera bhi hota..

Aisa koi jo tere naam ki tasbiyan parrta,
Tere liye sari duniya se bhi larrta,
Kay ager Khuda tujhe sabse unchi chhoti pay rakhta,
Toh woh uss chhoti tak haste haste charrta,
Baarish se bheegi mitti ki mahek kehti hai mujse,
Iss baarish main tere saath woh bheegta,
Ae ‘Khamosh’ kash tera bhi koi aisa hota..

Aisa koi jo mohobat ki sari haddein par kar jaye,
Nam ho teri ankhein toh us’se bhi muskuraya na jaye,
Kay ager Khuda tujhe aag kay dariya kay ek kinare par rakhe,
Toh woh ek orre se dusri orre muskurate muskurate ter jaye,
Kabrastan main basi qabron ki khamoshi kehti hai mujse,
Tujh main aur hum main kya fark hai ‘Khamosh’,
Aur dil bas yehi kehta hai..kash tera bhi koi hota..

Kanp kapane layak fizaein aksar kehti hai mujse,
Iss bheed bharri duniya main kash koi tera bhi hota..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


rahim sahab aap ek behtreen shayar hain.beshak. magar aapki iss nazam ki khuch line per main ittefaq nahin rakhta.

 main aapko PM kar ke apna kyaal rakhna chahoon ga .agar aap ijaazat dein to.
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«Reply #12 on: July 27, 2011, 06:46:30 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on July 26, 2011, 12:08:28 PM

rahim sahab aap ek behtreen shayar hain.beshak. magar aapki iss nazam ki khuch line per main ittefaq nahin rakhta.

 main aapko PM kar ke apna kyaal rakhna chahoon ga .agar aap ijaazat dein to.
Beshak ap PM karein..! Hume intezar rahega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: July 27, 2011, 06:47:35 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on July 26, 2011, 10:51:49 AM
niha khan kaa comnt kyn delete hua--?
kya sirf tarifen karne ke lie hi comnt chaiye--?
ek post padhke kon kaisa feel karta hai agr usko cmnt me likhne ki manahi hai to title page par mention kiya jaye--

kisi ka cmnt delete na kia jaye
Main iske bare main itna hi kahunga kay comment poem kay bare main ho toh man sakte hai mager comment, poem kay bare main nahin tha..!
Khush rahiye..!
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