~Khamosh kisi ka samaan nahin~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 29, 2010, 08:05:40 AM
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Filmon main dekte hai hum kay kabhi kabhi logon ko choose karna parrta hai do logon main..
Jisse dusre kay liye bhulaya jata hai, uss shaks kay jazbaat likh raha hoon ek darkhwast kay saath..Kabhi bhi insaanon main choices na karein..Bahaut chubti hai yeh baat "kay chorra gaya mujhe kisi aur kay liye.."
Pata nahin kay log do insaanon main kaise choose kar sakte hai kay yeh behtar hai..Kabhi na karein..
Ek dard kay saath yeh kalam likha hai mager shayad utni achi tarha nahin aa paya..
Mager ek sawal ne mujhe yeh kalam likhne par majboor kiya hai..
"Uss main aisa kya tha, jo 'Rahim' main na tha???
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Tujh par ae be-rahem ab mujhe aetbaar nahin,
Ki hai aisi daga tune; ab mujhe tera intezar nahin..

Mujh main aisa kya nahin tha jo uss main tha,
Main janta hoon iss sawal ka tere paas koi jawab nahin..

Shayad mere liye hi Faraz ne likha tha,
‘meri zeest main ek aisa shaks hai yaaron,
Jo meri umr hai aur main uska lamha bhi nahin..’

Iss baat ki ijazat nahin hai tujhe kay,
Jab chahe chorr de; jab chahe thamle,
Itna samaj le tu ae janasheen,
‘Khamosh’ koi istamal karne wala samaan nahin..

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2010, 08:21:03 AM »
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mashaallaahhh.......Rahim....dil me hulchul macha di tumne......

bht kuch keh sakti hun par kum lafzon me bas yehi.......

aaj kisi gair ki khatir tune mujhe chhoda hai
khudaya na kare wo shaks b tere sath.... dua hai meri........
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2010, 08:23:27 AM »
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Shukriya di..
bas dil se likha tha so apke dil tak poncha..mashAllah..!

Apne do lines main kafi kuch kehdiya.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2010, 03:30:32 PM »
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bahoot khoob janaab A.Raheem saheb ...daad haazir hai.
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2010, 05:26:24 PM »
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Shukriya Nazar jee.!
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2010, 05:38:43 PM »
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bahut Bahut Khoob Bhain rahim!!!

Koshish Zaroor Hogi ke iss Topic par kuch likhoon..

Bahutttttttt ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2010, 05:44:17 PM »
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Shukriya Khwaish Dost..Intezar rahega.!
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2010, 05:58:31 PM »
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Rahim bhai... aapke ek khaas dost ke shabdon me kehna chahunga ...

"KAMAAL"....!!!

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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2010, 06:19:40 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil Dost..Shukriya.!
Neel jee ki yaad taza hogayi!
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2010, 07:08:43 PM »
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Rahim Sahab Aadaab!

Behad gehare dard ko bayaaN kiya hai janab... Gar tehreer bhi likh dete to lag jata dil ko...  achcah likha hai aapne aur jo Faraaz Sahab ka sher use kiya hai mindblowing... Usual Smile
Dard per daad to nahi dii jati houNsla zarur denge...

Ek sher padha tha kahiN......



Kya karta shikayat maiN Khuda se raqeeb kii
Banda wohi kiya jo khuda ka farmaan hua tha       

Janab aise mod zindagi meiN aate hai.... aur guzar jaate hai...... Kisi baat ko dil se lagaya nahi karte.....

Aik sher arz karte hai....  Nahi yaar aapke is kalaam ke bad hum se koi sher hi nahi ban raha hai. sad5       
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2010, 07:13:41 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Parwaaz jee..Teh dil se shukriya..Apke post ne bahaut badi muskurahat la di chehre par..!
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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2010, 07:24:25 PM »
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wawwwwww Rahim thats so Nice Usual Smile Kya karein apke sab shaheri la jawab hai Usual Smile really bohat bariya hai Usual Smile  hello2
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2010, 07:26:17 PM »
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Thanksh Sameeha!
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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2010, 07:48:41 PM »
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Subhan Allah Subhan Allah,.

Bhai Rahim This Is one ur good work i really appreciate ur work,

Tumhaara Kalaam pardhke Mujhe apna Ek dard Aay,.


Uski Pasand Wo Hi Jaane,.
Main To Bas Usi Ka Tha,.

Uske Liye Main Kuch Bhi Nahi,
Aur Wo Sawaal Meri Zindagi Ka Tha,.

Wo Mera Koi Lafz Na Jaane,.
Mujhe Andaaz Uski Khamoshi Ka Tha,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2010, 07:58:03 PM »
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Azeem bhaijan, Teh dil se shukriya jo apne waqt diya aur pasand kiya,,

Badi khubsoorat lines kahi hai apne..bahaut bahaut khoob.. Applause Applause
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