KHATAA.......A.B

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                      khataa aisi to nahin,
                      ki saza-e-maut miley,
                      mainey to sirf..,
                      khud ko bechaa hai...!
                      loag watan bechtey hain....!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2010, 09:25:16 PM »
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Wah Adil ji bahut hi khoob.bahut achi lagi aapke poem.great creation.keep it up Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 10:54:55 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Adil ji... Clapping Smiley

suna tha bazaaron me samaan bikte hain,
par yahan to aajkal imaan bikte hain...
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2010, 12:49:48 AM »
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Bahut khoob Adil Ji
N  nice response Kapil
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 06:17:05 AM »
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SAZAA KE PAIMANE THAME HAI UN HAATHO NE
KHATAON KE SIWA JINHONE KIYA HI KUCHH NAHI
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2010, 06:20:40 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai     Adil Bechain ji.......

Jo kare KHATAA
kahan milti unhe saza
jinka koi KHATTA nahin
saza bhogta wahi......
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2010, 11:36:06 AM »
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Thank u Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 08, 2010, 12:49:48 AM
Bahut khoob Adil Ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2010, 12:37:53 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 07, 2010, 09:25:16 PM
Wah Adil ji bahut hi khoob.bahut achi lagi aapke poem.great creation.keep it up Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2010, 12:38:26 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Adil ji... Clapping Smiley

suna tha bazaaron me samaan bikte hain,
par yahan to aajkal imaan bikte hain...

thank you kalaskar ji
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Bahut khoob Adil Ji
N  nice response Kapil

thank you rajesh ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2010, 08:09:34 AM »
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                      khataa aisi to nahin,
                      ki saza-e-maut miley,
                      mainey to sirf..,
                      khud ko bechaa hai...!
                      loag yahan watan bechtey hain....!!!

Bahut Khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2010, 08:32:19 PM »
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Quote from: S.hashmi on May 08, 2010, 06:17:05 AM
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SAZAA KE PAIMANE THAME HAI UN HAATHO NE
KHATAON KE SIWA JINHONE KIYA HI KUCHH NAHI

NICE HASHMI JI
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2010, 07:59:56 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 18, 2010, 08:09:34 AM
Bahut Khoob!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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Quote from: S.hashmi on May 08, 2010, 06:17:05 AM
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SAZAA KE PAIMANE THAME HAI UN HAATHO NE
KHATAON KE SIWA JINHONE KIYA HI KUCHH NAHI

BEHTREEN SHER HAI HASHMI JI
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bahoot sunder ....sabhi doston ne achcha likiha..
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