khawab.....A.B

by adil bechain on April 05, 2011, 01:22:13 PM
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                          bekhudi mein aksar wo nikalte nahin hain.,
                          sharara-e- husn mein wo jalte nahin hain..,

                          mere khawab bhi tere baagh ke phool jaise hain,
                          hai khushboo bahut unmein magar khilte nahin hain,

                          hai rishta bahut gahra ki samander bhi sharmaye,
                          jaate ek hi mehfil mein per milte nahin hain,

                          sahara jab bhi mila ruk gaye bahut dair wahan pe,
                          kitne zakham lage ,raah magar badalte nahin hain,

                          dard-e-mohabbat kar deti hai bechain kabhi kabhi...!
                          ho jaam saath agar phir tadapte nahin hain..
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2011, 01:46:33 PM »
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““ hai rishta---
kamaal lajawaab aur behtareen peshkash adil ji.…
iss nagme ki tarif ke lie bhi shabd nahi mere paas.
…aapka fan ho gaya ji mai to.
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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2011, 02:25:27 PM »
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Wow !!!

I like the Poetry U make
Love the Words U Create
Ur poetry is simple Awesome
And u are Truly Great !!!


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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2011, 06:14:13 PM »
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BAhut Khub AB Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2011, 02:36:45 AM »
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nice work
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2011, 03:18:40 AM »
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USE TAQDEER HUM BANA LENGE ,

USE ANKHON MEIN HUM BASA LENGE ,

KYA HUA GAR KHUDA NE HATHON MEIN LAKEER NAI BANAYEE TERE NAAM KI,
 
LEKAR KHANJAR DIL MEIN TERE NAAM HI KHUDWA LENGE
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2011, 03:28:02 AM »
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wah wah.... bahut badiya ABji....

daad daad daad......
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«Reply #7 on: April 06, 2011, 07:06:20 AM »
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BAhut Khub AB Ji
thanks rishi ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2011, 07:08:04 AM »
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““ hai rishta---
kamaal lajawaab aur behtareen peshkash adil ji.…
iss nagme ki tarif ke lie bhi shabd nahi mere paas.
…aapka fan ho gaya ji mai to.



thanks nirala ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2011, 07:09:05 AM »
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Wow !!!

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thank you sophi ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 06, 2011, 09:09:22 AM »
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nice work

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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2011, 11:37:41 AM »
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wah wah.... bahut badiya ABji....

daad daad daad......

thanks manjum ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2011, 01:01:30 PM »
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USE TAQDEER HUM BANA LENGE ,

USE ANKHON MEIN HUM BASA LENGE ,

KYA HUA GAR KHUDA NE HATHON MEIN LAKEER NAI BANAYEE TERE NAAM KI,
 
LEKAR KHANJAR DIL MEIN TERE NAAM HI KHUDWA LENGE

THANK YOU SAHILL JI
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