KHAYAAL A.B

by adil bechain on March 21, 2009, 05:40:04 AM
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             SAANS ABHI BAAKI HAI...

             MAGAR DUM NIKAL RAHA HAI,

             ISHQ NEY MUJHEY WO DARD DIYA,
         
             AANSO  KI SHAKAL MAIN......

             GHUM NIKAL RAHA HAI....!!!


                 $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$


            KAH SAKTA AGAR MAUT SEY...

            ZARA AUR INTAZAAR KAR,

             KAR LOON PURI--HASRATAIN

            SHAYAD, QAYAMAT TAK..!!!!  

             ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

 

          DOSTI MAIN MUFT KI KARTA NAHIN.
                 
                  AAJ KAA INSAAN HOON...!

             KUCH TO KHUDGARZI  HOGI..!!!!  


                                  ADIL BECHAIN




             
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2009, 06:58:41 AM »
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bahoot khoob adil ji . first sher bahoot acha hai!
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2009, 07:18:06 AM »
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Good composition adil.
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2009, 06:52:50 PM »
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             SAANS ABHI BAAKI HAI...

             MAGAR DUM NIKAL RAHA HAI,

             ISHQ NEY MUJHEY WO DARD DIYA,
         
             AANSO  KI SHAKAL MAIN......

             GHUM NIKAL RAHA HAI....!!!


                 $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$


            KAH SAKTA AGAR MAUT SEY...

            ZARA AUR INTAZAAR KAR,

             KAR LOON PURI--HASRATAIN

            SHAYAD, QAYAMAT TAK..!!!! 

             ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

 

          DOSTI MAIN MUFT KI KARTA NAHIN.
                 
                  AAJ KAA INSAAN HOON...!

             KUCH TO KHUDGARZI  HOGI..!!!! 


                                  ADIL BECHAIN




             



wah ANIL, very nice



KHAYAAL SEY EK KHAYAAL HAMEY BHI AAYA
KISI KI GUSTAKHI NEY HAMEY BHI RULAYA
SEEDHEY RAASTEY PEH CHALEY JAA RAHEY THEY
NA JANEY YEH MOAD KAISEY BEECH MEH AAYA



JASBIR SINGH

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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2009, 08:46:10 AM »
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bahoot khoob adil ji . first sher bahoot acha hai!


Thanx Sophi ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2009, 08:46:53 AM »
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Good composition adil.

Shukriya Tousif sahab
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2009, 08:47:56 AM »
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wah ANIL, very nice



KHAYAAL SEY EK KHAYAAL HAMEY BHI AAYA
KISI KI GUSTAKHI NEY HAMEY BHI RULAYA
SEEDHEY RAASTEY PEH CHALEY JAA RAHEY THEY
NA JANEY YEH MOAD KAISEY BEECH MEH AAYA



JASBIR SINGH




kyaa khoob kahaa jasbir ji,..thanx ...adil bechain
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2009, 09:06:05 AM »
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very nice and beautiful creation Adil ji and Jasbir ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2009, 08:06:02 PM »
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very nice and beautiful creation Adil ji and Jasbir ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank u madhu ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2009, 08:34:50 PM »
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Wish you good luck Mr. Adil
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«Reply #10 on: July 19, 2009, 09:10:59 PM »
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Wish you good luck Mr. Adil

THANK U MR HUSSAIN AND SAME 2 U
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«Reply #11 on: February 23, 2012, 07:06:06 AM »
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             SAANS ABHI BAAKI HAI...

             MAGAR DUM NIKAL RAHA HAI,

             ISHQ NEY MUJHEY WO DARD DIYA,
         
             AANSO  KI SHAKAL MAIN......

             GHUM NIKAL RAHA HAI....!!!


                 $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$


            KAH SAKTA AGAR MAUT SEY...

            ZARA AUR INTAZAAR KAR,

             KAR LOON PURI--HASRATAIN

            SHAYAD, QAYAMAT TAK..!!!! 

             ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

 

          DOSTI MAIN MUFT KI KARTA NAHIN.
                 
                  AAJ KAA INSAAN HOON...!

             KUCH TO KHUDGARZI  HOGI..!!!! 


                                  ADIL BECHAIN




             


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