Khayalo main..

by Pooja on August 05, 2008, 08:20:49 PM
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Khayalo main kuch is tarah, zindagi humne basar kari
Tu hai sirf mera, tere sung, khayalo main her sehar kari

Kari tujhse din-raat baatein humne, subah-sham teri najar kari
jab bhi ayya tanhaai ka khayal, ansuoo ke naam bhanwar kari

kabhi hans diye, kabhi ro diye, zindagi apni ek bharam kari
Tu to raha har pal sung mere, per tune na kabhi idher ek bhi najar kari.....

Khayalo main Kuch is tarah...
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 07:01:40 AM »
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Pooja ji..Kaafi arsaa-e-daraaz K baad aapke kalaam se Baraah-e-raast Mukhateeb huaa hun..badhiya hai aapka likhna..aap k kalaam ko bhi Maine Kaee aur Jagaah bhi Padhaa Hai..aur use bhi badhiya payaa hai...
Ye Kalaam Bhi bade hi khoob andaaz se aapne Likha Hai.
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 12:46:27 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Pooja di. simple lines...simply good  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 04:15:27 PM »
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Pooja ji..Kaafi arsaa-e-daraaz K baad aapke kalaam se Baraah-e-raast Mukhateeb huaa hun..badhiya hai aapka likhna..aap k kalaam ko bhi Maine Kaee aur Jagaah bhi Padhaa Hai..aur use bhi badhiya payaa hai...
Ye Kalaam Bhi bade hi khoob andaaz se aapne Likha Hai.

 Thankyou ! Muhammed ji!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2008, 04:16:39 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Pooja di. simple lines...simply good  Applause  Applause

bahoot bahoot shukaria Roja!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2008, 05:23:41 PM »
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Khayalo main kuch is tarah, zindagi humne basar kari
Tu hai sirf mera, tere sung, khayalo main her sehar kari

Kari tujhse din-raat baatein humne, subah-sham teri najar kari
jab bhi ayya tanhaai ka khayal, ansuoo ke naam bhanwar kari

kabhi hans diye, kabhi ro diye, zindagi apni ek bharam kari
Tu to raha har pal sung mere, per tune na kabhi idher ek bhi najar kari.....

Khayalo main Kuch is tarah...

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!  Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai aapne Applause Applause
Short ans sweet..bahut khoob!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2008, 05:39:16 PM »
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bahoot khoob pooja ji....bahoot sunder aur nikhari hui si nai nai si rachna hai... Applause

jindagi ek khayal hi to hai,
na suljhe kabhi wo sawal hi to hai,
yun karte to aisa hota, waisa hota,
umra-bhar ka malal hi to hai
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2008, 05:51:10 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!!  Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai aapne Applause Applause
Short ans sweet..bahut khoob!!


bahoot bahoot shukaria khwaish ji!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2008, 05:51:43 PM »
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bahoot khoob pooja ji....bahoot sunder aur nikhari hui si nai nai si rachna hai... Applause

jindagi ek khayal hi to hai,
na suljhe kabhi wo sawal hi to hai,
yun karte to aisa hota, waisa hota,
umra-bhar ka malal hi to hai


shukaria Bekarar ji!! bahoot sahi  lines likhi hai apne!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2009, 08:18:22 PM »
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khayal hai, khayalo main uljhate rahte hai
khus se sawal hai, jawabo main uljhate rahte hai
ladne ko ladati rahti hai dunia, dunia se
ek hum hai jo khud se he uljhate rahte hai
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