Khayalo main..

by Pooja on August 05, 2008, 08:20:49 PM

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Pooja

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Khayalo main kuch is tarah, zindagi humne basar kari
Tu hai sirf mera, tere sung, khayalo main her sehar kari

Kari tujhse din-raat baatein humne, subah-sham teri najar kari
jab bhi ayya tanhaai ka khayal, ansuoo ke naam bhanwar kari

kabhi hans diye, kabhi ro diye, zindagi apni ek bharam kari
Tu to raha har pal sung mere, per tune na kabhi idher ek bhi najar kari.....

Khayalo main Kuch is tarah...


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Muhammed

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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2008, 07:01:40 AM »

Pooja ji..Kaafi arsaa-e-daraaz K baad aapke kalaam se Baraah-e-raast Mukhateeb huaa hun..badhiya hai aapka likhna..aap k kalaam ko bhi Maine Kaee aur Jagaah bhi Padhaa Hai..aur use bhi badhiya payaa hai...
Ye Kalaam Bhi bade hi khoob andaaz se aapne Likha Hai.


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Roja

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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2008, 12:46:27 PM »

Bahut accha likha hai Pooja di. simple lines...simply good


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Pooja

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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2008, 04:15:27 PM »

Quote from: Muhammed on August 06, 2008, 07:01:40 AM

Muhammed ji!!


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Pooja

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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2008, 04:16:39 PM »

Quote from: Roja on August 06, 2008, 12:46:27 PM

Bahut accha likha hai Pooja di. simple lines...simply good

bahoot bahoot shukaria Roja!!


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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2008, 05:23:41 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on August 05, 2008, 08:20:49 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob!! Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai aapne
Short ans sweet..bahut khoob!!


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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2008, 05:39:16 PM »

bahoot khoob pooja ji....bahoot sunder aur nikhari hui si nai nai si rachna hai...

jindagi ek khayal hi to hai,
na suljhe kabhi wo sawal hi to hai,
yun karte to aisa hota, waisa hota,
umra-bhar ka malal hi to hai


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Pooja

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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2008, 05:51:10 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 06, 2008, 05:23:41 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob!! Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Kavita likhi hai aapne
Short ans sweet..bahut khoob!!

bahoot bahoot shukaria khwaish ji!!


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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2008, 05:51:43 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on August 06, 2008, 05:39:16 PM

shukaria Bekarar ji!! bahoot sahi lines likhi hai apne!!


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Pooja

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Re: Khayalo main..

«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2009, 08:18:22 PM »

khayal hai, khayalo main uljhate rahte hai
khus se sawal hai, jawabo main uljhate rahte hai
ladne ko ladati rahti hai dunia, dunia se
ek hum hai jo khud se he uljhate rahte hai