khhara-khotaa......................A.B

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                         khawaab -o- khayaal  se  pare ho kar...,
                         jeete  hain  hum   adh-mare  ho  kar...,

                         pahunch  kar oorooj per huaa tanhaa...,
                         kyaa   karein   abb  bade   ho   kar...,

                         hain bin intekhaab  ke hi  rajaa hum...,
                         to    hogaa  kyaa   khade   ho   kar...,

                         khote ki hi waah-waahi chaar-soo bus...,
                         dekh   liyaa  hai   khhare   ho  kar...,

                         rudaad - e- ishq dhhundli padi , ke ...,
                         huaa  arsaa mohabbat  ko mare ho kar...,

                         toot  gaye  ghar 'bechain'  shahr ke...,
                         rishto.n   mein   jhhagde   ho   kar...,

                        

                        
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2016, 10:14:12 AM »
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WWWAAAHHHH BAHAUT KHOOOOOOBBBB

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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2016, 11:06:56 AM »
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Bahot khoooob, waaaah waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2016, 07:09:49 PM »
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                         khawaab -o- khayaal  se  pare ho kar...,
                         jeete  hain  hum   adh-mare  ho  kar...,

                         pahunch  kar oorooj per huaa tanhaa...,
                         kyaa   karein   abb  bade   ho   kar...,

                         hain bin intekhaab  ke hi  rajaa hum...,
                         to    hogaa  kyaa   khade   ho   kar...,

                         khote ki hi waah-waahi chaar-soo bus...,
                         dekh   liyaa  hai   khhare   ho  kar...,

                         rudaad - e- ishq dhhundli padi , ke ...,
                         huaa  arsaa mohabbat  ko mare ho kar...,

                         toot  gaye  ghar 'bechain'  shahr ke...,
                         rishto.n   mein   jhhagde   ho   kar...,

                        

                        
waaahhhhhhhhhhhh
kya bat h sirji..
behad umdaah post.
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2016, 07:22:15 PM »
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bahut hee umdah waah waah, dheron daad.
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab... !

WaaH janab bahut khoob behad achche ashaar kahe haiN aapne...
Puri kalaam hi umda huyi ...

Matla aur dusra sher behad umdaa laga hume... In khoob sheroN par humari hazaaroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
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WWWAAAHHHH BAHAUT KHOOOOOOBBBB

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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waaahhhhhhhhhhhh
kya bat h sirji..
behad umdaah post.



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bahut hee umdah waah waah, dheron daad.
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Bahut khoob janaab bahut khoob...  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2016, 02:02:24 PM »
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Very nice adilji
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«Reply #13 on: June 17, 2016, 08:03:32 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on June 12, 2016, 09:23:12 AM


                         khawaab -o- khayaal  se  pare ho kar...,
                         jeete  hain  hum   adh-mare  ho  kar...,

                         pahunch  kar oorooj per huaa tanhaa...,
                         kyaa   karein   abb  bade   ho   kar...,

                         hain bin intekhaab  ke hi  rajaa hum...,
                         to    hogaa  kyaa   khade   ho   kar...,

                         khote ki hi waah-waahi chaar-soo bus...,
                         dekh   liyaa  hai   khhare   ho  kar...,

                         rudaad - e- ishq dhhundli padi , ke ...,
                         huaa  arsaa mohabbat  ko mare ho kar...,

                         toot  gaye  ghar 'bechain'  shahr ke...,
                         rishto.n   mein   jhhagde   ho   kar...,

                         

                         

Bahot bahot khoob, m just speechless, this is just awesome, bahot hi sunder Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 13, 2016, 05:03:35 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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