khokhlii nazar.............(K_A)

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                             hai   be-daag   per   daagdaar   nazar   aaye!
                             chaand   kii   tarah   kirdaar  nazar   aaye!!

                             sookhe   hont,  viraan  chehraa , thhaka jism!
                             aankho.n   mein  phir  bhii pyaar  nazar aaye!

                             ghazal  terii  mujh se waaqif nahin phir kyon!
                             her   sher   mein   tere,  yaar  nazar   aaye!

                             phool  khile, khushboo  udii kaafii nahin hai!
                             machaltii   huii  kabhi  bahaar   nazar  aaye!

                             chaaragar, dawaa,maraz, pareshaa.n bahut hain!
                             khoobsoorat  ek   soorat  bimaar  nazar  aaye!

                             manzar  ufaq  kaa  haqiqat  to  nahin jaaniye!
                             nazaara  qudrat kaa ye  jaanisaar  nazar aaye!

                             kahaa kuch nahin dekhta rahaa khamosh chaar-soo!
                             her  chehre mein  jab   agyaar  nazar aaye!!

                            
                            
                            

                            
                            
                            
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2014, 04:03:31 PM »
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Verryyyy Nycccc.... LOVED each n every line... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2014, 04:30:06 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2014, 04:38:46 PM »
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                             hai   be-daag   per   daagdaar   nazar   aaye!
                             chaand   kii   tarah   kirdaar  nazar   aaye!!

                             sookhe   hont,  viraan  chehraa , thhaka jism!
                             aankho.n   mein  phir  bhii pyaar  nazar aaye!

                             ghazal  terii  mujh se waaqif nahin phir kyon!
                             her   sher   mein   tere,  yaar  nazar   aaye!

                             phool  khile, khushboo  udii kaafii nahin hai!
                             machaltii   huii  kabhi  bahaar   nazar  aaye!

                             chaaragar, dawaa,maraz, pareshaa.n bahut hain!
                             khoobsoorat  ek   soorat  bimaar  nazar  aaye!

                             manzar  ufaq  kaa  haqiqat  to  nahin jaaniye!
                             nazaara  qudrat kaa ye  jaanisaar  nazar aaye!

                             kahaa kuch nahin dekhta rahaa khamosh chaar-soo!
                             her  chehre mein  jab   agyaar  nazar aaye!!

                             
                             
                             

                             
                             
                             

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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2014, 07:17:56 PM »
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K A jee Aadaab... !

Wallaah janab kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab ...

Waqai har sher behad umdaa aur khoobsurat huaa hai ...
Is laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khudaa Hafez ...

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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2014, 08:17:30 PM »
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                             hai   be-daag   per   daagdaar   nazar   aaye!
                             chaand   kii   tarah   kirdaar  nazar   aaye!!

                             sookhe   hont,  viraan  chehraa , thhaka jism!
                             aankho.n   mein  phir  bhii pyaar  nazar aaye!

                             ghazal  terii  mujh se waaqif nahin phir kyon!
                             her   sher   mein   tere,  yaar  nazar   aaye!

                             phool  khile, khushboo  udii kaafii nahin hai!
                             machaltii   huii  kabhi  bahaar   nazar  aaye!

                             chaaragar, dawaa,maraz, pareshaa.n bahut hain!
                             khoobsoorat  ek   soorat  bimaar  nazar  aaye!

                             manzar  ufaq  kaa  haqiqat  to  nahin jaaniye!
                             nazaara  qudrat kaa ye  jaanisaar  nazar aaye!

                             kahaa kuch nahin dekhta rahaa khamosh chaar-soo!
                             her  chehre mein  jab   agyaar  nazar aaye!!

                            
                            
                            

                            
                            
                            

waah waaah waaaah bahut khoobsutat Janaab,Dheron Daad.
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2014, 08:53:59 PM »
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Bahut khoob. Bahut hi behtareen peshkash...
Dil bas wah! Wah! Karta raha har line ke baad.
Kya kamaal likha hai.
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2014, 05:02:06 AM »
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bahut khub khamoshji.....
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2014, 01:17:03 PM »
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                             hai   be-daag   per   daagdaar   nazar   aaye!
                             chaand   kii   tarah   kirdaar  nazar   aaye!!

                             sookhe   hont,  viraan  chehraa , thhaka jism!
                             aankho.n   mein  phir  bhii pyaar  nazar aaye!

                             ghazal  terii  mujh se waaqif nahin phir kyon!
                             her   sher   mein   tere,  yaar  nazar   aaye!

                             phool  khile, khushboo  udii kaafii nahin hai!
                             machaltii   huii  kabhi  bahaar   nazar  aaye!

                             chaaragar, dawaa,maraz, pareshaa.n bahut hain!
                             khoobsoorat  ek   soorat  bimaar  nazar  aaye!

                             manzar  ufaq  kaa  haqiqat  to  nahin jaaniye!
                             nazaara  qudrat kaa ye  jaanisaar  nazar aaye!

                             kahaa kuch nahin dekhta rahaa khamosh chaar-soo!
                             her  chehre mein  jab   agyaar  nazar aaye!!

                             
                             
                             

                             
                             
                             



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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2014, 06:30:22 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2014, 06:16:47 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: September 17, 2014, 02:53:39 PM »
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Verryyyy Nycccc.... LOVED each n every line... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2014, 09:22:27 AM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash

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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2015, 01:50:08 PM »
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K A jee Aadaab... !

Wallaah janab kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab ...

Waqai har sher behad umdaa aur khoobsurat huaa hai ...
Is laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khudaa Hafez ...



thanx
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