khoon se likhta huN khat chahe to jala dena...premdeep

by premdeep on February 19, 2013, 01:19:04 PM
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    Mahal ummedon ke khandahar ho gye
    pyale amrit ke sabhi jahar ho gye

    Irade the jo buland mom se pighal gye
    jab manzil thi samne tabhi fhisal gye


    mehkte gul bhi kaanto se chubhne lage
    bewafa who the dagabaz hum ho  gye

    Dil ki khushi hontho ki hasi le gye
    Aye na janaze par jo  jindgi le gye

    Hona tha kahi aur kahi aur ke ho gye
    shamil the ashiqoN me mashoor shayaron me ho gye

    falak me bankar dhunya sare sapne kho gye
    wo huye abaad barbaad hum ho gye

    khoon se likhta huN khat chahe to jala dena
    hum pyaar ki is aag me aftab ho gye

    Ginti hamari bhi kabhi insaano me hoti thi
    uske hatthe chad gaye shaitaan ho gaye

    Wo ehsash to kab ke ashqoN me dhul gaye
    Bas badan par uski ungaliyoN ke nishaan reh gaye
    
    
    kahte the jo shayar ki rooh tumme nahi shamil
    sunkar mujhe is Bazm me hairaan ho gye
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bahut khoob likha hai premdeep jee...
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