Khuaisho ka ye naya safar...

by brokenbyluv on July 15, 2010, 08:51:31 PM
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Mhbt ki ye kaisi aag mein main jal rahi hu,
kabhi terre naam se sanwar rahi hu tou kabhi terre ehsas mein pighal rahi hu,

najane kaise kaise khuab terri yad dikha rahi hai mujhe,
jinke sach hone k khayal se hi main din raat machal rahi hu,

behti hawao sang terri khushbu aati hai chaaro taraf terri yado ka pehera hai,
aake ek baar dekh tou sahi terri chah mein main kis diwangi se badal rahi hu,

jalte bujhte sholon se ye jazbaat uthti thamti terre didar ki ye pyas,
jane anjane terri talab mein bekhudi k raste pe chal rahi hu,

khuaisho ka ye naya safar kuch khushnuma sa lagta hai..
aesa lag raha hai jaise terri talash mein terre hi saaye mein dhal rahi hu.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2010, 08:59:44 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2010, 09:01:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji aur mamta ji..
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2010, 04:14:34 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2010, 06:28:34 AM »
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Kamaal ki poem likhi hai Brokenbyluv ji. Dil ke ahsaas aur kaifiyat ko jis khubsurati se aapne bayaan kiya hai wo qabil e tareef hai. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2010, 10:00:48 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor Aapki Yeh Kavita Dil Ko Chuuti hai

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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2010, 07:49:59 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya dev,riyaz ji,khwaish ji n priya..
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