Khud Jal Gaye RH

by Rajesh Harish on April 21, 2010, 07:37:43 AM

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Rajesh Harish

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Woh aag laga kar yun hum se bole
Ki kaise lagtein hain yeh shole
Hum bas yun muskura kar rah gaye
Aur weh to khud-be-khud jal gaye


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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 07:41:17 AM »

Wah kya baat hai Rajesh Harish ji......

Woh lagakar hampar aag zor zor se hasne lage
unhe malum na hua wo khud aag me pasne lage....


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2010, 07:43:19 AM »

Shukriya

Nice lines Cara Ji


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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2010, 10:27:21 AM »

Bahot achha likha hai Rajesh ji.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 01:45:24 PM »

Shukriya Riyaz Ji


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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2010, 02:46:53 PM »

bahut khoob likha hai Rajesh ji... bahut khoob...!!!

humein ghayal kiya tha tumne, par hum muskurate reh gaye,
hamari muskaan ko dekh k tum tadapte reh gaye...

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 21, 2010, 07:37:43 AM

Woh aag laga kar yun hum se bole
Ki kaise lagtein hain yeh shole
Hum bas yun muskura kar rah gaye
Aur weh to khud-be-khud jal gaye


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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2010, 02:53:56 PM »

Shukriya Kapil

Aap ne achchha jawaab likha hai

Kuchh meri or se

Khud ghayel hue aur humko badnaam kiyaa
Teri nazuk halaat par hume muskurana ayaa


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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2010, 03:10:36 PM »

shukriya Rajesh ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 21, 2010, 02:53:56 PM

Shukriya Kapil

Aap ne achchha jawaab likha hai

Kuchh meri or se

Khud ghayel hue aur humko badnaam kiyaa
Teri nazuk halaat par hume muskurana ayaa


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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2010, 06:42:54 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on April 21, 2010, 03:10:36 PM

shukriya Rajesh ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

Thanx Kapil


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neelgold

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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2010, 01:02:38 AM »

Gud one Rajesh


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ** Khud Jal Gaye** RH

«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2010, 03:21:24 AM »

Thanx Neel


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