Khud Ko Chhal Rahe Ho Tum

by riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM
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GHAZAL
Auron ki khushi se kyon, aise jal rahe ho tum
Ghaur se agar socho, khud ko chhal rahe ho tum
Ek haath se taali, baj saki hai kab bolo
Dosh apna bhi dekho, kyon ubal rahe ho tum
Waqt ke badalne mein, der khuchh nahi lagti
Mil gai jo kuchh daulat, kyon uchhal rahe to tum
Jaisa tumne boya tha, vaisa hi to kaata hai
Ab udaas hokar kyon, haath mal rahe ho tum
Ab to bas ye nishchit hai, tum bhatak hi jaaoge
jaante nahi rasta, aur chal rahe ho tum
Jisne jag rachaa saara, yaad usko bhi rakhna
Uski mehrbani se hi to pal rahe ho tum

Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2010, 11:15:00 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob farmayaa hai aapne Riyaz ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

samajh jaana aur samajh ke karnaa aasan nahin hai.
isiliye naasamjhi mein galtiyan kar rahe ho tum.

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM
GHAZAL
Auron ki khushi se kyon, aise jal rahe ho tum
Ghaur se agar socho, khud ko chhal rahe ho tum
Ek haath se taali, baj saki hai kab bolo
Dosh apna bhi dekho, kyon ubal rahe ho tum
Waqt ke badalne mein, der khuchh nahi lagti
Mil gai jo kuchh daulat, kyon uchhal rahe to tum
Jaisa tumne boya tha, vaisa hi to kaata hai
Ab udaas hokar kyon, haath mal rahe ho tum
Ab to bas ye nishchit hai, tum bhatak hi jaaoge
jaante nahi rasta, aur chal rahe ho tum
Jisne jag rachaa saara, yaad usko bhi rakhna
Uski mehrbani se hi to pal rahe ho tum

Riyaz Ashna
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2010, 11:24:03 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyazji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2010, 12:10:13 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz ji aur last ki do lines mujhe best lage... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 12:20:01 PM »
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Wah wah Riyaz bhai ek ek shabd mein sachai nazar aa rahi hai.too good great creation.Suresh ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2010, 12:38:15 PM »
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Aapka behad shukriya Suresh ji ke aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai. Aapne bhi bahot achhi lines likhi hain.
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 30, 2010, 11:15:00 AM
wah wah bahut khoob farmayaa hai aapne Riyaz ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

samajh jaana aur samajh ke karnaa aasan nahin hai.
isiliye naasamjhi mein galtiyan kar rahe ho tum.
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2010, 12:45:44 PM »
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shukriya Riyaz ji.
Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 12:38:15 PM
Aapka behad shukriya Suresh ji ke aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai. Aapne bhi bahot achhi lines likhi hain.
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2010, 02:53:37 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM
GHAZAL
Auron ki khushi se kyon, aise jal rahe ho tum
Ghaur se agar socho, khud ko chhal rahe ho tum
Ek haath se taali, baj saki hai kab bolo
Dosh apna bhi dekho, kyon ubal rahe ho tum
Waqt ke badalne mein, der khuchh nahi lagti
Mil gai jo kuchh daulat, kyon uchhal rahe to tum
Jaisa tumne boya tha, vaisa hi to kaata hai
Ab udaas hokar kyon, haath mal rahe ho tum
Ab to bas ye nishchit hai, tum bhatak hi jaaoge
jaante nahi rasta, aur chal rahe ho tum
Jisne jag rachaa saara, yaad usko bhi rakhna
Uski mehrbani se hi to pal rahe ho tum

Riyaz Ashna


Mashallah bohot khoobsurat ghazal hai Riyaz Ji..aapki ghazlon main yahi khoobsurti hoti ki simple words hote hain aur gehre maayene...Bohot khoob !
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2010, 04:01:30 PM »
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  Haqeeqat ko bahut khoobsoorti se lafzon me dhaala hai riyaz ji. Bahut achha likha hai.
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2010, 04:36:17 PM »
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wah riyaz sahab ,, kya kahene janab wah ...tareef karna suraj ko diya dikhane wali baath hai ,, bahoth qoob riyaz sahab ..kya tanz hai wah ..allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


duwa go

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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2010, 09:16:51 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Riyaz Ji
Umda peshkash hai aap ki
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2010, 11:13:55 PM »
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Vry Vry GUD Riyaz ji .....

Aap ne sachai biyan ki hai ..........]
Moral of d story is "Be HAppy Alwyz & let make othr ppl happy also

Bhut acha likha hai .......
Vry vll said ..
THNXXXXXXXXXXXXxxxx
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2010, 01:00:50 AM »
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Bahot bahot shukria Khwaish ji.
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyazji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2010, 06:55:56 AM »
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Nice lines Riyaz jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2010, 07:16:30 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai          Riyaz106 ji.....

dekh usko aasmaa chutey
tu kyun jal raha hai
gar tujhko bhi chuna hai aasman
to kyun nahi chal raha hai.....
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