Khud Ko Chhal Rahe Ho Tum

by riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2010, 01:28:52 PM »
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Kapil ji pasand farmane ke liye aapka hardik dhanyawaad.
Quote from: klaskar on April 30, 2010, 12:10:13 PM
bahut khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aapne Riyaz ji aur last ki do lines mujhe best lage... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #16 on: May 01, 2010, 06:25:32 PM »
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Madhu didi aapka dil se shukriya ke aapne ghazal ko pasand kiya aur hausla afzaai bhi ki. Karam, nawazish.
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 30, 2010, 12:20:01 PM
Wah wah Riyaz bhai ek ek shabd mein sachai nazar aa rahi hai.too good great creation.Suresh ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #17 on: May 02, 2010, 02:33:07 AM »
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Tahe dil se bahot bahot shukria Talat ji. Apni masrufiyaat mein se waqt nikal kar aapne tawajjo se padha, samjha aur saraaha, ye zarranawazi hai aapki.
Quote from: Celmira on April 30, 2010, 02:53:37 PM
Mashallah bohot khoobsurat ghazal hai Riyaz Ji..aapki ghazlon main yahi khoobsurti hoti ki simple words hote hain aur gehre maayene...Bohot khoob !
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«Reply #18 on: May 02, 2010, 02:41:11 AM »
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Waah Waah Kya khoob Kahi hai aapne Riyaaz ji.. Bahoot Sachai hai aapki ghazal mea... Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #19 on: May 02, 2010, 11:10:14 AM »
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Tamanna ji aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hun. Aapne ghazal ko pasand kiya aur hausala afzaai bhi ki.
Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 30, 2010, 04:01:30 PM
  Haqeeqat ko bahut khoobsoorti se lafzon me dhaala hai riyaz ji. Bahut achha likha hai.
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«Reply #20 on: May 02, 2010, 11:39:25 AM »
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Bahot bahot shukriya Junaid bhai. Jitni tareef aapne ki hai us qaabil meri ye ghazal nahi hai , magar aapki zarra nawazi hai. Phir se shukriya. Khush rahiye..
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 30, 2010, 04:36:17 PM
wah riyaz sahab ,, kya kahene janab wah ...tareef karna suraj ko diya dikhane wali baath hai ,, bahoth qoob riyaz sahab ..kya tanz hai wah ..allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..

duwa go

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«Reply #21 on: May 02, 2010, 04:56:08 PM »
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Shihab bhai aap bhi Junaid bhai ki baton mein aa gaye. Maine aisa kahan likha ke wo misali ban jaaye. Khair ye aapki inaayat hai, karam  hai aur muhabbat hai. Apka behad shukria. Hamesha Khush Rahiye. 
Quote from: Shihab on April 30, 2010, 06:22:43 PM
Wah Wah Riyaz Bhai Kya Kehne Qadeer Bhai Ne Sahi Farmaya Ki
Tareef Karna Suraj Ko Diya Dikhane Wali Baat Hai....
Waqai Mein Ek Behatreen Peshkash Hai....
Badi Hi Khoobsurti Aur Sagdi Se Lafzon Ko Piroya Hai
Dil Baagh Baagh Ho Gaya Parhke...Aafreen Aafreen

ALLAH Pak Aapko Har Ranj o Gham Se Mehfooz Rakhe Aameen

Yun Hi Apne Pyaar Bhare Andaz Se Mehfil Ko Roshan Karte Rahiye


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~
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«Reply #22 on: May 03, 2010, 04:54:30 AM »
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Rajesh ji aapka tahe-dil se shukriya ke aapne ghazal ko pasand kiya.
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 30, 2010, 09:16:51 PM
Bahut Khoob Riyaz Ji
Umda peshkash hai aap ki
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«Reply #23 on: May 03, 2010, 10:24:58 AM »
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Neel ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapne meri ghazal ko pasand kiya, saraaha, hausla afazaai ki aur iske meaning ko samjha. Thanks a lot.
Quote from: neelgold on April 30, 2010, 11:13:55 PM
Vry Vry GUD Riyaz ji .....

Aap ne sachai biyan ki hai ..........]
Moral of d story is "Be HAppy Alwyz & let make othr ppl happy also

Bhut acha likha hai .......
Vry vll said ..
THNXXXXXXXXXXXXxxxx
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«Reply #24 on: May 03, 2010, 10:39:41 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM
GHAZAL
Auron ki khushi se kyon, aise jal rahe ho tum
Ghaur se agar socho, khud ko chhal rahe ho tum
Ek haath se taali, baj saki hai kab bolo
Dosh apna bhi dekho, kyon ubal rahe ho tum
Waqt ke badalne mein, der khuchh nahi lagti
Mil gai jo kuchh daulat, kyon uchhal rahe to tum
Jaisa tumne boya tha, vaisa hi to kaata hai
Ab udaas hokar kyon, haath mal rahe ho tum
Ab to bas ye nishchit hai, tum bhatak hi jaaoge
jaante nahi rasta, aur chal rahe ho tum
Jisne jag rachaa saara, yaad usko bhi rakhna
Uski mehrbani se hi to pal rahe ho tum

Riyaz Ashna


badhiya likha hai Riyaz ji ... bahut hi umda poem hai
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«Reply #25 on: May 03, 2010, 11:03:07 AM »
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Sonia ji aapka tah-e-dil se bahot bahot shukriya ke aapne meri lines ko pasand kiya.
Quote from: Sonia01 on May 01, 2010, 06:55:56 AM
Nice lines Riyaz jee Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: May 03, 2010, 03:05:14 PM »
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Bahaut bahut shukriya Cara ji. Aapne bahot achhi lines likhi hain.
Quote from: cara on May 01, 2010, 07:16:30 AM
Wah kya baat hai          Riyaz106 ji.....

dekh usko aasmaa chutey
tu kyun jal raha hai
gar tujhko bhi chuna hai aasman
to kyun nahi chal raha hai.....
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«Reply #27 on: May 04, 2010, 07:36:17 AM »
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Sophi ji aapka tah-e-dil se dher saara shukriya ghazal ko pasand farmane ke liye. Lekin aap hain kahan. Kabhi kabhi thodi der ko aapka aana hota hai jaise koi jhaank kar chala gaya ho. Phir se shukriya.
Quote from: Sophi on May 02, 2010, 02:41:11 AM
Waah Waah Kya khoob Kahi hai aapne Riyaaz ji.. Bahoot Sachai hai aapki ghazal mea... Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #28 on: May 04, 2010, 12:54:36 PM »
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Samnoj ji aapka tahe dil se bahot bahot shukriya ke aapne ghazal pasand ki aur hausla afazzai ki.
Quote from: samnoj on May 03, 2010, 10:39:41 AM
badhiya likha hai Riyaz ji ... bahut hi umda poem hai
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«Reply #29 on: May 04, 2010, 09:33:23 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM
GHAZAL
Auron ki khushi se kyon, aise jal rahe ho tum
Ghaur se agar socho, khud ko chhal rahe ho tum
Ek haath se taali, baj saki hai kab bolo
Dosh apna bhi dekho, kyon ubal rahe ho tum
Waqt ke badalne mein, der khuchh nahi lagti
Mil gai jo kuchh daulat, kyon uchhal rahe to tum
Jaisa tumne boya tha, vaisa hi to kaata hai
Ab udaas hokar kyon, haath mal rahe ho tum
Ab to bas ye nishchit hai, tum bhatak hi jaaoge
jaante nahi rasta, aur chal rahe ho tum
Jisne jag rachaa saara, yaad usko bhi rakhna
Uski mehrbani se hi to pal rahe ho tum

Riyaz Ashna


Riyaz sahab achi takleeq par daad hazir hai qubool keejiye


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