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«Reply #30 on: May 04, 2010, 10:14:55 PM »

Subhan ALLAH Kya Kehne
Ek Muqammal Peshkash...
Bahut Hi Umda....
Khaskar Yeh Wali Line
To Bahut Hi Achhi Aur Sachhi Hain...
Dil Khush Kar Diya Aapne To....
Dad Hazir Hai.....

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM

GHAZAL

Jisne jag rachaa saara, yaad usko bhi rakhna
Uski mehrbani se hi to pal rahe ho tum

Riyaz Ashna


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riyaz106

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Re: Khud Ko Chhal Rahe Ho Tum

«Reply #31 on: May 05, 2010, 09:55:25 AM »

Aslam Bhai aapka behad shukriya ke aapne ghazal ko pasand farmaaya. Pahli baar aapka comment mila, bahot khushi hui.

Quote from: aaina on May 04, 2010, 09:33:23 PM

Riyaz sahab achi takleeq par daad hazir hai qubool keejiye

aslam


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riyaz106

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Re: Khud Ko Chhal Rahe Ho Tum

«Reply #32 on: May 05, 2010, 05:22:11 PM »

Hum_Dum ji aapka tahe dil se shukriya ke aapne meri ghazal ko padhne ke liye waqt dia, pasand farmaya aur hausla afazaai bhi ki. Aapka mamnoon hun.

Quote from: HUM_DUM on May 04, 2010, 10:14:55 PM

Subhan ALLAH Kya Kehne
Ek Muqammal Peshkash...
Bahut Hi Umda....
Khaskar Yeh Wali Line
To Bahut Hi Achhi Aur Sachhi Hain...
Dil Khush Kar Diya Aapne To....
Dad Hazir Hai.....


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drpandey

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Re: Khud Ko Chhal Rahe Ho Tum

«Reply #33 on: May 06, 2010, 06:40:51 PM »

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 30, 2010, 03:00:55 AM

GHAZAL
Auron ki khushi se kyon, aise jal rahe ho tum
Ghaur se agar socho, khud ko chhal rahe ho tum
Ek haath se taali, baj saki hai kab bolo
Dosh apna bhi dekho, kyon ubal rahe ho tum
Waqt ke badalne mein, der khuchh nahi lagti
Mil gai jo kuchh daulat, kyon uchhal rahe to tum
Jaisa tumne boya tha, vaisa hi to kaata hai
Ab udaas hokar kyon, haath mal rahe ho tum
Ab to bas ye nishchit hai, tum bhatak hi jaaoge
jaante nahi rasta, aur chal rahe ho tum
Jisne jag rachaa saara, yaad usko bhi rakhna
Uski mehrbani se hi to pal rahe ho tum

Riyaz Ashna

Waah!!! Waah!! Riyaz Sahab!!! Kya behtareen kalaam Hindi mein likha hai aapne, bilkul sach-sach kah dala. Sidhi baat, sadey shabd aur achhi seekh..kitney rangon ki numaindgi aap karte hai..kuchh pata nahin. Lakhon daad hazir hai qubool farmayen...


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riyaz106

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Re: Khud Ko Chhal Rahe Ho Tum

«Reply #34 on: May 07, 2010, 07:16:21 AM »

Pandey ji aapka bahot bahot shukriya. Aapki inaayat hai ke aap meri ghazlon ko pasand karte hain aur hamesha hi hausla afzaai karte hain. Ye aapki zarranawazi hai, karam hai, nawazish hai. Phir se shukriya.

Quote from: drpandey on May 06, 2010, 06:40:51 PM


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