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khud-kushi (NM)

by vb on November 10, 2010, 06:55:16 PM

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Re: khud-kushi (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: November 11, 2010, 06:43:11 AM »

Bahot achhi nazm likhi hai VB ji. Parhkar bahot achha laga. Daad hazir hai.


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: khud-kushi (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: November 11, 2010, 08:06:03 AM »

bahut badhiya vb sahab...ek request karuga apse shabdo ko agar poora or saaf likhege to padhne me jyada dikkat nahi hogi..

dher sari daad~


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zarra

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Re: khud-kushi (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: November 11, 2010, 06:13:24 PM »

waaah vb ji. bahaut bahaut umda. jitne jaandaar khayal utna damdaar andaz e bayaan. Applause


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: khud-kushi (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: November 12, 2010, 05:52:26 AM »

Quote from: vb on November 11, 2010, 03:24:10 PM

AbhiTamrakar jee! buhat shukriya parhnay aur pasand karnay ka..

maafi chaahtay hain... hum ramooz-e-shaairi aur ilm-e-arooz say bilkul naa-waakif hain.. so bus aisa waisa likh detay hain.. hum apnay bayaan ki taakaat ko barhanay ki koshish hamesha say kartay he rahay hain.. so kartay rahen gay... qismat nay saath diya tu behtar say behtar shaairi logon tak puhuncha saken gay..

shukriya aap ka again.. time denay, parhnay aur pasand karnay ka...

vb ji shayad apne galat samjha...apne bahut achha likha hai..par chuki mujhe urdu anhi aati...isiliye words ke adhoore likhe hone par samajhne me dikkat hoti hai...apse gujarish ki hai maine sahab shikayat kabhi nahi~

mafi chahta hun kashta ke liye~