KHUL KE ROONE KI TABEEYAT................MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on June 19, 2010, 02:09:15 PM
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PATTE PATTE KI OUQAT BADI HOTI HAI
BOODHE BARGAD KI BISAAT BADI HOTI HAI

THOKAR PE RAKHO LAKH ZAMANA LEKIN
APNO SE MILI MAAT BADI HOTI HAI

JHOOTHE RISHTON SE BHARI DUNIYA ME
DIL SE NISBAT KI BAAT BADI HOTI HAI

BHEED ME HAADSE KI KHO GAYEE JO SOORAT
USKE DEEDAR KI HASRAT BADI HOTI HAI

DARR HAI ZAKHAM HANS KE NA BIKHAR JAYEN
KHUL KE RONE KI TABEEYAT BADI HOTI HAI
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2010, 04:54:47 PM »
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Bahot khoob Mamta ji, bahot achhi creaton hai ye aapki. Mukhtalif qism ke subjects par aapke opinions ka izhar bahot achha laga. Khas taur par ye lines sabse achhi lagi:

JHOOTHE RISHTON SE BHARI DUNIYA ME
DIL SE NISBAT KI BAAT BADI HOTI HAI
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2010, 04:58:22 PM »
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bahut khoob mamta ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2010, 06:08:57 PM »
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zahe naseeb Riyazji! Hamare qalaam ko pahda or saraha .jo sher aap ko pasand aaya wo mere bhi dil ke qareeb hai .behad shukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2010, 06:10:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Sheba ji...
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«Reply #5 on: June 19, 2010, 07:17:21 PM »
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PATTE PATTE KI OUQAT BADI HOTI HAI
BOODHE BARGAD KI BISAAT BADI HOTI HAI

THOKAR PE RAKHO LAKH ZAMANA LEKIN
APNO SE MILI MAAT BADI HOTI HAI

JHOOTHE RISHTON SE BHARI DUNIYA ME
DIL SE NISBAT KI BAAT BADI HOTI HAI

BHEED ME HAADSE KI KHO GAYEE JO SOORAT
USKE DEEDAR KI HASRAT BADI HOTI HAI

DARR HAI ZAKHAM HANS KE NA BIKHAR JAYEN
KHUL KE RONE KI TABEEYAT BADI HOTI HAI

BAHUT KHUB

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«Reply #6 on: June 19, 2010, 07:34:57 PM »
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MAAYE,DIN KA CHAIN RAATO KI NEED KHOTI HAI
GHAR KI BETIYA  JANAB JAB BADI HOTI HAI
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«Reply #7 on: June 19, 2010, 11:04:50 PM »
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THANKS MANOJ JI!
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«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2010, 04:23:23 AM »
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PATTE PATTE KI OUQAT BADI HOTI HAI
BOODHE BARGAD KI BISAAT BADI HOTI HAI

THOKAR PE RAKHO LAKH ZAMANA LEKIN
APNO SE MILI MAAT BADI HOTI HAI

JHOOTHE RISHTON SE BHARI DUNIYA ME
DIL SE NISBAT KI BAAT BADI HOTI HAI

BHEED ME HAADSE KI KHO GAYEE JO SOORAT
USKE DEEDAR KI HASRAT BADI HOTI HAI

DARR HAI ZAKHAM HANS KE NA BIKHAR JAYEN
KHUL KE RONE KI TABEEYAT BADI HOTI HAI
Waah Mamta ji.....bahot khoob...

Chand rishton ke khiloney hain inhin se sab kheltey hain,
Varna ye sabko pata hai ki kaun yahan kiska hain. (-NM-)
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2010, 07:31:07 AM »
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PATTE PATTE KI OUQAT BADI HOTI HAI
BOODHE BARGAD KI BISAAT BADI HOTI HAI

THOKAR PE RAKHO LAKH ZAMANA LEKIN
APNO SE MILI MAAT BADI HOTI HAI

JHOOTHE RISHTON SE BHARI DUNIYA ME
DIL SE NISBAT KI BAAT BADI HOTI HAI

BHEED ME HAADSE KI KHO GAYEE JO SOORAT
USKE DEEDAR KI HASRAT BADI HOTI HAI

DARR HAI ZAKHAM HANS KE NA BIKHAR JAYEN
KHUL KE RONE KI TABEEYAT BADI HOTI HAI

Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2010, 01:10:45 AM »
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bahot khoob mamta saheba ,,upar ke teen ashaar umda hain,,aur do ashaar main khayal bahot umda hai...achhi paishkash aapki janib se bahoot khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2010, 06:14:26 AM »
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PATTE PATTE KI OUQAT BADI HOTI HAI
BOODHE BARGAD KI BISAAT BADI HOTI HAI

THOKAR PE RAKHO LAKH ZAMANA LEKIN
APNO SE MILI MAAT BADI HOTI HAI

JHOOTHE RISHTON SE BHARI DUNIYA ME
DIL SE NISBAT KI BAAT BADI HOTI HAI

BHEED ME HAADSE KI KHO GAYEE JO SOORAT
USKE DEEDAR KI HASRAT BADI HOTI HAI

DARR HAI ZAKHAM HANS KE NA BIKHAR JAYEN
KHUL KE RONE KI TABEEYAT BADI HOTI HAI


Bahoth Qoob Mamta Saheba , Dad Hazir hai .. Khush rahen hamesha


Duwa Go

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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2010, 07:17:42 AM »
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Wah bahut dard bhari kavita pesh kiya aapne Mamta ji,great work,lovely lines by Riyaz bhai,Manoj ji,Padey ji. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2010, 07:19:12 AM »
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Wah bahut dard bhari kavita pesh kiya aapne Mamta ji,great work,lovely lines by Riyaz bhai,Manoj ji,Padey ji. Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause
THANX
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«Reply #14 on: June 24, 2010, 08:48:40 PM »
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PATTE PATTE KI OUQAT BADI HOTI HAI
BOODHE BARGAD KI BISAAT BADI HOTI HAI

THOKAR PE RAKHO LAKH ZAMANA LEKIN
APNO SE MILI MAAT BADI HOTI HAI

JHOOTHE RISHTON SE BHARI DUNIYA ME
DIL SE NISBAT KI BAAT BADI HOTI HAI

BHEED ME HAADSE KI KHO GAYEE JO SOORAT
USKE DEEDAR KI HASRAT BADI HOTI HAI

DARR HAI ZAKHAM HANS KE NA BIKHAR JAYEN
KHUL KE RONE KI TABEEYAT BADI HOTI HAI
yu to zama milta hai humse rozzz....
khwabo mein hi sahi....
unke deedar ki chahat badi hoti hai...
bahut khoob likha hai mamta ji apne, jakhm ko har tarah se shabdo mein pirona koi aapse seekhe...
warm regards...
me...
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