KHULE AAKASH MAIN UDNA SEEKHO

by sunildehgawani on November 18, 2011, 05:07:09 AM
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DIL KI BATON PAR KHUD BHI FAISLA KARNA SEEKHO
DAGMAGATE HI SAHI MAGAR RASTA CHALNA SEEKHO
HAALAT-E-MUFLISI HO YA FIR GAMMON KA DAUR HO
BAQT KE SATHH BAITHKAR MASHBIRA KARNA SEEKHO

DIYE BUJHANA TO HAWAOON KA APNA MIZAAZ HOTA HAI
HAUSLOON SE MAGAR RUKH ANDHION KE BADLANA SEEKHO

KADAM RAKHTE HI SHURU HOTA HAI SILSILA IMMT HANO KA
HAR PAHILU PE ZINDAGI KE KHARA UTARNA SEEKHO

YE MUMKIN NAHI HAR RASTA KHUSHION  KI TARAF JATA HAI
RUKH MANZILON  KE  DEKHKAR RASTAA BADALNA SEEKHO

LOG KAHTE HAIN KI LAGAN HAI TO GAGAN DUR NAHI
PARON KO KHOLKAR KHULE AAKASH MAI UDNA SEEKHO      
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2011, 05:11:28 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
very motivating sunil ji.
bahut khoob.
kadam rakhte hi shuru hota hai silsiila imtehaanon ka......... 
bahut khoobsurat lines
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2011, 05:28:59 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut sunder peshkash
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2011, 11:04:41 AM »
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Sunil ji,bahut khoobsurat ashaar se piroya hai iss kalaam ko.Tahedil se mubarakbaad.Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2011, 04:00:16 PM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on November 18, 2011, 05:07:09 AM
DIL KI BATON PAR KHUD BHI FAISLA KARNA SEEKHO
DAGMAGATE HI SAHI MAGAR RASTA CHALNA SEEKHO
HAALAT-E-MUFLISI HO YA FIR GAMMON KA DAUR HO
BAQT KE SATHH BAITHKAR MASHBIRA KARNA SEEKHO

DIYE BUJHANA TO HAWAOON KA APNA MIZAAZ HOTA HAI
HAUSLOON SE MAGAR RUKH ANDHION KE BADLANA SEEKHO

KADAM RAKHTE HI SHURU HOTA HAI SILSILA IMMT HANO KA
HAR PAHILU PE ZINDAGI KE KHARA UTARNA SEEKHO

YE MUMKIN NAHI HAR RASTA KHUSHION  KI TARAF JATA HAI
RUKH MANZILON  KE  DEKHKAR RASTAA BADALNA SEEKHO

LOG KAHTE HAIN KI LAGAN HAI TO GAGAN DUR NAHI
PARON KO KHOLKAR KHULE AAKASH MAI UDNA SEEKHO     

Bahut Bahut Khooob..

Veryyy Inspiring Sunil Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bas ek hi Guzaarish karunga aapse ke aap thodi spellings par dhyan dijiye..

jaise Aapne "Waqt" Ke Jaheh "Baqt" likha..Aur Bhi Kayi hai..

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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2011, 04:54:36 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on November 18, 2011, 05:11:28 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
very motivating sunil ji.
bahut khoob.
kadam rakhte hi shuru hota hai silsiila imtehaanon ka......... 
bahut khoobsurat lines
sangwan shahibaa aapka tah-e-dil shukriya ,,,,hausla farmane ke liye ,,please yun hi sath nibhate rahiye ,,,khuda hafiz
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2011, 04:56:32 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 18, 2011, 05:28:59 AM
Applause Applause Applause bahut sunder peshkash
saini ji kalam par hausla farmane ke liye ,,,apka bahut bahut shukriya ,,,,khuda hafiz
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2011, 04:59:48 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 18, 2011, 11:04:41 AM
Sunil ji,bahut khoobsurat ashaar se piroya hai iss kalaam ko.Tahedil se mubarakbaad.Hasan
hasan sahab ,,,,tah-e-dil shukriya kabul karen ,,kalam par waqt gujarne ke liye ,,,,aur hausla farmane k liye ,,,khuda hafiz
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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2011, 05:03:16 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 18, 2011, 04:00:16 PM
Bahut Bahut Khooob..

Veryyy Inspiring Sunil Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bas ek hi Guzaarish karunga aapse ke aap thodi spellings par dhyan dijiye..

jaise Aapne "Waqt" Ke Jaheh "Baqt" likha..Aur Bhi Kayi hai..

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khuais ji aaapka bahut bahut shukriya ,,,,kalaam ko waqt dene ke liye aur galtiyon par gaur farmane ke liye ,,,,,,mai zarur koshish karoonga .inhe improve karne ki ,,,khuda hafiz
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2011, 09:51:48 AM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on November 18, 2011, 05:07:09 AM
DIL KI BATON PAR KHUD BHI FAISLA KARNA SEEKHO
DAGMAGATE HI SAHI MAGAR RASTA CHALNA SEEKHO
HAALAT-E-MUFLISI HO YA FIR GAMMON KA DAUR HO
BAQT KE SATHH BAITHKAR MASHBIRA KARNA SEEKHO  Applause Applause

DIYE BUJHANA TO HAWAOON KA APNA MIZAAZ HOTA HAI
HAUSLOON SE MAGAR RUKH ANDHION KE BADLANA SEEKHO  Applause Applause

KADAM RAKHTE HI SHURU HOTA HAI SILSILA IMMTEHANO KA
HAR PAHILU PE ZINDAGI KE KHARA UTARNA SEEKHO  Applause Applause

YE MUMKIN NAHI HAR RASTA KHUSHION  KI TARAF JATA HAI
RUKH MANZILON  KE  DEKHKAR RASTAA BADALNA SEEKHO  Applause Applause Applause

LOG KAHTE HAIN KI LAGAN HAI TO GAGAN DUR NAHI
PARON KO KHOLKAR KHULE AAKASH MAI UDNA SEEKHO    Applause Applause Applause   
Bahut khoob sunil
Maja aa gaya..
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«Reply #10 on: November 21, 2011, 03:58:22 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 20, 2011, 09:51:48 AM
Bahut khoob sunil
Maja aa gaya..
aapka bahut bahut dhanyabaad ,,,mkv ji nazm par  baqt dene ke liye
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«Reply #11 on: November 21, 2011, 05:11:06 AM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on November 18, 2011, 05:07:09 AM
DIL KI BATON PAR KHUD BHI FAISLA KARNA SEEKHO
DAGMAGATE HI SAHI MAGAR RASTA CHALNA SEEKHO
HAALAT-E-MUFLISI HO YA FIR GAMMON KA DAUR HO
BAQT KE SATHH BAITHKAR MASHBIRA KARNA SEEKHO

DIYE BUJHANA TO HAWAOON KA APNA MIZAAZ HOTA HAI
HAUSLOON SE MAGAR RUKH ANDHION KE BADLANA SEEKHO

KADAM RAKHTE HI SHURU HOTA HAI SILSILA IMMT HANO KA
HAR PAHILU PE ZINDAGI KE KHARA UTARNA SEEKHO

YE MUMKIN NAHI HAR RASTA KHUSHION  KI TARAF JATA HAI
RUKH MANZILON  KE  DEKHKAR RASTAA BADALNA SEEKHO

LOG KAHTE HAIN KI LAGAN HAI TO GAGAN DUR NAHI
PARON KO KHOLKAR KHULE AAKASH MAI UDNA SEEKHO     


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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2011, 05:16:50 AM »
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 Thankyou !
qalb sahab
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