khuwaab tod kar,,,,,jeet jainam

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yuh bankar  khudgarz humse mukh mod kar,
woh chali gayi hai dur dil mera tod kar,

hassen palo ke woh afsaane bikher gaye,
khul gayi neend gaye woh khuwaab tod kar,

sab kasme o waade ek pal mein bhool gaye,
khush hai woh meri saanso ki dor tod kar,

mera chen o sukoon is kader fannah huya,
tuta bharam woh gaye akhri umeed tod kar,

katl e aam se zindagi hui meri nashaad,
ban gaye kisi ki woh meri umang tod kar,

lakho dua,o se mene paya tha usko khuda se,
has rahi thi mujh par sare rishte tod kar,


                 jj saini





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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2014, 03:39:58 AM »
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yuh bankar  khudgarz humse mukh mod kar,
woh chali gayi hai dur mera dil tod kar,

hassen palo ke woh afsaane bikher gaye,
khul gayi neend gaye woh khuwaab tod kar,

sab kasme o waade ek pal mein bhool gaye,
khush hai woh meri saanso ki dor tod kar,

mera chen o sukoon is kader fannah huya,
tuta bharam woh gaye akhri umeed tod kar,

katl e aam se zindagi hui meri nashaad,
ban gaye kisi ki woh meri umang tod kar,

lakho dua,o se mene paya tha usko khuda se,
has rahi thi mujh par sare rishte tod kar,


                 jj saini








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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2014, 03:44:56 AM »
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waaah waaah jeet bro
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2014, 08:30:31 AM »
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 Applause Applause waah waah
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wah Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
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Bahut hi khoob kaha..wah.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khooooooooooooob jeet ji................
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shukriya rajan bro
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Waah !!! Bahaut khoob Jeet ji !!!
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