khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

by guhar on January 08, 2010, 06:28:59 PM

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guhar

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toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2010, 06:48:19 PM »

Good one Guhar Ji


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Nazak-pari

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2010, 11:51:26 PM »

Quote from: guhar on January 08, 2010, 06:28:59 PM

toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.


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mrZakram

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2010, 03:17:07 AM »

bohot khoob guhar ji


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madhuwesh

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2010, 08:34:54 AM »

Wah too good Guhar ji,lovely creation . icon_thumleft


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guhar

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #5 on: January 09, 2010, 02:36:56 PM »

sabhi kaa bahot bahot teh-e-dil se shikriyaa....


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riyaz106

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #6 on: January 09, 2010, 02:50:57 PM »

Nice poem Gohar ji which is based on fact.


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guhar

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2010, 03:04:40 PM »

Quote from: riyaz106 on January 09, 2010, 02:50:57 PM

Nice poem Gohar ji which is based on fact.

hum pehle to har shajar se ,
jasbaaton ko todte hein,
fir ik shabdon ki mala,
unhe hole se pirote hein.

dhnyaawaad riyaaz ji.


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cara

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #8 on: January 09, 2010, 03:05:17 PM »

Quote from: guhar on January 08, 2010, 06:28:59 PM

toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.

kya baat hai guhar ji....

toot ta hai shisha jo
tootne tak hi chilata hai

par kisi ka khawab ka tootna
umer bar tak roolata hai...


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guhar

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2010, 03:06:47 PM »

Quote from: cara on January 09, 2010, 03:05:17 PM

kya baat hai guhar ji....

toot ta hai shisha jo
tootne tak hi chilata hai

par kisi ka khawab ka tootna
umer bar tak roolata hai...

shukriya..cara.
bahot khoob.
maasha allah!!!


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KOYAL46

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2010, 04:08:03 PM »

good one Guhar.... Applause

Seeshe ka tootna sab ko nazar aata hai
Dil toot-ta hai tou kisi ko nazar nahi aata

Quote from: guhar on January 08, 2010, 06:28:59 PM

toota hai jo sheesha to

chan kar ke ruk jaata hai,

par kisi khwaab ka tootna ,

behisaab shor machaata hai.


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2010, 11:12:13 AM »

Bahut Khoob Guhar Ji And And Nice Response Cara Ji


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kameeney

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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2010, 01:02:12 PM »


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Re: khwaab ka tootna behisaab shor machaata hai.

«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2010, 02:36:45 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Guharji..

Toothte Hai Jab Khwaab,
Tab Hum Tukhdo mein Bat Jaate Hai..
Yeh Zindagi Hi Kuch Aisi Hai
Jeene Ki Aarzoo mein Hum Mar Jaate Hai...