Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!:Miscellaneous Shayri

Talat

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Chupke se ek khwaab aankhon ne dekh liya
Aur sab se chup kar banaaya ek ashiyaana
Na jaane kitne armaano se saja liya use phir
Bana liya use is jeevan ka anmol khazaana
Magar khwaab to khwaab hote hain , toot te hain
Ashiaana jal gaya.... reza reza ho gaye khwaab
Aaj hum hain aur tanhaaiyi ka har aor hai basera
Toote khwaabon ki karchian, tinke ashiaane ke
Le ke baithe hain saath apne aur ashk hain ravaan
Isi tarah se basar ho jaayegi ye zindagi apni
Akele reh gaye hum..aage barh gaya kaaravaan !!!!


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fakharenaveed

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2005, 07:45:51 PM »

Zindagi hai aur dil-e-nadaan hai,
Kya safar hai aur kya saaman hai,
Arre mere gam ko bhi samajh kar dekhiye,
Muskura dena bahut aasaan hai.


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2005, 07:53:45 PM »

Quote from: "Talat"

wow wow wonderful talat.........................

yeh such apne khawaab poore kar na sake
lekin tujhe bhi hum kabhi bhula na sake
samunder mein raha sadiyon tak
lekin kabhi apni pyas bujha na sake................


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nidhi_yadein

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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2005, 04:20:15 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

amazing Talat,u give out ur emotions very nicely,lovely work Usual Smile

bohat khoob waheed,naveed.


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Meena

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2005, 09:35:50 AM »

beautiful talat and waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khwab kuch aise toota, ke ankh me chubne laga,
Ankhon se pani ki jagha koon behene laga!


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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2005, 10:13:52 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

beautiful talat and waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khwab kuch aise toota, ke ankh me chubne laga,
Ankhon se pani ki jagha koon behene laga!

wah meena,just in two lines u said a lot.

"Koi itna samjhaa jaaye mujhe aaj,
khwab hai sajaane k liye,ya tootne k liye,
gam hi gam mohabbat ki raahon me mile,
hans ke hamne tere liye kyon har gam siye?"


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Meena

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2005, 10:36:59 AM »

thank u nidhi...and gud one also!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D


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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2005, 10:45:10 AM »

Quote from: "Meena"

thank u nidhi...and gud one also!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D

most welcome dear and thanx Winking


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Talat

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #8 on: June 20, 2005, 11:05:42 AM »

Thanks a lot Waheed..... Nidhi n Meena ........ and very very nice !!!!!!!

Khwaabon ka naseeb hai toot na
Na inhe ankhon me sajaya karo
Bijliyaan zamane ki gir jati hain
Kabhi ashiyana na banaya karo !!!!


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Meena

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2005, 11:11:50 AM »

wah talat!!!!!

manzilagar hai unki toot jane ki,
to kyu Khuda ne khwab banaye,
har ashk pochta hai yeh sawal Rab se,
kyu na usne is sawalo ke jawab banaye!!!


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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2005, 11:13:11 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

wah Talat,aate hi bijli giraa di lol.

"Bohat bohat shukriya aapka jo hame khwabon ka matlab bataya,
aaj samajh aaya,jo khwab me dekha,wo sab kyon nahi maine paaya."


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Talat

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #11 on: June 20, 2005, 11:57:44 AM »

Thanks Nidhi ............................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Talat

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2005, 12:11:37 PM »

Bhool kar bhi khwaabon ki vaadiyon me na jaana
Wahan phool nahin ghum aur dard khila karte hain !!!


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waheed_rose2004

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #13 on: June 20, 2005, 06:58:53 PM »

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Quote from: "Meena"

beautiful talat and waheed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Khwab kuch aise toota, ke ankh me chubne laga,
Ankhon se pani ki jagha koon behene laga!

wah meena,just in two lines you said a lot.

"Koi itna samjhaa jaaye mujhe aaj,
khwab hai sajaane k liye,ya tootne k liye,
gam hi gam mohabbat ki raahon me mile,
hans ke hamne tere liye kyon har gam siye?"

ur welcome all friends................. & excellent replb all ............good work all friends.......

aankhon mein kheaab hain unko batein karne do
hothon se woh lafz kaho jo kaajal kahta hai
mausam jo sandesha laaya hai usko padh lo
sun to lo woh raaj jo pyasa shahil kahta hai..........................


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Talat

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Khwaab toot gaye........Jal gaya ashiaana !!!!!!

«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2005, 07:03:45 AM »

Thanks Waheed and nice one ................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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