|| Khwab hi sanjone do......Priya...||

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Dil ko aaram deta hai.. ye dard tera, ise rahne do..
Hai bastiya andhero ki.. saare chirag khone do..
 
Sare hisab rahne do, ye dil ki baat rahne do....
Ho gayi hai raat bhi.. ab to jara sa sone do..
 
Barso ke bichde aaj hum jane kaise yun mile
Jo mile gaye hai aaj, to shaan ko bhigone do
 
Hawa hue sukun sab.. ab to jara aaram do
De na sake ek bhi khushi.. khawab hi sanjone do..
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2011, 02:33:43 PM »
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Dil ko aaram deta hai.. ye dard tera, ise rahne do..
Hai bastiya andhero ki.. saare chirag khone do..
 
Sare hisab rahne do, ye dil ki baat rahne do....
Ho gayi hai raat bhi.. ab to jara sa sone do..
 
Barso ke bichde aaj hum jane kaise yun mile
Jo mile gaye hai aaj, to shaan ko bhigone do
 
Hawa hue sukun sab.. ab to jara aaram do
De na sake ek bhi khushi.. khawab hi sanjone do..


Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Priya..

Just Excellent!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Main Bhi kuch Iske jawaab mein Likhta Chalta Hoon..

Inn Andheri Bastiyon Mein bhi Koi chirag jalta Rahega
Tujhe Yaad kar Koi, Har Din Jeeta To Koi  Marta Rahega

Dil Ki Baat Dil Mein kab Tak Yuh Dabi Rahegi!!!
Labon Par Aakar Koi baat Rukhe To woh Tadapta Rahega

Barso Se Bichadkar Aaj Hum Mile Bhi To Kya Mile...??
Kaarwaan-e-safar To Bin Tere Har Haal Mein Chalta Rahega

Toote Hue Khwaab Aksar Palkon Ko Bahut Dard De Jaate Hai!!
"Khwaish" Waqt To Waqt Hai,Har Haal Mein Guzarta Rahega







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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2011, 03:03:58 PM »
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Priya Ji,

Bahut achchha laga bahut dinon baad
aapko padha hai....kahte rahiye.

Badhaaee...aur shubhkaamnaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2011, 03:34:39 PM »
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niceeeeee Usual Smile
bht khub ji
!!

jeevan sangraam ko yun hi chalne do
kabhi zamaane se,kabi khud se hume ladne do

chain se tum so jao kuch pal pahlu me mere
dil ki andher bastiyon me apni ek jugnu mere naam ki chamakne do

!!

khuaish ji syperbbbbb replyyyyyyyyyyyyy Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2011, 03:38:09 PM »
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Bahut Khub Priya Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2011, 03:49:54 PM »
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superbbbb reply khwaish ji.....
bht bht.... bht khooooob.....
sply last one.....
thnx for such a beautiful reply....
& meri koshish pasand karne ka bht bht shukria....


Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Priya..

Just Excellent!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Main Bhi kuch Iske jawaab mein Likhta Chalta Hoon..

Inn Andheri Bastiyon Mein bhi Koi chirag jalta Rahega
Tujhe Yaad kar Koi, Har Din Jeeta To Koi  Marta Rahega

Dil Ki Baat Dil Mein kab Tak Yuh Dabi Rahegi!!!
Labon Par Aakar Koi baat Rukhe To woh Tadapta Rahega

Barso Se Bichadkar Aaj Hum Mile Bhi To Kya Mile...??
Karwaan-e-safar To Bin Tere Har Haal Mein Chalta Rahega

Toote Hue Khwaab Aksar Palkon Ko Bahut Dard De Jaate Hai!!
"Khwaish" Waqt To Waqt Hai,Har Haal Mein Guzarta Rahega








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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2011, 04:54:16 PM »
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Priyaa Jee Aadaab!

kafi achche khayaaloN ko badi khubi se aapne lafzoN meiN
dhalaa hai .. Usual Smile

Hume sabhi ashaar achche lage.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhati rahiye... Aati rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile     

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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2011, 05:01:02 PM »
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niceeeeee Usual Smile
bht khub ji
!!

jeevan sangraam ko yun hi chalne do
kabhi zamaane se,kabi khud se hume ladne do

chain se tum so jao kuch pal pahlu me mere
dil ki andher bastiyon me apni ek jugnu mere naam ki chamakne do

!!

khuaish ji syperbbbbb replyyyyyyyyyyyyy Usual Smile


S.f Ji, Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Aapka Tehhhh Dillll Se Shukriya...
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2011, 05:36:50 PM »
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just fantastic Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2011, 05:53:31 PM »
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nice
Dil ko aaram deta hai.. ye dard tera, ise rahne do..
Hai bastiya andhero ki.. saare chirag khone do..
 
Sare hisab rahne do, ye dil ki baat rahne do....
Ho gayi hai raat bhi.. ab to jara sa sone do..
 
Barso ke bichde aaj hum jane kaise yun mile
Jo mile gaye hai aaj, to shaan ko bhigone do
 
Hawa hue sukun sab.. ab to jara aaram do
De na sake ek bhi khushi.. khawab hi sanjone do..

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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2011, 06:57:35 PM »
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superbbbb reply khwaish ji.....
bht bht.... bht khooooob.....
sply last one.....
thnx for such a beautiful reply....
& meri koshish pasand karne ka bht bht shukria....



You R Mostttttttt Welcome Priya & plz don't say thanks..

Aapne itna acha likha tha ke kuch koshish Main bhi kar gaya..

aapne padha, saraha..Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much!!! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2011, 07:17:30 PM »
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Priya di,

Bahaut bahaut khoob..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khwaish dost,
Kya baat hai..Pehli do lines itself sab kehgayi..
Kehna chahunga dil se, kay dil choo gayi..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #12 on: August 26, 2011, 08:28:50 PM »
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just superbbb priya & khwaish saheb.bahut achi jugalbandi ki hai aapne

i liked it very much Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2011, 07:38:13 PM »
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Dil ko aaram deta hai.. ye dard tera, ise rahne do..
Hai bastiya andhero ki.. saare chirag khone do..
 
Sare hisab rahne do, ye dil ki baat rahne do....
Ho gayi hai raat bhi.. ab to jara sa sone do..
 
Barso ke bichde aaj hum jane kaise yun mile
Jo mile gaye hai aaj, to shaan ko bhigone do
 
Hawa hue sukun sab.. ab to jara aaram do
De na sake ek bhi khushi.. khawab hi sanjone do..


GOOD ONE MANZIL
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2011, 07:39:46 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Priya..

Just Excellent!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Main Bhi kuch Iske jawaab mein Likhta Chalta Hoon..

Inn Andheri Bastiyon Mein bhi Koi chirag jalta Rahega
Tujhe Yaad kar Koi, Har Din Jeeta To Koi  Marta Rahega

Dil Ki Baat Dil Mein kab Tak Yuh Dabi Rahegi!!!
Labon Par Aakar Koi baat Rukhe To woh Tadapta Rahega

Barso Se Bichadkar Aaj Hum Mile Bhi To Kya Mile...??
Kaarwaan-e-safar To Bin Tere Har Haal Mein Chalta Rahega

Toote Hue Khwaab Aksar Palkon Ko Bahut Dard De Jaate Hai!!
"Khwaish" Waqt To Waqt Hai,Har Haal Mein Guzarta Rahega











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