~*~ Khwabon main ata hai koi ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on August 25, 2011, 07:02:43 PM
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Kabhi kabhi mohobat itna ghum de jati hai, kay dobara kisi ko chahne se pehle insaan kayi baar sochta hai, darta hai..Dil ko jaise umeed karne se darr lagta hai..

Yeh likhte hue, dil ne sirf uske bare main nahin socha jiske liye maine yeh likha hai balke woh ghum bhi kahin shamil tha, woh darr shamil tha kay dobara umeed lagana kitna jayaz hai..


Isse nayi shuruwat kahoun ya khokli umeed,
Khwabon main aj kal ane laga hai koi..

Raahein humari mila rahi hai zindagi,
Khayalon main aj kal samane laga hai koi..

Uska khayal ata hai toh muskura jata hoon,
Dil ko aj kal itna pasand ane laga hai koi..

Jiss raah-e-mohobat se ghum kay siva kuch na paya,
Aj dobara ussi raah par bulane laga hai koi..

Woh ab bhi hai anjaan aur dhooriyon par mujse,
Phir bhi zindagi main dhadkan ban’ne laga hai koi..

Juda juda si hai uski aur meri kismatein ‘Khamosh’..
Iss baat ki umeed bhi nahin kay agey badegi dastaan,
Haan mager itni khushi hai, kay mujko zinda karne laga hai koi..

Khwabon main har roz ane laga hai koi..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2011, 07:37:31 PM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Waah waah dil ko chhoo lene
waale ashaar kah diye aapne
bahut khoob dheron daad..

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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2011, 02:41:01 AM »
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hmm -- gud Usual Smile

ye padhne me achha laga --
aisa ho jata hai bhai--
dil hai aakhir--umeed jag hi jaati hai isme Usual Smile

wo aaj ek gana bhi suna kuch issi tarz par magr --
!
aye dil sambhal ja jara
   fir mohabbt karne chala hai tu ---
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aapke post ko daad

hanste rahiye hamesha Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2011, 05:33:24 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim Sahab...... Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2011, 06:30:00 PM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Waah waah dil ko chhoo lene
waale ashaar kah diye aapne
bahut khoob dheron daad..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

Satish jee,
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya..
Yunhi saath dete rahiyega..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2011, 06:46:56 PM »
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hmm -- gud Usual Smile

ye padhne me achha laga --
aisa ho jata hai bhai--
dil hai aakhir--umeed jag hi jaati hai isme Usual Smile

wo aaj ek gana bhi suna kuch issi tarz par magr --
!
aye dil sambhal ja jara
   fir mohabbt karne chala hai tu ---
!

aapke post ko daad

hanste rahiye hamesha Usual Smile
Teh Teh dil se shukriya Sarfira jee..
Woh gana toh behad khubsoorat hai..
Dil khush karne layak hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2011, 06:47:26 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Rahim Sahab...... Usual Smile

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Teh teh dil se shukriya Touhid jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2011, 07:01:34 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Bhai Rahim...

Jaise ke Maine Aapse Kaha..Badlav Zindagi ke liye Bhaut zaroori hai..bas iss Baat ka khayal rahe ke Iss Raah Par Chot Haasil Naa Ho..Rab Raakha!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2011, 07:03:58 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Bhai Rahim...

Jaise ke Maine Aapse Kaha..Badlav Zindagi ke liye Bhaut zaroori hai..bas iss Baat ka khayal rahe ke Iss Raah Par Chot Haasil Naa Ho..Rab Raakha!!!

Dost, raah-e-mohobat main chot toh lagni hi hai..
Hai na?
Khair, Rab Rakha..
Teh teh dil se shukriya..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2011, 02:28:49 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Rahim Saheb Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2011, 07:22:34 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah Rahim Saheb Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Teh teh dil se shukriya Kash jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2011, 07:38:59 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab... behad achche aur khub ahsaasat
bayaaN kiye hai aapne Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaaroN ke khayaal aur adaaygi khoob lagi hume
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye ... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2011, 07:56:08 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab... behad achche aur khub ahsaasat
bayaaN kiye hai aapne Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaaroN ke khayaal aur adaaygi khoob lagi hume
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye ... Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


Teh teh dil se shukriya Parwaaz jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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