"Khwaish" Ki Nazmein jab Tujhe Rulaaye!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Kabhi Kuch Ehsaas,Kuch Jazbaat Aise Hote hai
 Jinhe Bas Lafzon Mein Utaarne Ka Jee Karta hai..
bas Aise Hi Kuch Lafz,Kuch jazbaat Hai Jo Dil
se nikal kar kalam Par Utar Aaye Hai..



Aankh Jab Ashq Bahaye, Mujhe Likh Dena
Jab Meri yaad Sataye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Jab Koi Puche Tujhse Tera Haal-e-Dil,
Aur Jab Mera Naam tere Labon Par Aaye,Mujhe Likh dena

Jab Kabhi Tanhai mein Meri Yaadein Saataye
Tujhe Kabhi Mere Bin Jiya Na Jaaye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Baarish Ki Boondein Jab Koi Aag Si Seene Mein Lagaaye
Dard Bhara Ek Geet Sunaye Aur Tujhse Suna Na Jaye,Mujhe Likh Dena

Main Tere Kareeb Nahi Aur Tu mujhe Haasil Ho Aise Mere Naseeb Nahi!!!
Par Agar Mera Naam Tere Haathon Ki Lakeeron Se na Mit Paye, Mujhe Likh dena


Gar Teri Palkein Waffa Ke Moti Bahaye!!!!
Jab Teri Awaaz Mujh tak naa Pahunch Paaye!!!
Jab Tere Kadam Kisi Raah Par Ladkadaye!!!
Jab Dil Tanha Jeene Se Ghabraaye!!!
Jab Iss Duniya Ki Bheed mein Tera Mann Bhar Jaaye !!!

"Khwaish" Ki Nazmein Jab Tujhe Rulaaye, Mujhe Likh Dena......

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 09:12:17 AM »
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bhut hi umda hai khwaish jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


but iska jawab dene ki galati kar raha hu
ho sake to maaf kariye ga



aankhen aaj bhi roti hai
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko
yaden ab bhi tadpati hai
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko

bhut behaal ho gayi hai jindagi
sapne sare chhurr hue
hoton pe naam tumhara aaye
aur rone ko majbur hue
kitni sari baten hai dil me
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko

nahi ji sakti mai ek pal bhi
is barsaat ke mousam me
aakar bhar le bahon me apni
gunguna nagma bahon me
na jane kitne sapne hai
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko

bhale tu dur kahin hai mujhse
par fir bhi tu dil me chupa hai
tu mera hai , mai teri hu
yahi shabd har jagah likha hai
padh le aakar dil ki baten
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko


aap sabka
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 09:46:52 AM »
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lajawaab likha he khwaish bhaiii... bahut khoob.....

sach kahu eisa bahut kam hota he ki main kuchh padhkar usme ram jaun....aaj apko padhkar kai dino bad khoya sa mehsoos hua..achha laga~

mashallah kya coordination he words kaa...maja aa gaya padh kar~

kuchh koshish karta hun apni taraf se galtiyon ko sabhi maaf kijiyega~

jab saanse bojhal ho jayen
nain geele se itraayen
palko ko jab saanjh na soojhe
jab ankh ko moti sehlayen
jab jab man ki nabz ruke
or sawan tanha tadpaaye
pyar patjhad ke mausam ka
jab man ke patte le jaaye
dil ko koi raah na soojhe
bairan sheesha chillaye
tab tab mere geet suna karna
chup na rehena.... suno...sunooooo mujhe likha karna
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 11:01:23 AM »
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Salaam Dost..

Main kho gaya apki iss nazm main..Just tooooooooooooooo good yaar..Baar baar parrne ko jee karta hai..Bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khubsoorat..!
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Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2010, 11:02:20 AM »
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aapke is poem ki tareef nahin karungi....bas kuch likha hai padhke...umeed hai pasand aayegi...isme rhyme pe ya wordings ka khyal nahin rakh pai main..bas feelings hain jo dil me aai aapki poem padhke....


kuch saalon k baad kahan tum hoge kahan hum
lekin rahengi yaadein hamare dilon me hurdum
rulayengi hasayengi dengi khushi aur kabhi gum
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

akele hi jab baithe honge tum apne apno me
muskura rahe honge kisi khushi k mahoal me
ho jayengi kisi ki yaad se aankhein tab num
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

dard se bhari hogi ek bojhal si akeli shaam
tanha akele tute hue honge tum na hoga koi sath
khil jayenge achanak tumhare ye udaas se lub
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

barish ki bheegi bheegi si ek sharmai shaam me
car me jate hue sun rahe honge tum gazal koi
bhar aayengi aankhein aur khil jayegi muskaan
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

yunhi har chhoti badi baat me, kisi se hui mulakaat me
girte sambhalte hue haalat me,naachte hue kisiki baraat me
kisi gazal k sur taal me ,natkhat se bachche ki muskaan me
sagar se uthti lehron me, indradhanush k 7 rangon me

apne chehre ko dekh aaine me, aankhon me aai chamak me
main tumhe dikh jaungi, khudme hi nazar main aaungi
haan uss ek pal me aur aise hi jeewan k har ek pal me
tere khyalon me honge sirf hum haan hum aur sirf hum….!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 11:02:39 AM »
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Rahi jee aur Abhi jee,

Bahaut khoobsurat..
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2010, 11:05:17 AM »
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aapke is poem ki tareef nahin karungi....bas kuch likha hai padhke...umeed hai pasand aayegi...isme rhyme pe ya wordings ka khyal nahin rakh pai main..bas feelings hain jo dil me aai aapki poem padhke....


kuch saalon k baad kahan tum hoge kahan hum
lekin rahengi yaadein hamare dilon me hurdum
rulayengi hasayengi dengi khushi aur kabhi gum
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

akele hi jab baithe honge tum apne apno me
muskura rahe honge kisi khushi k mahoal me
ho jayengi kisi ki yaad se aankhein tab num
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

dard se bhari hogi ek bojhal si akeli shaam
tanha akele tute hue honge tum na hoga koi sath
khil jayenge achanak tumhare ye udaas se lub
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

barish ki bheegi bheegi si ek sharmai shaam me
car me jate hue sun rahe honge tum gazal koi
bhar aayengi aankhein aur khil jayegi muskaan
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

yunhi har chhoti badi baat me, kisi se hui mulakaat me
girte sambhalte hue haalat me,naachte hue kisiki baraat me
kisi gazal k sur taal me ,natkhat se bachche ki muskaan me
sagar se uthti lehron me, indradhanush k 7 rangon me

apne chehre ko dekh aaine me, aankhon me aai chamak me
main tumhe dikh jaungi, khudme hi nazar main aaungi
haan uss ek pal me aur aise hi jeewan k har ek pal me
tere khyalon me honge sirf hum haan hum aur sirf hum….!!!!
Di,

bahaut bahaut khubsoorat..
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2010, 11:18:34 AM »
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aapke is poem ki tareef nahin karungi....bas kuch likha hai padhke...umeed hai pasand aayegi...isme rhyme pe ya wordings ka khyal nahin rakh pai main..bas feelings hain jo dil me aai aapki poem padhke....


kuch saalon k baad kahan tum hoge kahan hum
lekin rahengi yaadein hamare dilon me hurdum
rulayengi hasayengi dengi khushi aur kabhi gum
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

akele hi jab baithe honge tum apne apno me
muskura rahe honge kisi khushi k mahoal me
ho jayengi kisi ki yaad se aankhein tab num
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

dard se bhari hogi ek bojhal si akeli shaam
tanha akele tute hue honge tum na hoga koi sath
khil jayenge achanak tumhare ye udaas se lub
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

barish ki bheegi bheegi si ek sharmai shaam me
car me jate hue sun rahe honge tum gazal koi
bhar aayengi aankhein aur khil jayegi muskaan
haan tab tumhare khyalon me honge sirf hum

yunhi har chhoti badi baat me, kisi se hui mulakaat me
girte sambhalte hue haalat me,naachte hue kisiki baraat me
kisi gazal k sur taal me ,natkhat se bachche ki muskaan me
sagar se uthti lehron me, indradhanush k 7 rangon me

apne chehre ko dekh aaine me, aankhon me aai chamak me
main tumhe dikh jaungi, khudme hi nazar main aaungi
haan uss ek pal me aur aise hi jeewan k har ek pal me
tere khyalon me honge sirf hum haan hum aur sirf hum….!!!!

Anu, Aapne To Ek chalti-Phirti Zindagi ka nakhsa Hi Utaar Kar rakh Diya..Aapne Jo Likha Hai,Woh Ek Aaena Hai Zindagi ka..Agar Aapke nazm ko Dil se padha Jaaye Insaan Ki Aankhein Nam Zaroor ho jaayegi..
mujhe Iss Nazm Ki sabse Khoobsurat Baat Yeh lagi Ke Aapne Waakai mein Roz-Aana Zindagi Se Juudi Hui Baatein Likhi hai..Yoindia mein Yeh Aapki Dusri poetry hai Jo Mujhe Itniiiiiiiii Zyaada pasand Aayi ke mere paas Koi Lafz nahi..
Aapke Iss Nazm ko mera Salam

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«Reply #8 on: October 12, 2010, 11:19:13 AM »
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Kabhi Kuch Ehsaas,Kuch Jazbaat Aise Hote hai Jinhe Bas Lafzon Mein Utaarne Ka Jee Karta hai..
bas Aise Hi Kuch Lafz,Kuch jazbaat Hai Jo Dil
se nikal kar kalam Par Utar gaye Hai..

Aankh Jab Ashq Bahaye, Mujhe Likh Dena
Jab Meri yaad Sataye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Jab Koi Puche Tujhse Tera Haal-e-Dil,
Aur Jab Mera Naam tere Labon Par Aaye, Mujhe Likh dena

Jab Kabhi Tanhai mein Meri Yaadein Saataye
Tujhe Kabhi Mere Bin Jiya Na Jaaye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Baarish Ki Boondein Jab Koi Aag Si Seene Mein Lagaaye
Dard Bhara Ek Geet Sunaye Aur Tujhse Suna Na Jaye,Mujhe Likh Dena

Main Tere Kareeb Nahi Aur Tu mujhe Haasil Ho Aise Mere Naseeb Nahi!!!
Par Agar Mera Naam Tere Haathon Ki Lakeeron Se na Mit Paye, Mujhe Likh dena


Gar Teri Palkein Waffa Ke Moti Bahaye!!!!
Jab Teri Awaaz Mujh tak naa Pahunch Paaye!!!
Jab Tere Kadam Kisi Raah Par Ladkadaye!!!
Jab Dil Tanha Jeene Se Ghabraaye!!!
Jab Iss Duniya Ki Bheed mein Tera Mann Ghabraye!!!

"Khwaish" Ki Nazmein Jab Tujhe Rulaaye, Mujhe Likh dena......

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Teri nazmon main parr kar dard “Khwaish’,
Mujse kuch likha nahin jata..

Dard maine bhi bahaut paya hai ae dost,
Bas kuch chand lavzon main who jataya nahin jata..

Mujhe bana le apna phir se, bahaut tanha hoon main,
Ae Zalim, apnon ko yun sataya nahin jata..

Naam tera labon par aye na aye, dil main sada rehta hai,
Mohobat bahaut karta hoon tujse, bas mujse dikhaya nahin jata..

‘Khamosh’ ilteja karta hai tujse kay laut aa aye Zalim,
Dekh tu, dilon ko yun rulaya nahin jata..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #9 on: October 12, 2010, 11:22:22 AM »
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Teri nazmon main parr kar dard “Khwaish’,
Mujse kuch likha nahin jata..

Dard maine bhi bahaut paya hai ae dost,
Bas kuch chand lavzon main who jataya nahin jata..

Mujhe bana le apna phir se, bahaut tanha hoon main,
Ae Zalim, apnon ko yun sataya nahin jata..

Naam tera labon par aye na aye, dil main sada rehta hai,
Mohobat bahaut karta hoon tujse, bas mujse dikhaya nahin jata..

‘Khamosh’ ilteja karta hai tujse kay laut aa aye Zalim,
Dekh tu, dilon ko yun rulaya nahin jata..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Kya Baat Hai Bhai Rahim!!!!! Lajawaab!!!

Jeeo mere Bhai!!! Bahut bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2010, 11:23:08 AM »
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Shukriya mere Dost..!
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2010, 11:36:52 AM »
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Anu, Aapne To Ek chalti-Phirti Zindagi ka nakhsa Hi Utaar Kar rakh Diya..Aapne Jo Likha Hai,Woh Ek Aaena Hai Zindagi ka..Agar Aapke nazm ko Dil se padha Jaaye Insaan Ki Aankhein Nam Zaroor ho jaayegi..
mujhe Iss Nazm Ki sabse Khoobsurat Baat Yeh lagi Ke Aapne Waakai mein Roz-Aana Zindagi Se Juudi Hui Baatein Likhi hai..Yoindia mein Yeh Aapki Dusri poetry hai Jo Mujhe Itniiiiiiiii Zyaada pasand Aayi ke mere paas Koi Lafz nahi..
Aapke Iss Nazm ko mera Salam

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main kin lafzon me aapka shukriya adaa karun khwaish ji...aapne ise itna pasand kiya k aapki tareef padhke meri aankehin num ho gai...thnx alot ji....
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2010, 11:54:17 AM »
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bhut hi umda hai khwaish jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


but iska jawab dene ki galati kar raha hu
ho sake to maaf kariye ga



aankhen aaj bhi roti hai
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko
yaden ab bhi tadpati hai
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko

bhut behaal ho gayi hai jindagi
sapne sare chhurr hue
hoton pe naam tumhara aaye
aur rone ko majbur hue
kitni sari baten hai dil me
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko

nahi ji sakti mai ek pal bhi
is barsaat ke mousam me
aakar bhar le bahon me apni
gunguna nagma bahon me
na jane kitne sapne hai
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko

bhale tu dur kahin hai mujhse
par fir bhi tu dil me chupa hai
tu mera hai , mai teri hu
yahi shabd har jagah likha hai
padh le aakar dil ki baten
kaise likh kar bhejon tumko


aap sabka
~~~~~~~~~~Rahi~~~~~~~~~~

Bahut Bahut Khoob Raahiji..

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«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2010, 12:03:36 PM »
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Kabhi Kuch Ehsaas,Kuch Jazbaat Aise Hote hai Jinhe Bas Lafzon Mein Utaarne Ka Jee Karta hai..
bas Aise Hi Kuch Lafz,Kuch jazbaat Hai Jo Dil
se nikal kar kalam Par Utar gaye Hai..

Aankh Jab Ashq Bahaye, Mujhe Likh Dena
Jab Meri yaad Sataye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Jab Koi Puche Tujhse Tera Haal-e-Dil,
Aur Jab Mera Naam tere Labon Par Aaye, Mujhe Likh dena

Jab Kabhi Tanhai mein Meri Yaadein Saataye
Tujhe Kabhi Mere Bin Jiya Na Jaaye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Baarish Ki Boondein Jab Koi Aag Si Seene Mein Lagaaye
Dard Bhara Ek Geet Sunaye Aur Tujhse Suna Na Jaye,Mujhe Likh Dena

Main Tere Kareeb Nahi Aur Tu mujhe Haasil Ho Aise Mere Naseeb Nahi!!!
Par Agar Mera Naam Tere Haathon Ki Lakeeron Se na Mit Paye, Mujhe Likh dena


Gar Teri Palkein Waffa Ke Moti Bahaye!!!!
Jab Teri Awaaz Mujh tak naa Pahunch Paaye!!!
Jab Tere Kadam Kisi Raah Par Ladkadaye!!!
Jab Dil Tanha Jeene Se Ghabraaye!!!
Jab Iss Duniya Ki Bheed mein Tera Mann Ghabraye!!!

"Khwaish" Ki Nazmein Jab Tujhe Rulaaye, Mujhe Likh dena......

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob khwaish ji........behetareen ji..........
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«Reply #14 on: October 12, 2010, 12:27:14 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji.. ek alag andaaz, ek nayo soch.... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!

Kabhi Kuch Ehsaas,Kuch Jazbaat Aise Hote hai Jinhe Bas Lafzon Mein Utaarne Ka Jee Karta hai..
bas Aise Hi Kuch Lafz,Kuch jazbaat Hai Jo Dil
se nikal kar kalam Par Utar gaye Hai..

Aankh Jab Ashq Bahaye, Mujhe Likh Dena
Jab Meri yaad Sataye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Jab Koi Puche Tujhse Tera Haal-e-Dil,
Aur Jab Mera Naam tere Labon Par Aaye, Mujhe Likh dena

Jab Kabhi Tanhai mein Meri Yaadein Saataye
Tujhe Kabhi Mere Bin Jiya Na Jaaye, Mujhe Likh Dena

Baarish Ki Boondein Jab Koi Aag Si Seene Mein Lagaaye
Dard Bhara Ek Geet Sunaye Aur Tujhse Suna Na Jaye,Mujhe Likh Dena

Main Tere Kareeb Nahi Aur Tu mujhe Haasil Ho Aise Mere Naseeb Nahi!!!
Par Agar Mera Naam Tere Haathon Ki Lakeeron Se na Mit Paye, Mujhe Likh dena


Gar Teri Palkein Waffa Ke Moti Bahaye!!!!
Jab Teri Awaaz Mujh tak naa Pahunch Paaye!!!
Jab Tere Kadam Kisi Raah Par Ladkadaye!!!
Jab Dil Tanha Jeene Se Ghabraaye!!!
Jab Iss Duniya Ki Bheed mein Tera Mann Ghabraye!!!

"Khwaish" Ki Nazmein Jab Tujhe Rulaaye, Mujhe Likh dena......

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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