"Khwaish" Rishto Ki Mehak Zinda Ho To Wahi Zindagi Hai!!!!

by khwaish on January 24, 2011, 02:24:37 PM
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Yeh Topic Par Likhna Mere Liye Asaan Nahi Kyonki Kabhi-Kabhi hum Jo Dekhte Hai, mehsoos karte Hai Unn Jazbo ko Lafz Dena Mushkil Ho Jaata hai, Koshish Ki Hai Ke Dil ki Baat Likh Sakoon..Yeh Topic Hai "Separation" Ke Adhaar par..Do Log Jo Saath The Par Phir Alag hue,Aur phir Aaj saath Hai Par Sirf Apni Zimmedariyon Ko Nibhaane Ke Liye..Kuch Haqeeqat Se Rubaroo Hokar Yeh Likh Raha hoon..


Milkar Bhi Kyon Tu mujhse Juda Sa lagta Hai
Saath To hai Mere par Kuch Khafa Sa lagta Hai

Labon Se Tune Kabhi Koi Shikayat Naa Ki!!!
Par Dil mein Tere sawaalo ka Ek Tufaan Sa Lagta hai

Ek waqt Tha Jab Teri Aankhon Se Hum Yeh Duniya Dekh Lete The!!!
Par Ab Aaene mein Apna Chehra Bhi Humein Badala Sa Lagta hai

Aaj Tu Khush Hai Yeh jaankar Main Bhi Khush Hoon!!!
Par Inn Khushiyon Ki Aad mein Mera Gham Jaise Daba Sa Lagta hai

Chalo!!! Aaj Hum Apni Zimeddariyon Ko Nibhaate Chale!!!
Aankein Royi Hai To Kya Hua, Chehra To Apna Khila Sa Lagta Hai

Tujhko Iss jahan Ki Har Ek Khushi Naseeb Ho!!!
Tu Mujse Bichda Bhi Hai To Koi Gham Nahi!!!
Mujhe Tu Aaj Bhi Apna Sa Lagta Hai...

"Khwaish" Rishto Ki Mehak Zinda Ho To Wahi Zindagi Hai Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
 Bin Rishto Ke Jeena Bhi Iss Duniya Mein Be-wajah Sa Lagta Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2011, 02:44:35 PM »
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Very Impressive ... Very Touching ...... Khwaish Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad hazir hai .... Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2011, 04:01:20 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on January 24, 2011, 02:44:35 PM
Very Impressive ... Very Touching ...... Khwaish Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad hazir hai .... Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Anshumali Ji Jo Aaapne Apna Keemti Waqt Diya..

Inn Ehsaaso Ko Samajhne ke liye Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2011, 04:05:16 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 24, 2011, 02:24:37 PM
Yeh Topic Par Likhna Mere Liye Asaan Nahi Kyonki Kabhi-Kabhi hum Jo Dekhte Hai, mehsoos karte Hai Unn Jazbo ko Lafz Dena Mushkil Ho Jaata hai, Koshish Ki Hai Ke Dil ki Baat Likh Sakoon..Yeh Topic Hai "Separation" Ke Adhaar par..Do Log Jo Saath The Par Phir Alag hue,Aur phir Aaj saath Hai Par Sirf Apni Zimmedariyon Ko Nibhaane Ke Liye..Kuch Haqeeqat Se Rubaroo Hokar Yeh Likh Raha hoon..


Milkar Bhi Kyon Tu mujhse Juda Sa lagta Hai
Saath To hai Mere par Kuch Khafa Sa lagta Hai

Labon Se Tune Kabhi Koi Shikayat Naa Ki!!!
Par Dil mein Tere sawaalo ka Ek Tufaan Sa Lagta hai

Ek waqt Tha Jab Teri Aankhon Se Hum Yeh Duniya Dekh Lete The!!!
Par Ab Aaene mein Apna Chehra Bhi Humein Badala Sa Lagta hai

Aaj Tu Khush Hai Yeh jaankar Main Bhi Khush Hoon!!!
Par Inn Khushiyon Ki Aad mein Mera Gham Jaise Daba Sa Lagta hai

Chalo!!! Aaj Hum Apni Zimeddariyon Ko Nibhaate Chale!!!
Aankein Royi Hai To Kya Hua, Chehra To Apna Khila Sa Lagta Hai

Tujhko Iss jahan Ki Har Ek Khushi Naseeb Ho!!!
Tu Mujse Bichda Bhi Hai To Koi Gham Nahi!!!
Mujhe Tu Aaj Bhi Apna Sa Lagta Hai...

"Khwaish" Rishto Ki Mehak Zinda Ho To Wahi Zindagi Hai Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
 Bin Rishto Ke Jeena Bhi Iss Duniya Mein Be-wajah Sa Lagta Hai..
 
                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut changi gal te topic chukeya hai tusi..rishte jad es mod te hunde ne te zindgi nu suljhana bada mushkil ho janda hai eselayi har rishte de vich gehri understanding hona bahut zaruri hunda hai jab sanu support karan wala koi saade kol hunda hai te zindgi hor vi sunder lagdi hai...bahut acha likheya hai tusi...
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2011, 07:15:39 PM »
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"Ankhein royi hai toh kya, chehra toh khila sa lagta hai.."

Kya sahi topic chuna hai Khwaish Dost..
bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
Dil choo liya apna hamesha ki tarha..
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Dil dil se daad..
khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2011, 07:24:41 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye



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«Reply #6 on: January 24, 2011, 07:43:15 PM »
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Ek choti si koshish iska jawab dene ki..
bahaut dino baad kisi nazm kay jawab main kuch likh raha hoon..

Main tujse khafa toh nahin mager juda zaroor hoon,
Bichad gaye jo ek baar toh jazbaat badal jaya karte hai..

Tu bhale muskurahat saja le labon par mager sach hai yeh,
Toote jo dil toh muskurate chehre dafan hojaya karte hai..

Tu aur main aj bhi haath thame hue hai lekin kahin suna tha,
Aa jaye jo dararein; toh rishte aksar khatam hojaya karte hai..

Aj tootne kay baad tu kehta hai ‘mujhe tu aj bhi apna sa lagta hai’,
Ehsas jo waqt pe na darshaya jaye woh aksar adhure rehjaya karte hai..

Tu toh leh main doobke main najane kya kya likh jata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager hum teri nazmon main ban bewaffa badnaam hojaya karte hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #7 on: January 24, 2011, 08:42:06 PM »
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bahut khoob khwaish bhai... bahut khubsurat...

Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2011, 08:42:54 PM »
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Rahim bhai kya kahe... bahut khubsurat jawaab aapka... mehfile sajaate rehiye...

Intezar !

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 24, 2011, 07:43:15 PM
Ek choti si koshish iska jawab dene ki..
bahaut dino baad kisi nazm kay jawab main kuch likh raha hoon..

Main tujse khafa toh nahin mager juda zaroor hoon,
Bichad gaye jo ek baar toh jazbaat badal jaya karte hai..

Tu bhale muskurahat saja le labon par mager sach hai yeh,
Toote jo dil toh muskurate chehre dafan hojaya karte hai..

Tu aur main aj bhi haath thame hue hai lekin kahin suna tha,
Aa jaye jo dararein; toh rishte aksar khatam hojaya karte hai..

Aj tootne kay baad tu kehta hai ‘mujhe tu aj bhi apna sa lagta hai’,
Ehsas jo waqt pe na darshaya jaye woh aksar adhure rehjaya karte hai..

Tu toh leh main doobke main najane kya kya likh jata hai ‘Khamosh’,
Mager hum teri nazmon main ban bewaffa badnaam hojaya karte hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 08:51:55 PM »
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Quote from: Intezar on January 24, 2011, 08:42:54 PM
Rahim bhai kya kahe... bahut khubsurat jawaab aapka... mehfile sajaate rehiye...

Intezar !

Apka teh dil se shukriya Intezar jee..
khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2011, 06:42:15 AM »
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bahot khoob khwiash ji.........bahot hi umda peshkash.daad kabul kare
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2011, 08:27:35 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 24, 2011, 04:05:16 PM
Bahut changi gal te topic chukeya hai tusi..rishte jad es mod te hunde ne te zindgi nu suljhana bada mushkil ho janda hai eselayi har rishte de vich gehri understanding hona bahut zaruri hunda hai jab sanu support karan wala koi saade kol hunda hai te zindgi hor vi sunder lagdi hai...bahut acha likheya hai tusi...

Tuada Teh Dil To Shukarguzaar Haan Geetji, Tuada Eh Gallan Naal Eh Saaf Zaahir Honda Hai Ke tussi Iss kavita De Ehsaas Nuu bakhoobi Samjheya Hai..Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much Ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2011, 09:19:28 AM »
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Khuwahish ji--
kya kamaal ki rachna hai aapki.
ek ek lafz haqeeqat hai.
kuch feel hua ye padh ke .
sahi me Lajawaab hai.
hats off to u dear.
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Rahim bhai aapke bhi kya kahne--aisa umda reply --
bas gazab ka aur bilkul haqeeqati lafz--aisa lagta hai jaise dono post ek jagah se aye ho.
bahut umda.
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2011, 11:36:47 AM »
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Rahim bhai aapke bhi kya kahne--aisa umda reply --
bas gazab ka aur bilkul haqeeqati lafz--aisa lagta hai jaise dono post ek jagah se aye ho.
bahut umda.
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Teh teh dil se shukriya Killbill jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2011, 04:07:19 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on January 24, 2011, 07:15:39 PM
"Ankhein royi hai toh kya, chehra toh khila sa lagta hai.."

Kya sahi topic chuna hai Khwaish Dost..
bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
Dil choo liya apna hamesha ki tarha..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Dil dil se daad..
khush rahiye..!

Bhai Rahim, Aapka Tehhhhhhhhhhhhh Dilllllllllll Se Shukriya..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega Dost!!! icon_flower
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